和1.19拼了
现在在职,刚参加完新东方的强化培训,我的英语水平不怎么样,毕业有两年了,忘的也差不多了.四级考了好几次,晕死!
看了之前很多朋友的复习日记,觉得还蛮受影响的,因为上班加上一个人复习所以有些惰性,希望在这边大家可以督促加监督!
平时上班,只有下班的时候,晚上+周末
谢谢啦,还有就是我觉得我复习的计划很乱,还望有高人指点!
现有材料:
1.OG
2.DELTA
3.邱邱的听力20篇
4.历年真题<网上下的>
5.李笑来的<185范文>
6.单词<张红岩的>
我的计划是这样的:11月1号之前看完一遍单词,单词记过之后觉得效果 不大,不认识的还是不认识!
每天一篇邱邱的听力听抄,(我的听力奇差.听完一篇基本上听不懂,要看原文才知道在讲什么.听抄坚持了五天,效果还不是很明显,很担心,担心担心)
因为听力很差的原因,所以晚上回来占去了大半的时间,最近几天基本上在做以上两件事,
阅读,口语还有写作还没有着手,185范文本来准备每天背的,可是很多单词都不认识,查单词占了 很多时间,
定的每天阅读还有背范文总是不能按时完成!郁闷!
总觉得按照这样的速度不行!
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汇报工作来了.哈
10.30--11.2
每天下班后基本就是做听力,之前听抄了几篇邱邱的听力,
后来改做OG的听力,11.2刚作完Practice 5
基本上要听两遍然后６错３（是不是很弱，ＢＳ自己！）
然后１１．２单词记完一遍＜其实之前有翻过，不过好象没什么效果＞．准备从４号开始按照杨鹏的记单词方法开始漫长的记单词之路，我用的是张红岩的单词书，算了下大概要两个月的时间一共，记完了也该一月考试了，晕
１１．２还做了ＤＥＬＴＡ的阅读，基本上１０错１
把阅读和听力遇到的生词都记下，然后有时间记！
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11.3--11.12
这几天总的来说成效不是很大，有时候每天定的任务不能按时完成，着急，有时候时间不够用，有时候白天有时间可是反而不想看书，觉得自己惰性比较大，定着坐在这连着看几个小时的书对于我来说好象有点困难，各位有没有什么好办法：能帮我在这坚持坐几个小时？／困扰．．．
听力还在每天坚持，觉得比刚开始要好很多，做了ＯＧ上的听力最后的测试不是很理想，可能就差不多２１分左右的样子
这几天在做ＤＥＬＴＡ连蒙带猜的，没有全听写，觉得太浪费时间，就是听一遍做题，听第二遍，对答案，然后第三遍记下ＫＡＹＷＯＲＤ我记笔记的速度很慢，所以要求就是能听懂他们在说什么就ＯＫ，然后对照原文看哪个我没有听出来的是哪个，再听一遍过．．．各位觉得怎样啊？
阅读．在做，只是有时候会对很多，有时候又错很多，没有很大的提高，有没有什么办法可以提高啊？难道就是大量做题么？
－－－－－－－－－－－
11.12---11.26
我承认这些天我都没有好好 在看书,因为一些私事还有心情很乱,都没怎么看书,不行,这样下去肯定不行,
还是继续做DELTA,OG,还有就是我还没有下载那个KAPLAN,准备这几天把这个搞定,
加油加油,还是要继续加油啊,坚持+努力
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11.30
写一篇作文:9题/some people prefer to live in a small town ,the others prefer to live in a big city which do you prefer?
(38楼)
做相关的口语，还有ＤＥＬＴＡ听力的ＱＵＩＺ２
１２．１
阅读1.7,1.8(未完成)
听力quiz3
11.30--12.1两天背１８５关的范文
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
１２．２要谢谢山衔版主和eddienumb的意见，我知道我的作文很烂，不过我希望每次写的都有进步
作文：ＴＯＰＩＣ：neighbors are the people who live near us,in your opinion,what are the qualities of a good neighbor,use specific details and examples in your answer.(作文在４４楼)
今天下班后吃了饭就写了一篇作文，ＢＳ自己呀．
一会争取再听一个练习的听力
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12.3---12.6
作文一篇(
TOPIC:IS it advisable for a teenager students to have a part time job.(作文在４５楼)
听力２．４
２．４Ｅ错误很多，好象现在听一些对话的做题的正确率要比以前要高一些，不过ＬＥＣＴＵＲＥ的段子还是不行
记了一些分类词汇．关于ＣＡＭＰＵＳ的
写了一篇integrated writing第一次写纯属当做练笔
不过不怎么样，看了ＯＧ的ＳＣＯＲＥ５的文章，
按它的那个样子写了一篇．
１２．６做了阅读１．８和ＱＵＩＺ７
发现错误率比较高的是排序题，奇怪，感觉做这一类的题很好，怎么错那么多
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12.7 空白
12.8
阅读QUIZ 8 25题错10,是很差劲吧.,郁闷哪
听力2.4E +QUIZ4
其中QUIZ4的第二篇基本上都做错了,后来看原文,我压根就听的十万八千里
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
１２．９
作文一篇（在５６楼）
TOPIC: some university require students to take classes in many subjects ,other university require students to specialize in one subject,which is better ,use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
准备了几道Ｑ１和Ｑ２的口语，到现在才开始准备口语题，之前觉得开口说很难所以一直拖到现在
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
１２．１０
电脑出了点问题，以前下载的一些ＴＯＥＦＬ的资料全没了，没有备份没有想到会这样，郁闷哪
今天第一次直接在电脑上写的作文，题目就是今天的考题，时间是一个半小时，（时间还是太长哦）
TOPIC:some people think that human needs for farmland ,housing and industry are more important than saving the endanger animals.Do you agree with or disagree with this point of view?why or not?use specific reasons and examples to support your answer(57楼)
阅读1.9.1.10
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12.11
topic:learning the past has no value for those of us living in the present,do you agree or disafree ?use specific reason and examples to support your answer<59楼>
听力做了一个ＱＵＩＺ
准备关了电脑继续阅读
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12.12---12.15
不知不觉已经过了好几天了,这几天有些惰性,不想看书,就写了两篇作文
电脑被拿走了,也有两天没有碰听力了
大家鼓励下我吧,我现在需要鼓励.
发了一篇上来,其实写了好几篇也不知道有没有进步只是凭感觉写
topic
o you agree with the following statement?classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school.use specific reasons and examples to support your answers<62楼>
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12.16 空白
12.17作文如下;这几天懒的很,加上有些烦心事
NO.62 what do you want most in a friend--someone who is intelligent ,or someone who has a sense of humor .or someone who is reliable?which one of these characteristics is most important to you?use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice<68楼>
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12.18
准备了几篇口语Q1的段子
听力2.6
阅读QUIZ1
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12.19
口语...
12.19---12.26
已经过了这么多天了呀,很是惭愧
重新制定计划
一个人看书有时候不是很积极,现在处于颓废的阶段
一会晚上会来汇报工作,希望继续坚持
12.26----13.31
每天一篇作文,同时背相关范文
Q1,Q2准备口语1--2个
听力1.5---2小时
阅读还是继续
一周内做KANPLAN一套模拟题<>
其实KANPLAN 还没下载下来呢,晕呢,所以也不知道到底有几套题还
10月30号
早上早起半小时背了LIST40--41
晚上回来听完一遍magazine的听力．听抄了一遍，
moving away from newspapers,let's focus on magazine,the first magazine was a little perodical called th review and it was started in England in 1704,it looked a lot like the newspaper of the time ,but in terms of its contents it was much different ,newspapers were concerned mainly with the new events,but the reviews focused on important domestic issues of the day,as well as the policies of the government,now in England at the time people could still be thrown in jail for publishing articals that critical of the king ,and that was happened to D.F.he was the outspoken founder of the review,before actually wrote the first issue of the review from the prison,you see ,he had been arrested because of his writings that criticized policies of the church of England ,which was headed by the king ,after his releas ,the focus continued to produce the review and the magazine started to appear
on a more frequent schedule,about three times a week ,It did't take long for other magazine to start popping up,1709 the magazine called"the tattler" begin publication ,this new magazine contained news ,poetry,analysis and philosophical essays.
又听了一遍，因为写过一遍所以比之前听的感觉要好很多
lz加油，我跟你差不多四级刚过工作一年才回过头来看托福
OG的听力材料是按照听抄那样子来么?
有时候好象东西多了反而不知道该做什么好了
还有,听力我还是听不出每段的分界点.时间一长就蒙了
10-31
十月的最后一天.晚上做了OG 的Listening practice
set1 and set2 分别是一个对话和一段ＬＥＣＴＵＲＥ
之前听老托的听力最长也就一分多钟，今天晚上可算是做到真的想吐了，
一个是２分多钟，一个是５分多，先是听了两遍做题，错误率很高，基本上能听懂每个词，但是觉得放一块就不知道什么意思了，呵呵晕死！然后lecture的部分听抄花了一个多小时，听一句写一句，写到最后我真是不想听了，看一句原文写一句，估计没什么效果了都，晕死！再继续努力吧！
还有一个小时准备记单词，有点困哪，咖啡的效应好象过了！
加油哦，继续坚持！
和楼主一样的情况 水平也你一样~不过现在在学新概念 打算两个月学完新概念二和三后 开始准备托付~
请教斑竹,像楼主这样的水平 可以直接准备托福吗?还是先学新概念打基础?
我一开始也头疼，坚持听了1个月，每天都做一篇delta的lecture听力，不过反复一个小时的听，最后看原文再听，现在感觉比以前强多了，效果很明显，如果坚持听写的话效果肯定会更好
刚做完一篇听力,做了蛮长时间,每次做完听抄后再听就觉得很好了,呵呵
问下山衔落日:用来泛听的材料,听苏丹老师讲听力真题是不适合用来做泛听的,那么我平时想用来泛听的材料推荐下吧!
这样子上班的路上或者休息的时候可以听下!
can you share me your materials?
I want to download them,however, I'm in US and my computer is broken...(shit...)
now in the computer lab I can't download these things.can you do me a favor to email your materials to me.
Thank you very much for your great help...
我个人觉得听抄不好囖.很浪费时间...
不如一篇文章反复听.听到懂为止..真的不懂在对照原文看..究竟哪个词不懂..哪句话自己没理解..
相对而言提高也是很快.而且没那么浪费时间..时间可以节省更好.做更多的题目..
然后把听过的题放进MP3..大量听就OK了..
can you share me your materials?
I want to download them,however, I'm in US and my computer is broken...(shit...)
now in the computer lab I can't download these things.can you do me a favor to email your materials to me.
Thank you very much for your great help...
我个人觉得听抄不好囖.很浪费时间...
不如一篇文章反复听.听到懂为止..真的不懂在对照原文看..究竟哪个词不懂..哪句话自己没理解..
相对而言提高也是很快.而且没那么浪费时间..时间可以节省更好.做更多的题目..
然后把听过的题放进MP3..大量听就OK
恩，是呀，可是我现在听力很弱！
上面已经把这几天的工作汇报了，不知道按照这个速度参加一月的考试会不会太慢？担心．．．
今天晚上状态不是很好哦,做题错了很多.
有点沮丧!
写了一篇作文,字数在250多些,实在是凑不到300,希望牛人指点!第一次动手写，希望大家多提意见，还有就是那些地方可以再写些细节呢？／
157.In the future,student may have the choice if studying at home by using technology such as computer or television or of studying at traditional schools,which would you prefer ?use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.
undoubtedly studying at home by using technology such as computer or television has some advantages ,you can accept the information rapidly,on the other hand ,you will do without to go to school on schedule .neverthless many people also prefer to go to traditional school . i am one of them.
first .in traditional school .you can exchange your opinion with your classmates and teachers.it is wise to learn with teachers.they can tell you where to begin with .what you should do and which reference you should choose.when you confront difficulties .you can ask them for help.their advice will always be tremendously helpful.under the teacher's gudience you can learn easier ,faster and more interestingly.besides ,you can also discuss the issues with your classmates that can not do in your home alone.furthermore,you are able to share your limit resource with others and share others resource in turn .therefore it is virtually able to reach a much larger amount of resource.
second.there is a good study atmosphere in school.there are many students in class or library.they are all study.that make you should study as well .there is a competition between you and others which can make you improve constantly .all above can not do at home when you are alone and have no competiter.you will never know whether you have improvement
third we go to school not only learn konwledge but also learn how to get along with others.how to deal with the things which confuse us .how to do a good person who have a good qualities.for example ,we make friends in school,sometimes you may be take into account your friends,so something can be done or not.it is indicated that you may not only think about yourslef but also your friends.actually.you may live with others in socialty in future.
in conclusion .studying at home by using technology have some merits but there is more advantages in traditional school.in my opinion .studying in traditional school is propitious to my growth.
哦啊.都没有人来指点下我写的作文,
自己顶下了,HOHO...
我来评,请等半小时.阅读中
157.In the future,student may have the choice if studying at home by using technology such as computer or television or of studying at traditional schools,which would you prefer ?use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.
虽然ETS还是喜欢叙述的行文.但个人认为还是保守的开头比较好.
比如
‘This is a controversial issue about whether……Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we may find that some people hold the idea of A; on the other hand, some people might choose B instead. The choice, nevertheless, is not easy to make. However, from my point of view, I will agree that later/former one is more reasonable. For A is more advisable than B, my augments are listed as follows.’用一下这个开头,你的字数一下子暴涨.
Undoubtedly(注意一下首字母大写.) studying at home by using technology such as computer or television have some advantage(S) ,you can accept the information rapidly,on the other hand ,you will do without to go to school on schedule(这一句语法有错,you do not have to go to school on schedule) .neverthless many people also prefer to go to traditional school( 前面再说点什么吧,这个太直接了.比如用刚刚的模板) . i am one of them.
first .in traditional school .you can exchange your opinion with your classmates and teachers.it is wise to learn with(from) teachers.they can tell you where to begin with .what you should do and which reference you should choose.when you confront difficulties .you can ask them for help.their advice will always be tremendously helpful.under the teacher's gudience you can learn easier ,faster and more interestingly.besides ,you can also discuss the issues with your classmates that can not do in your home alone. furthermore,you are able to share your limit resource with others and share others resource in turn .therefore it is virtually able to reach a much larger amount of resource.(这段叙述得挺好的,开头可能更需要一个中心句.)
second.there is a good study atmosphere in school.there are many students in class or library.they are all study(Studying).that make you should study as well .there is a competition between you and others which can make you improve constantly .all above can not do at home when you are alone and have no competiter.you will never know whether you have improvement
third we go to school not only learn konwledge but also learn how to get along with others.how to deal with the things which confuse us .how to do a good person who have a good qualities.for example ,we make friends in school,sometimes you may be take into account your friends,so something can be done or not.it is indicated that you may not only think about yourslef but also your friends.actually.you may live with others in socialty in future.
in conclusion .studying at home by using technology have some merits but there is more advantages in traditional school.in my opinion .studying in traditional school is propitious to my growth.
因为下面几段的行文差不多,就不多说了.有几点想说的,我比较直,请不要生气:
一,语法请自己检查好.我想给改作文的CD版友不想把时间放在检查大家的语法错误上,而且自己检查语法错误会养成考试时的良好习惯.
二,文章的每段开始,我希望你能够用上顺承转接的句子.比如,Although Reason1 is probably the most important determinant, it is not the only explanation for that ,the increased value places on Reason2 also helps to solve the problem.
三,文章的叙述方式都比较中式英文,最好能用一些英语的佳句,给你两句先:
比如说到课堂的讨论,你可以用这一句:
The interpersonal action and communication greatly improve not only the students’ social skills and the critical thinking but also the ability to analyzing and coping with complex issues.
Learning is not a solitary activity but one that requires collaboration among people.
还有,可以自己改:The goal of attending school is to cultivate students to be useful specialists with well-balanced knowledge and integrated personality.
四推荐你用一下作文模板,而且,要自己总结模板,以免跟人家撞车.因为你用叙述方式的时候,用的词和句子总觉得不太恰当,我水平有限,改不出来.呼唤大牛.
严重感谢呀，恩，那些地方我都记得了
开头是因为老师说偶尔用用转折式的开头也蛮好，看来我是没有用好了，呵呵！
这几天阅读,听力写作都有坚持做,
只有口语迟迟没有着手,觉得不知道从哪下手?
这几天身体有些不舒服,都有些放松了／
郁闷．．．
楼主边工作边复习很辛苦啊！！
建议历年真题没有很大的必要做了。只看看阅读部分就好了，而且就看2000年以后的就可以了。因为看楼主的备考时间也不是很长。
主要做delta's key 会帮助很大。考前在做kaplan模考题。
我也是在职考生
目前在做DELTA
准备明年一月考
与大家共勉
11.3--11.12
这几天总的来说成效不是很大，有时候每天定的任务不能按时完成，着急，有时候时间不够用，有时候白天有时间可是反而不想看书，觉得自己惰性比较大，定着坐在这连着看几个小时的书对于我来说好象有点困难，各位有没有什么好办法：能帮我在这坚持坐几个小时？／困扰．．．
听力还在每天坚持，觉得比刚开始要好很多，做了ＯＧ上的听力最后的测试不是很理想，可能就差不多２１分左右的样子
这几天在做ＤＥＬＴＡ连蒙带猜的，没有全听写，觉得太浪费时间，就是听一遍做题，听第二遍，对答案，然后第三遍记下ＫＡＹＷＯＲＤ我记笔记的速度很慢，所以要求就是能听懂他们在说什么就ＯＫ，然后对照原文看哪个我没有听出来的是哪个，再听一遍过．．．各位觉得怎样啊？
阅读．在做，只是有时候会对很多，有时候又错很多，没有很大的提高，有没有什么办法可以提高啊？难道就是大量做题么？
阅读的话，词汇是基础。除了大量做题，更需要精做，把原文都逐字逐句弄懂，看熟看透，还要把出题思路琢磨透。根据大家反映，OG的阅读和考试很接近，特别是题目风格，所以建议把OG的阅读文章反复看，看透。
具体可以参考汉客老师笔记 http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=43&ID=128603
这几天的阅读和听力好象都没有什么提高，所以觉得都没什么劲头
自己顶下
恩,你说的我都改过了,第四条是我比较头大的,还得继续努力啊
谢谢
今天写的一篇,第一段用了neighbor,后面的几段都是HE/SHE
因为怕重复太多.不过好象还是重复太多，可是很多地方又不能不用
TOPIC:Neighbor are the people who live near us ,in your opinion what are the qualities of good neighbor ,use specific details and examples in your answer
Despite you live in a big city or a small town,you may have someone lived near you ,that's your neighbor who is maybe the closest fellow in your life,on certain level<这里不知道词用的是否恰当，想表达：在一定程度上／>.it is very significant of the qualities of your neighbor because a good neighbor can get along with happiness in my opinion,there are several characters ＜这里是否可以替换qualities？＞a good neighbor have as follows
The first and essential one is he/she must respect you .for instance ,whatever you say whenever you do ,he/she must respect on your opinion or behavior.it is the foundation of you have truck with him/her.maybe he/she has different opinion ,then may give you some suggestion but not interfere even not look down upon you,each of you may have honesty to exchange<这里也不确定是否恰当．想表达：互相坦诚相待>.however it is fine to tell you exactly what he/she thought,then you may become the best friends.
In addition ,everyone has privacy,a good neighbor must not to tell your privacy to the others.it is a common saying that:＂Good things stay indoors while bad things will go far away ＂.to be honestly speaking ,everyone don't hope that occured.it may cause a series of problems.to avoid that happened,then you will live more calmer
Besides,when you have trouble ,he/she can help you.for example,once you had a urgent pain ,even you couldn't stand up.then you can ask he/she for help and be sent to the hospital in time.<觉得后面应该再说点什么和结尾连接，不过没想到好的句子>
All in all ,taking into account all these factors we may reasonably come to the moral that a good neighbor you have can make your life more comfortable
又一篇来啦!嘿嘿
TOPIC:In some countries,teenagers have jobs while they are still students,DO you think this is a good idea?support your opinion by using specfic reasons and details
Recently,the issue of the teenager students who have a part-time job has been brought to public attention.some parents think that it is good for their children to have a part-time job but others argue that the reverse is true.there is probably some truth in both argument .before giving my opinion ,i think it is essential to look at the argument on both sides
For the aspect of supporting teenager students to have a part-time job ,there are two reasons .Firstly ,they can accumulate work experience .for example ,if you do a market accounting job,you may contact various people ,maybe the old, the young or the amicable, the insolent.so you must make corresponding tone or behavior correspond to them.it is the precious exprience for your job in future.Secondly,the pin money can be earned from your part-time job,actrually,the parents don't let their children to think about the money matter,but some teenagers have interest in music and they can't ask their parents for money to buy the record.then they can use money which they earned.there is no denying that the part-time job slove this problem.
Obviously,it has its drawbacks as well as merits,for one thing it may affect the study for the teenager who has a part-time job may spent enormous amount of time and energy on it and leave a little on study.however the main task for a student is to study hard not to work .For another thing ,the teenagers are too young to distinguish the bad things such as smoking and drinking .these are also impact their life in future.
From what has been discussed above,the choice is depend on different cases,I tink if the teenager students want to have a part-time job,there is a precondition that is they can do well in study and arrange reasonable time on study and work,i firmly believed that the part-time job allows them a feeling of success and independence that is a perfect complement to their academic pursuits
刚报了一月19号交大的考场
感觉好紧张啊,准备的还很不够呀,继续加油!
今天有点浮躁，感觉状态不是很好
难得看到山衔斑竹改作文。。。楼主面子大啊。。。。
先改到这里.楼主看一下有没有我改错的地方,如果有不对的,也请你说明.偶会再来看滴..
楼主加油~!Fight~!
刚报了一月19号交大的考场
感觉好紧张啊,准备的还很不够呀,继续加油!
不用太紧张,既然已经报了就加油冲刺吧.
恩，太感谢了，改的地方我都记下了
今天本来准备写作文的，不过写了半天都冒不出个词
郁闷郁闷，就说今天状态不太对
还是先平和下心态才好
难得看到山衔斑竹改作文。。。楼主面子大啊。。。。
真的么？觉得倍感荣幸哦
不过山衔版主真是蛮敬业的
为这我也要加油不是！
先深呼吸下
哈
今天本来准备写作文的，不过写了半天都冒不出个词
郁闷郁闷，就说今天状态不太对
还是先平和下心态才好
写不成作文就背背范文吧.哪怕读读也是好的.会有感觉的.
不要太着急.心态要好.反正都是要考的.心态好也是这样不好也是这样,所以,干脆就开心一点,心态好一点去准备,心态好一点反而效果好~调节一下,投入"奋战"吧~
真的么？觉得倍感荣幸哦
不过山衔版主真是蛮敬业的
为这我也要加油不是！
先深呼吸下
哈
同意.楼主加油吧.如果你回一贴我再回一贴你的帖子就要被我给水了....偶有这"功力"的.不骗你的.哈哈哈哈哈,
TOPIC: some university require students to take classes in many subjects ,other university require students to specialize in one subject,which is better ,use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
When it comes to university study ,some people believe that taking courses in many subjects is useful for them ,others argue that the reverse is true ,There is probably some truth in both arguments ,but as far as i am concerned. i fully agree with taking classes in many subjects.The reasons are chiefly as follows
In the first place ,the students can adapt to different jobs after graduation.Actually ,when the students take courses in many subjects they would know about different field and have knowledge of universality .all of these can help them to find a job more easily,Furhtermore,he/she would be considered as a wise people whose knowledge is extensive.For example,my brother took classes in psychology and enconomics,after graduation ,he had sevaral works such as psychologic doctor,accountant,teacher ,and now he manages a company.also i pleased to tell him about my problems and ask him for suggestion,Despite how difficult the problem is ,he always can bring me out of the shadow
In the second place ,taking classes in many subjects can make many friends in various area,the people who have the common interest may join together,thus they may have more opportunities to make friends than studying in one subject ,it is probably no exaggeration to say that it is a certain fortune for them in the future.
Moreover,It is wise to study the various subjects ,because we have a long life and even impossible to work and concern about only one profession.we have many interest which would be extended,we have many cases which would be solved.we also have to contact different people ,so we must study different subjects to charge ourselves.
All the evidence supports an unmistakable conclusion that taking courses in many subjects is extremely superior for the students in the future.
刚才写了一篇12.10考的作文
第一次直接在电脑上写,时间用了一个半小时.应该是很差劲了
TOPIC:some people think that human needs for farmland ,housing and industry are more important than saving the endanger animals.Do you agree with or disagree with this point of view?why or not?use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Recently ,the phenomenon which is more important to use land for human needs and saving endanger animals has aroused wide concern.some people think that using land for human needs for farming ,housing and industry are more important and others argue that saving endanger animals is more important. it is a little difficult to say which is true,attitudes towards this hot issue varied.before giving my opinion ,i think it is essential to look at the argument on both sides
On the aspect of supporting to use land for human needs. there are several reasons ,in the first place ,as the increasing of the population ,the people have to eat ,dress and live in a house. the more people the earth had the more land we need .such as farming ,housing and industry.for instance,the farmers need land to grow crops which can feed the people ,the land we need to bulid the houses which are lived by the people ,the factory needs land for industry such as making clothes,and other appliance to improve our living conditions.furthermore,some people think that human are the master of the earth ,so it is essential to satisfied our request.Actually we have the initiative to use land but others argue this point here-in-after
TO saving the endanger animals is the responsibility to human.Despite the human or the animals ,we are all the important elements of the earth ,there is a definition called"biosphere" ,the human and the animal are the siginificant parts in it .we demand the land and the animals especially the endanger animals need either.they need the land to live and thus we have a balance in the biosphere ,On the contrary ,if the endanger animals have no land to live and they are endangered ,the result of the ruin of the banlance,there we may have disaster.
If we are forced to agree with one of the two.my choice would be using the land for saving endanger animals .this choice is not only good for the endanger animals ,but aloso for the human,TO accompany peacefully with animals is necessary for making this world a better place to live in.
topic:learning the past has no value for those of us living in the present,do you agree or disafree ?use specific reason and examples to support your answer
There is a debate on about whether learning the past has value for us in the present.some people bleieve that it is no useful fur us and others argue that the reverse is true.As to me,I am in favor of the second view,There are many reasons for my inclination but the following ones are most important.
In the first place ,the history book which we have learned since the primary school is a good evidence.it is a required course through our schooltime ,it is a responsibility to study it,In other hand,now that they arrange this course ,there is a frorknowledge in their consideration.Actually,their forknowledge is extremely true ,Owing to learn the history ,our society would develop much faster.This is what I mainly want to talk about on the next paragraph.
There is a common saying that"Experience is the mother of the wisdom" On account of we know about what happened in the past,so we can summarize the cause from the failure,In addition, because of learning the past .we could develop the techonolgy to improve our society ,For example ,since the invention of the electricity,we have used it to every field in our life today,such as the lighting ,the television,even the computer,It is probably no exaggeration to say that we can not live without the elctricity.
Besides,whatever we do today,it is the past towards tomorrow.We go through from yesterday to today to tomorrow.(好象有点口语话,能不能直接用from...to ..to?)it is a inevitable process to everyone .So if you want to understand today,you have to search yesterday.
Taking to account,all these factors we may reasonably come to moral that learning the past is considerable worth to us ,All in all,it is a great fortune .
好，我去看下.
这几天又感觉没有动力,怎么办啊,需要鼓励
大家鼓励下我吧.呵呵
topico you agree with the following statement?classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school.use specific reasons and examples to support your answers
Undoubtedly,parents are extremely essential to us ,They care about our growth and they are self-less to do anything for us,they never consider to respond from us ,Neverthless,According to the investigation made by the social reasearch ,the classmates have more important influence on a child's success.As to my concerned,I frimly agree this statement and my arguments are chiefly as follows.
In the first palce ,the classmates are always our fellows in our schooltime ,we spent more time to keep company with our classmates than parents.we study together and play together ,it is significant for a child of all ages to be accepted by their peers ,and most of them try their best to fit in .It is a diverse situation to company with our parents ,because we always think that they never envy us ,they never alienate us ,they never desert us .However ,they can't instead of the classmates who can understand something that we would not like to share with parents,That is probably i mainly to talk about here-in-after.
In the period of the adolescent ,we always share the thoughts with our classmates not parents,because most of parents can't understand what we think about even may scold us ,on the contray ,the classmates may comprehend it and give some suggestion .many children become temporarily alienated from parents during this period of their life
For the last point.many people make their best friends on the high school.even after graduation,they can help each other and confide each other,This is very scarce after we work,because when you work,there is some interests between you and your companion,It goes without saying that you should get well along with your classmates who may be your best friend in your life
All the disscussion above proved that the classmates have more important influence on a child's success than parents,so cherishing your friendship is the most essential thing you have to do
好，我去看下.
这几天又感觉没有动力,怎么办啊,需要鼓励
大家鼓励下我吧.呵呵
好，我去看下.
这几天又感觉没有动力,怎么办啊,需要鼓励
大家鼓励下我吧.呵呵
鼓励鼓励，加油加油！
问一下LZ，你现在听力是什么水平？
觉得自己现在的听力和你最开始的听力差不多。LZ是怎样训练的呢？用了多长时间？
我现在虽然还是菜鸟级的,不过觉得和刚开始比起来是有很大的提高的
我前面还是听抄,就拿邱邱的20篇,其实也没听完吧,就7,8篇的 样子
后来就是做题,OG,DELTA,第一遍做题,后面的努力听清楚为什么错
听不懂就多听几遍,然后就是跟读了/
NO.62 what do you want most in a friend--someone who is intelligent ,or someone who has a sense of humor .or someone who is reliable?which one of these characteristics is most important to you?use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice
I appreciate all of the three characteristics in my friend,However ,as far as I am concerned. Reliability is more important to me,because i can share something with him/her .on the other hand,the humorousness is also can make our life more happiness.However,the friend who is intelligent may help you get out the difficuty.Attitudes towards this hot discussion are varied, I would like to analyse each of them as follows.
For the first part .the friend who is reliable is the most important qualities to me.i firmly appreciate this because i can share my happiness with him/her ,i can share my bother with him/her.i can share my thoughts with him/her.my friend who is reliable will always stand up for me when i was in difficulty,he/she will always be patient with me,he/she will always not share my private details with anyone else.I can believe in him/her that we can company well with each other.
On the other hand ,the friend who has a sense of humor can make me laugh or make happiness when i was depressed.humorousness can make us more easily get along with.but it is not the essential element .For example.a humor stranger i first met ,we may get familiarity more facile.but we just the general relationship ,because sometimes the things should be serious however his humor attitude let me can not believe in him.
However,the intelligence in the friend can help you a lot .he/she may give you some effective suggestions when you are in worries.he may help you get rid of the problem which is boring you for a long time .Neverthless,he/she might despise you because of the intelligence.actrually ,one of his /her intellgence may higher than you ,but on the other aspect ,you are certainly higher than him/her.so this may cause you are jealous of each other which is absolutely can not exist in your friendship.
In the final analysis,i strongly commit to the notion that my friend has reliability is more important than the other two.Moreover,i have several friends who are reliable ,we get along well and this friendship is my great fortune in my life
最近不是很积极
加油加油,给自己打气,重新制定计划
最近不是很积极
加油加油,给自己打气,重新制定计划
已经剩不多天了,电脑还和我怄气
真是气人,反应慢的要死
谢谢版主,真的很感谢哦,还有JOYPAN
今天写的,希望有高人帮我看下有没有较之前的有小小的进步,还需要注意哪些方面.理由我写了两个,但是写的较详细吧
TOPICo you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain
There are many different views concerning about this topic,I would like to vote the point that the television ,newspaper,magazines,or the other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of the famous people.the media disturbe their lifestyle,even influence their family
Paying too much attention to their personal lives effect the famous people to have their usual habits.although they are the famous people on the screen but actually they are the ordinary people as us when get down from the platform.they may like to go shopping ,to watch the film,to paly with their friends.but the media disutrb these.they may trail them try to find something that we can not see on the screen because of the audience rating or attracting the eyebow of the people.For example ,a famous person who want to go to xiangyang road,but he can not avoid the front page of the news about him to such place which can influence his reputation.so he may choose to stay at home instead of it .how deplorable it is.
on the other hand,the media focus on their emotional life especially. For instance.he/she eat with an opposite sex.the media may guess they are the lovers ,but actually they are just eat because of the friendship,such as this news may impact their celebrity and they can not have friends normally.it is so pity that if you are a famous people,the cost is to lose your personal lives.
Furthermore,this action also can affect their family,because the media may focus on their father , mother or the back of the family ,attempting to find something different,such as whose family used to poor and whose father used to do something disgraceful .whose grade was not good in the schooltime,but they ignore that if they are successful now,we should concern about their nowdays or the future days not the past and not their family,it is irrelevant about their success,I believe that every famous people hope we concerning about their achievement and hope we do not disturb their family.After all we like them because of their charm not their family's
For all the reasons mentioned above ,I think we should concern about them approprately and the precondition is not to affect their life.
恩，大家一起加油
不管怎么样19号一定的过呀
复习了这么多天终于明天要考了,虽然还是觉得口语和综合写作还是有些困难
不过到了现在却是有些期盼即将要到来的考试
预祝楼住超常发挥，异常发挥，把ets扫地出门！！！！！！
楼主加油啊！
必胜！
考完了回来,已经看见有人已经发了JJ
口语Q1:描述你想去的一个地方
Q2:童年是一生最好的时候,同意否?
作文我写的有些跑题了,郁闷死了,估计没戏了
有些累了，下午也没吃东西
真的非常感谢ＣＤ上的朋友这几个月有你们的陪伴让我觉得心里很塌实，尤其要谢谢山衔版主啊，因为我的水平也不怎么样就不在这发什么什么了，估计ＪＪ一会就有牛人都发全的，也不知道该怎么回报大家！因为作文的跑题让我很受挫，不过这几个月很充实，以后还会继续关注ＣＤ，大家要继续加油啊！
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