102. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives,
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and
Logical predication + Rhetorical construction
This sentence awkwardly presents two phrases intended to modify Beatrix Potter and loses the clarity and logic of the meaning. In the original sentence, these modifiers sound choppy and create too much separation between the subject, Beatrix Potter, and the verb capitalized. Beginning the sentence with
in her book illustrations and following that phrase with the relative clause which she carefully coordinated with her narratives allows the subject, Beatrix Potter, to be united with the verb, capitalized, for a stronger main clause.
A The modifying elements are poorly placed and leave the subject too far from the verb
B Phrase carefully coordinating ... illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it
(book illustrations); Potter, not the illustrations, did the coordinating; awkward and unclear
C Correct. The correct placement of the modifying elements makes this sentence easier to understand; the use of which clearly links the two elements.
D Carefully coordinated ... absurdly modifies
Beatrix Potter rather than her illustrations
E
Them cannot refer to book illustrations because
the plural noun is the object of the preposition
in;
the relationships among the parts of the
sentence are unclear
请问黄色部分的意思是说，代词只可以指代主句中的名词么？
PS：之前的帖子看过了，不太明白，谢谢指教！
代词优先指代主句主语，到底指代谁，具体情况具体看，变化很大
in her book illustrations介词短语在原句中处于插入语位置，代词指代说什么也轮不到它。
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