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作者: Ibelive    时间: 2007-1-30 10:13
标题: 求助

Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper's bullet during the First World War. Horace Pippin, a Black American painter, worked by holding the brush in his right hand and guiding its movements with his left

(A)  Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper's bullet during the First World War

(B)   In spite of his right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper's bullet during the First World War

(C)  Because there had been a sniper's bullet during the First World War that crippled his right hand and arm

(D)  The right hand and arm being crippled by a
                sniper's bullet during the First World War

(E)   His right hand and arm crippled by a sniper's
                bullet during the First World War

为什么不选择B啊

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作者: leeup866    时间: 2007-1-30 11:05
选E吗

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作者: Ibelive    时间: 2007-1-30 11:07
是啊

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作者: seaskyang    时间: 2007-1-30 12:10
A都错在哪里呢？

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作者: graceyin7    时间: 2007-1-31 22:16

A不好的原因是: 第一，太 wordy, 第二，being 的存在多餘

B不對是因為 in spite of 要接名詞，但是 his right hand and arm being crippled by... 並非名詞或名詞片語，要接也應該是his right hand and arm's being crippled by...，可是這種說法不好，不簡潔，沒有E簡潔清楚。

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作者: Ibelive    时间: 2007-1-31 23:03
thanks

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