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作者: albertjerry 时间: 2003-10-21 01:09
标题: 885 sec e 22
22. Cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin between one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest in order to be a success.
(A) Cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin between one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest in order to be a success.
(B) Between one and four minutes after a cardiac arrest, cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin to be successful.
(C) Successful cardiopulmonary resuscitation should be begun from one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest occurs.
(D) If it is to be successful, a cardiac arrest should be treated with cardiopulmonary resuscitation one to four minutes afterward.
(E) To be successful, cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin within one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest.

我选的c ,我怎么感觉好像要被动啊,心肺复苏会自己开始吗,请指教

作者: mjiehu 时间: 2003-10-21 03:28
E.
A between...to
B should begin to be successful
C should be begun
D should be treated/one to four minutes afterward

作者: albertjerry 时间: 2003-10-21 17:24
我的意思是为什么要用主动,而不用被动呢,从意思上讲,心肺复苏是不会自动开始的啊,有点晕

作者: Mchao_l 时间: 2003-10-22 11:26
我水平很低, 也不明白为什么选E, 希望有牛牛继续讲解.

作者: felix2816 时间: 2003-10-22 21:43
norm1 :"in order to" is less perfect than to.
2.active voice is desirable, and passive voice twisted the original meaning.
3,the effect of "between .....and" is less than that of "within 1 to four minutes".
so only E is approximate one.

作者: yzlinlin 时间: 2003-10-26 03:43
对於这题的主被动我也有疑问，只是觉得E用主动好象念起来并不觉得拗口，相反比C的被动好象更顺口一些。

只是，我觉得这题其他各项错误可以如下分析：

A： between....to...; in order to 没有to 简洁；而且in order to be a success 有直接修饰cardiac arrest之嫌，这一目的状语宜提前。

B： between ...and ...不如one to four... 简洁；更主要的是，该句句意被扭曲，变得逻辑关系不清。

C：这项最明显的错误是句子重心发生转移。

D： it 在句中指代 a cardiac arrest，句意成为a cardiac arrest is to be successful。

抛砖引玉，至於主被动，哪位NN给解释一下？

作者: simona 时间: 2006-9-15 21:09

begin应该不用被动也可表示心肺开始跳动的意思

大家经常说的class begins

不是说课被开始上。对吧

欢迎大家批评指正

作者: ana9 时间: 2006-10-29 05:30

agree

作者: vivian_huang 时间: 2007-8-23 18:57

以下是引用yzlinlin在2003-10-26 3:43:00的发言：
对於这题的主被动我也有疑问，只是觉得E用主动好象念起来并不觉得拗口，相反比C的被动好象更顺口一些。

只是，我觉得这题其他各项错误可以如下分析：

A： between....to...; in order to 没有to 简洁；而且in order to be a success 有直接修饰cardiac arrest之嫌，这一目的状语宜提前。

B： between ...and ...不如one to four... 简洁；更主要的是，该句句意被扭曲，变得逻辑关系不清。

C：这项最明显的错误是句子重心发生转移。

D： it 在句中指代 a cardiac arrest，句意成为a cardiac arrest is to be successful。

抛砖引玉，至於主被动，哪位NN给解释一下？

跟贴汇总一下：

201 Cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin between one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest in order to be a success.[目的状语修饰全局，有直接修饰cardiac arrest的歧义]

(A) Cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin between one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest in order to be a success.[错误使用between …to搭配]

(B) Between one and four minutes after a cardiac arrest, cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin to be successful.[不符合使用习惯，between。。。and破坏逻辑意思]

(C) Successful cardiopulmonary resuscitation should be begun from one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest occurs.[should +be+done 错]==〉没有看出C选项怎么破坏原文句子重心，那位能指点一下啊？

(D) If it is to be successful, a cardiac arrest should be treated with cardiopulmonary resuscitation one to four minutes afterward.[句首的条件从句罗嗦，]（E）

(E) To be successful, cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin within one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest.

作者: sicivi 时间: 2008-8-10 02:59

汇总的很好！

作者: renehan 时间: 2008-11-1 01:59
看了解释，还是不太明白BC二个选项。哪位能再指点一下呢？B项说的是，between and破坏逻辑结构，这不太懂。后面的should begin to be successful, 可直接改成should begin successful?C项说，should be begun错，这是范了什么错误呢？还有，我选的错误答案就是C.本人语法很菜，还请大侠提携！

作者: lijiahui0422 时间: 2008-11-1 11:11

between and 很少有表示时间的范围的确实很别扭 within 很好表示的在某个时间范围以内

shouls begin to be successful 我觉得语法没什么问题只是表达的意思不一样

想想 begin within 4 mins to be successful 和begin to be successful侧重点是不一样的前者强调再一定时间短里开始才成功，后者说开始就成功，不够准确。

should begin successful 肯定不对啊...至少也是successfully, 而且这么表达还赶不上to be successful 因为successfully 直接修饰begin了更不强调时间范围了，要注意句子的中心

我也想问 should be done有问题？ I should be killed. U should be awarded 这不很常用么

作者: mars_cheung 时间: 2009-12-9 01:00
begin 是可以主动表被动的，印象中没见过 sth be begun 的表达，以下是节选自 LDOCE 的解释
2. start happening[intransitive and transitive] if something begins, or you begin something, it starts to happen or exist from a particular time:
It was the coldest winter since records began.
begin at
The meeting begins at 10.30 am.

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