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作者: raikey 时间: 2007-5-26 23:44
标题: [求助]TTGWD17-18

Q18:

Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.
With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.

Answer:

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问问B错哪了？

从Dictionary.com上查到:

"7.
in addition to, as well as; besides."

如此，Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, as well as several improvements in blowing machinery.　还有什么错吗？

请高人指点一二！

作者: raikey 时间: 2007-5-27 00:59

又想到一点：
A中说"Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and
because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore."
简单地说就是"output tripled是improvements的结果并且因为coal代替了charcoal",那么"output tripled"到底是"improvements"的直接结果，还是"coal代替了charcoal"的直接结果，亦或是这两者共同导致的结果？

用数学符号表示，就是"improvements =>output tripled"，还是"coal代替了charcoal=>output tripled"，亦或是"improvements & coal代替了charcoal =>output tripled"?

A的表述无法区分上述情况．我想原题是想说＂两者共同导致了output tripled＂．
只有B才能清楚地表达这个意思．

作者: raikey 时间: 2007-5-27 22:28
顶

作者: raikey 时间: 2007-5-28 01:16
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作者: raikey 时间: 2007-5-28 11:49

再顶.

都没遇到这题吗?

作者: raikey 时间: 2007-5-28 23:34

SOS

作者: will_kk 时间: 2007-5-30 00:46

我说两句吧，这道题本来我也想发帖问的：

查了下讨论贴，发现A,C争议很大，很少有像lz执著于B哈

首先，我对B得看法是，in addition to，比较奇怪，如果要表达和前面的原因并列的另一个原因应该不用逗号的，这样有修饰整个句子的嫌疑

我赞成的是A,觉得是和OG里面那道，partly to acquire...and partly because...可能有异曲同工之妙，呵呵，纯属猜测

对于另一个争议答案C，我觉得with sth's being done这个结构不好，特别是sth's，有这个必要么？with有这个用法~？？

作者: raikey 时间: 2007-5-30 22:51

谢谢楼上的回答.

对于这题,我仍然是一头雾水,只希望考试时别遇到它.

作者: bluetrip 时间: 2007-6-16 16:57

我也选的B，虽然A除了不对称没什么错，但B我也找不到什么错……

作者: chamcham 时间: 2007-6-17 05:23
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作者: sweetjenny 时间: 2007-6-19 20:00
due to the replacement 错

作者: chanx_ceci 时间: 2007-8-21 14:42
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作者: chanx_ceci 时间: 2007-8-21 14:47

对于B，我感觉be due to 不太好，如果表示因果关系应该尽量用because

再者，in addition to 也不好，如果表示并列应该用and

对于C，我感觉With charcoal’s being 是让人觉得很awkward的

所以我选择A

请指教

作者: qianrene 时间: 2007-10-12 16:41

觉得选B

43. Paleontologist Stephen Jay Gould has argued that many biological traits are not the products of natural selection, favored due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are simply random by-products of other evolutionary developments.

A due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are

B due to the reproduction or survival they enhance, but they are

C because they enhance reproduction or survival, but

D because they enhance reproduction or survival, but are

E because of enhancing reproduction or survival, but are

A: due to + 动作名词不够有效；

B: 同上

C: but分句后面没有动词, 会让人产生和because they enhance … but …的歧义

D: correct

E: because of + doing 一定错

注意：

1、 due to，because of 都是连词because的迷惑选项

but… 的对称有两种都语法说的通

156. Part of the proposed increase in state education spending is due to[DS1] higher enrollment, since the number of students in public schools have grown steadily since the mid-1980’s and, at nearly 47 million, are at a record high.

A. enrollment, since the number of students in public schools have grown steadily since the mid-1980’s and, at nearly 47 million, are at

B. enrollment, with a number of students in public schools growing steadily since the mid-1980’s and, at nearly 47 million, reaching

C. enrollment: since students in public schools have grown steadily since the mid-1980’s and, at nearly 47 million, have reached

D. enrollment: the number of students in public schools has grown steadily since the mid-1980’s and, at nearly 47 million, has reached

E. enrollment: students in public schools have grown steadily in number since the mid-1980’s and, at nearly 47 million, are at

A: the number要用has

B: with不好；a number of 改变句意

C: students grown不符合逻辑

D: correct

E: 同上

注意：

1、有：；时优先看这些标点符号的选项

2、students不能grow，the number能；

[DS1]说明DUE TO一定要用在主谓结构里

而不是因为DUE TO加动作名词不够有效

enrollment也是动作名词呢

这题觉得In addition to和and都可以用，虽然强调意味变了点，但是还是并列

A的as a result of and because觉得一个是介词结构，一个是原因状语从句结构不能并列

而OG的养牛那题两个都是介词结构~~

作者: guozili 时间: 2007-10-21 00:49

B是最好的，其他都有严重语法错误，B就是tripling用的不好，但是不好不代表错误。关于due to大家读读写作黄金80题，多少due to+名词

A 的and because就是严重错误，and一定要连接平行结构，如果是单纯的连词，连接两个句子，第2个句子又有主语，那么and前一定要加逗号，这是og叨叨了无数遍的东西。

C是OG上最最典型的awkward结构，另外谁能说说with的逻辑意思的主题是谁，是with谁？逻辑意思是判断一个句子是否正确的优先级最高的依据。

D后半句没连词

Ewhich指代不清。

作者: sch 时间: 2007-11-5 14:24
同意楼上的,和我想的一样.
尤其是AC的分析....

A: and前后不对称一个介词短语,一个because从句...
C,with我没多看,觉得逻辑主语可能有歧义就杀了.

作者: rorarora 时间: 2008-8-10 10:50
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作者: georgetseng 时间: 2008-8-10 12:44
每个选项都有问题，所以觉得是A)：按Kaplan的说法，看不出好坏，还是选原来的。

作者: 岳如初 时间: 2008-10-9 23:57

以下是引用sweetjenny在2007-6-19 20:00:00的发言：
due to the replacement 错

我也选的B，但是看了半天还是觉得没有人解释明白为什么B错

这位同学能解释的再清楚一点么？

作者: freshopenair 时间: 2008-10-26 17:21
B答案中replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel 我觉得没有用as the fuel好。

作者: tichondrius 时间: 2008-12-10 13:19

很明显,B中的tripling不合适。根据og中有提到，一个动词若是有其名词形式，就不能有动词+ing表示其名词形式。

triple的名词很明显是triplication。

作者: 门萨来了 时间: 2008-12-10 14:17

我觉得B的歧异在于in addition to引导的结构不知道是跟前边的a tripling in the average output of ironwork 平行还是跟后边的 replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel 平行,语法上都可以,逻辑上跟前者平行讲不通了

作者: lyannlam 时间: 2009-4-24 18:40

我也认为A中and的前后结构不一致，这是prep里很强调的一点啊，请问谁能解释一下？？

作者: elaine1031 时间: 2009-7-30 14:19
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作者: cymissiloveu 时间: 2009-8-1 16:36
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作者: jillchenyy 时间: 2009-10-16 12:55

这个。。。。看了好多贴好像没有一个统一的说法，究竟B怎么了，A的平行问题又怎么解释？

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