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作者: yzlinlin    时间: 2003-11-6 04:03
标题: 真题3套 test-2 20 时态和句子重心
20.  According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which has already been approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.  
(A) According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which has already been approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.  
(B) Already approaching 19 pounds a year in the United States, the National Pasta Association predicts that per-capita consumption of pasta will reach 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.  
(C) The National Pasta Association predicts by the twenty-first century that per-capita consumption  of pasta in the United States, which is already approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year.  
(D) By the twenty-first century, the National Pasta Association predicts that per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, having already approached 19 pounds a year, will reach 30 pounds a year.  
(E) According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States is already approaching 19 pounds a year and will reach 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.  

答案E。问题有3:
1,A为什么不对?或说为什么现在的状况19 pounds 不用现在完成时,而是进行时?唉,时态的判断----我不变的软肋。

2,答案E难道没有改变句子重心的嫌疑吗?在我看来,划线部分主要想阐明will ......。而答案E却用平行的2个单句来平分秋色,合适吗?

3,选项C的that如果放在predicts 后面的话,是否也对,甚至优于E?
作者: mjiehu    时间: 2003-11-6 10:00
"achieve"
作者: ballpark    时间: 2003-11-6 10:28
A的 which...会不会有修饰united states之嫌呢,原意应该是修饰consumption的吧

细细,我是胡说的,不要kick我
作者: joywzy    时间: 2003-11-6 10:35
C中的介词短语放在句中,不如放在句末,这样修饰的是will reach 30 pounds a year的时间.
作者: mjiehu    时间: 2003-11-6 14:30
C. achieve明显的一个awkward
作者: joywzy    时间: 2003-11-6 15:57
以下是引用mjiehu在2003-11-6 14:30:00的发言:
C. achieve明显的一个awkward


怎么awkward?讲讲好吗?

作者: mjiehu    时间: 2003-11-7 10:35
it deals with the lexicon knowledge of the word achieve
simply, per capita consumption cannot "achieve" 19 pounds a year, 'cause 19 pounds a year is not an objective, rather a fact, required by the verb "achieve"
作者: joywzy    时间: 2003-11-7 10:53
以下是引用mjiehu在2003-11-7 10:35:00的发言:
it deals with the lexicon knowledge of the word achieve
simply, per capita consumption cannot "achieve" 19 pounds a year, 'cause 19 pounds a year is not an objective, rather a fact, required by the verb "achieve"


mjiehu, thank u for your kind response.

I consulted the longman.

Achieve :1) to succeed in doing sth. good or getting the result you wanted , after trying hard for a long time

2)to be successful in in particular kind of job.

mjiehu, so only person can achive sth. , right?

Thank u .
作者: mjiehu    时间: 2003-11-7 10:56
kinda
作者: 天蝎座1107    时间: 2009-4-9 10:27
以下是引用yzlinlin在2003-11-6 4:03:00的发言:
20.  According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which has already been approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.  
(A) According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which has already been approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.  
(B) Already approaching 19 pounds a year in the United States, the National Pasta Association predicts that per-capita consumption of pasta will reach 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.  错在approaching的逻辑主语
(C) The National Pasta Association predicts by the twenty-first century that per-capita consumption  of pasta in the United States, which is already approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year.  错在改变了状语位置而引起歧义 by the twenty-first century 还有achieve
(D) By the twenty-first century, the National Pasta Association predicts that per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, having already approached 19 pounds a year, will reach 30 pounds a year.  错在改变了状语位置而引起歧义 by the twenty-first century 还有having错
(E) According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States is already approaching 19 pounds a year and will reach 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.  

答案E。问题有3:
1,A为什么不对?或说为什么现在的状况19 pounds 不用现在完成时,而是进行时?唉,时态的判断----我不变的软肋。

2,答案E难道没有改变句子重心的嫌疑吗?在我看来,划线部分主要想阐明will ......。而答案E却用平行的2个单句来平分秋色,合适吗?

3,选项C的that如果放在predicts 后面的话,是否也对,甚至优于E?

我也选了A 原因是E改变句子重心 但是现在做过很多题再来看 改变句子重心未必是错误选项 确实A的has been approaching和achieve不太好 读题还是要读仔细 我就把achieve给读漏掉了
作者: 天蝎座1107    时间: 2009-4-9 11:23

在这里还是请教一下A中的has been approaching和E中的is already approaching

这里的approaching是怎么样的用法

查了一下Longman

MOVE TOWARDS

[intransitive and transitive] to move towards or nearer to someone or something
                

As I approached the house, I noticed a light on upstairs. She heard footsteps approaching.
            
FUTURE EVENT[intransitive and transitive] if an event or a particular time approaches, or you approach it, it is coming nearer and will happen soon
            

She was then approaching the end of her career. The time is fast approaching when we will have to make a decision. With winter approaching, many animals are storing food.

这里是move towards还是future event 我真的是不懂 大家给说说吧 A的has been approaching是不是也错了???为什么???


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作者: 天蝎座1107    时间: 2009-4-9 11:36
但是我记得prep里面也有个题是have been doing...什么的并列 这个现在完成进行时到底是对不对呢 怎么回事啊
作者: 天蝎座1107    时间: 2009-4-9 11:38

通过prep上几道改变句子重心错 和 改变句子重心作为正确选项 的题 我理解了 1.改变句子重心作为正确答案是情非得已 2.最好还是不要改变句子重心


作者: ilhht    时间: 2009-4-9 11:45
以下是引用天蝎座1107在2009-4-9 11:36:00的发言:
但是我记得prep里面也有个题是have been doing...什么的并列 这个现在完成进行时到底是对不对呢 怎么回事啊


我记得是having been doing得并列??
作者: formyf    时间: 2011-6-4 11:00
has been approching  已经正在靠近,意思上是不是不太说得通呢
作者: 你好梦想    时间: 2014-10-30 13:41
我也觉得A中的has been appraching和achieve是两个明显的错误,前者意为已经接近并且将来会还会接近,后者如某楼所说,不能用在这里。




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