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作者: alsokkk 时间: 2007-4-2 23:12
标题: 无重复22套 GWD1-Q34
GWD1-Q34:
Although people
in France consume fatty
foods at a rate comparable to the United States,
their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.
- people in France
consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their - people in France
and the United States
consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the - fatty foods are consumed by people in
France at a comparable
rate to the United
States’s, their - the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the
same, the - the rate of people consuming fatty
foods is about the same in France
and the United States,
the
答案是B, 请问D为什么不对
作者: jason_jufe 时间: 2007-4-2 23:53
A: their has no clear reference;
B: the best.at the same rate is the correct idiom.
C: at a comparable rate to the US's is awkward and wordy. thier has no clear reference;passive voice is weak.
D: the inverted word order only contributes to the incoherence of the phrases; wordy and redundant.
E: wordy and redundant. people consuming fatty foods can not modify rate.
作者: 遥远的绿洲 时间: 2007-4-3 08:19
选项D只是说明了fatty food在法国和美国消费,缺少一个people,所以不知道是人消费掉还是其他什么消费掉了,选项B意思更清晰
作者: alsokkk 时间: 2007-4-3 09:23
非常清楚。谢谢二位!
作者: 阿土莎莎 时间: 2007-11-9 00:22
作者: zhiyinfeifei 时间: 2008-1-3 13:41
3x
作者: jj_banana 时间: 2008-5-17 16:59
同问~我选的是d, 另一个原因是和后面的主句结构也保持了一致。
d是错误的理由是不是因为d没有了people会使原文的意思发生改变?
作者: angelsgx 时间: 2008-8-6 00:24
E中的the rate of people consuming其中consuming是修饰people,而people是the rate of 后面的内容,看起来是没有问题的,前面讨论了一个比例,后面讨论了比例,前后使用让步句型讨论两个比例之间的反差。E看上去很正确呀
作者: nerakuhs 时间: 2008-11-24 21:11
以下是引用angelsgx在2008-8-6 0:24:00的发言:E中的the rate of people consuming其中consuming是修饰people,而people是the rate of 后面的内容,看起来是没有问题的,前面讨论了一个比例,后面讨论了比例,前后使用让步句型讨论两个比例之间的反差。E看上去很正确呀
E为啥错丫 我也选了E。。。。
作者: wellner 时间: 2008-11-25 07:13
E项“the rate of people consuming fatty foods"原意改变,为“食用高脂肪食物的人的率"。
[此贴子已经被作者于2008-11-25 7:32:51编辑过]
作者: 好好学习 时间: 2009-2-3 17:39
同样的疑问 感觉E很正确啊
作者: yuminjia 时间: 2009-2-9 16:09
同问 前面对E的解释不明白啊
作者: okwilliam 时间: 2009-4-15 22:08
E, 尴尬:
感觉对, 好像这样才和后面, the rate for 结构对称;
感觉不对, 好像 RATE 有歧义
作者: 斯咏 时间: 2009-8-5 10:38
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作者: yoshimihoku 时间: 2010-6-10 07:21
E项“the rate of people consuming fatty foods"原意改变,为“食用高脂肪食物的人的率"。
[此贴子已经被作者于2008-11-25 7:32:51编辑过]
-- by 会员 wellner (2008/11/25 7:13:00)
有道理!我就是选E,一直找不到合适的理由,觉得你的这个最能解释问题!
作者: yoshimihoku 时间: 2010-6-10 07:23
D: the inverted word order only contributes to the incoherence of the phrases; wordy and redundant.
-- by 会员 jason_jufe (2007/4/2 23:53:00)
请问redundant在哪里呀?
作者: pansean 时间: 2010-6-10 11:35
同意楼上,D,E是同一个错误
the rate of fatty foods与the rate of people,变成了食物的比率和人的比率
而题目需要的是the rate of food consumption..
作者: hermit127 时间: 2010-6-10 19:01
E里面的问题:
1,B里面at about the same rate修饰consume,而在E里面the rate of people comsuming,又修饰消耗脂肪食物的人,但是意思上差别不大。所以我觉得关键E错在:
2,比较对象不对等。如果改为:the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France as in the United States, the就对了。
作者: yoshimihoku 时间: 2010-6-11 06:28
我觉得E的the rate of people consuming还是意义有差别的。不过也有朋友提出the same in France少了in US的in
所以E的错误可能在这2个,都是吧
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