Prep 68 有名词不能用动名词？ - ChaseDream

有没有那位大虾能够解释一下C为什么不行，难道有名词就不能动词？OG上面有这样用得呀(见下面)，我当时觉得Prep的原则是能平行尽量平行（尽管很多题目也有不平行的答案，但是这都是平行的答案有问题的情况下才选不平行的），所以为了迎合后面的clearing而选择了C

68. The cottontail rabbit population in Orange County, California, has increased unchecked in recent years as a result of the removal of the native fox population and the clearing of surrounding woodlands.

1、 as a result of + 名词，等同于resulting from +名词，尽管效率上稍微差一点点

以下是引用charismale在2007-4-14 17:32:00的发言：

对，按照XDF老师的说法：

动词〉形容词〉抽象名词〉分词、动名词〉定语从句

可是如果用这种“规律”做prep基本上是死无全尸，og一题，也是用了动名词，但是说明了有名词的情况下（rise就是名词）还是可能要动名词阿。。。

52. The rising of costs of data-processing operations at many financial institutions has created a growing opportunity for independent companies to provide these services more efficiently and at lower cost.

C is the best choice. In choice A, The rising of costs is unidiomatic and in B costs... has lacks subject-verb agreement. Choices D and E produce sentence fragments since Because makes the clause subordinate rather than independent.

150. In the mid-1960's a newly installed radar warning system mistook the rising of the moon as a massive missile attack by the Soviets.

Choice B is best because it alone correctly handles the idiom to mistake x for y. Though choice D manages the correct preposition, for, the phrase the moon as it was rising for is less efficient and precise than the phrasing of choice B: since rising functions as a verb in D, the phrase for
a massive... attack now seems to modify rising rather than mistook. Choice C incorrectly uses mistook... to, and choices A and E incorrectly use mistake ... as.
Choice E also employs the nonidiomatic rise of the moon.

以下是引用YY_lalala在2007-4-14 20:54:00的发言：
OG52这个题目the rising of costs是错误选项啊，LZ想用这题说明什么？

以下是引用kaross在2007-4-14 17:27:00的发言：

A. years as a result of the removal of

B. years as a result of removing

C. years, resulting from the removing of

D. years, which is result of removing

E. years, which is a result of the removal of

A: correct

B: removing 分词结构和后面the clearing of名词结构不对称

C: the removing 动名词应该改removal

D: which没指代

E: which 没指代

注意：

1、 as a result of + 名词，等同于resulting from +名词，尽管效率上稍微差一点点

2、有名词表达的，不用动名词表达

3、表目的的状语成分，经常用which来做迷惑选项

rise本身就是名词阿，但是为了强调动作OG 还是用了rising

同问，这题的讨论还没有结果啊，请大家继续讨论一下好不好？

或者谁能画一下句子的结构？是否我们理解错了平行的对象？

The cottontail rabbit population in Orange County, California, has increased unchecked in recent years as a result of the removal of the native fox population and the clearing of surrounding woodlands.

那种California 的Orange County的野兔的数量在近年大大增加，是由于当地的狐狸的数量的removal 以及周围森林的清除而导致的结果

猜想： A 中的removal是否也有表达既定事实或状态的意思？而后面的clearing是表示周围的森林正在被清除？

The cottontail rabbit population in Orange County, California, has increased unchecked in recent years as a result of the removal of the native fox population and the clearing of surrounding woodlands.

红色字体那里的 “the clearing” 是定冠词+ 动名词，= 名词！！！！和clearing有很大区别， clearing才是现在分词；

因此，要与后面的the clearing对称前面就必须要名词 removal !!! ==> 真是不好意思，还大惊小怪的发了短信给闹闹版主了。。。