Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride.
A. Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,
B. Minivans, which carry as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, they cost less,
C. Minivans carry as many as seven passengers, in comparison with most sport utility vehicles, and have a lower cost, they
D. Minivans, carrying as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,
E. Minivans, which carry as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles the cost is lower, and they
A,多了and;又出现夹心修饰:compared with可以指carry也可以指cost
compared指的是主语Minivans怎么会指谓语动词carry和cost呢?不解
我觉得A挺好:M能载七个人,同时和SUV相比(插入语)价格更便宜.....
反而D感觉怪怪的
那位NN指点一下
我觉得A不平行
A的结构是
Minivans carry.... and cost less, get better....., allow....., and have.....
不太明白你的意思
你指的是出现了两个and?
我觉得没什么吧,一个主语带两个大并列,后面一个又有四个小并列,谓语动词也挺平行的
是否有定论?
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