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标题: 还是有争议，请NN看看：再问gwd-17-18 [打印本页]

作者: spritejudy 时间: 2006-10-18 09:56
标题: 还是有争议，请NN看看：再问gwd-17-18

，Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.
With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.

看过贴了，首先明确，C是不对的，one's being done错。

A呢，as a result of和because，有人说含义平行（个人觉得光含义平行有些勉强，暂且算个理由），有人说og里有in part that和because平行的情况（但我觉得og和这题是不同的，in part that和because后面接的都是句子，那都算作连词，而这边as a result of作为介词结构，because作为连词，怎么可以平行呢）

看贴之前，自己选的是B。有人说was due to ... in addition to ...不对，为什么啊？有什么规律伐？

open to discussion!

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作者: kevin_chee20 时间: 2006-10-18 10:15

选 C 正确。

在这儿one's being done 是正确的。B 是最不能选的。语序很乱，语义也很乱

作者: spritejudy 时间: 2006-10-18 10:47

还有没有人发表下意见啊？

作者: spritejudy 时间: 2006-10-18 16:01

NN,NN?

作者: rachelchen52 时间: 2008-12-3 10:46

B. Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery

我查了后面的in addition的词性是adv,意思是“另外”，如果B要对的话，是不是in addition前面应该加个连词？比如and...

作者: grape262001 时间: 2009-1-24 22:53

我不是NN，谈谈自己的看法，我觉得B最大的问题，是存在歧义，不知道in addition to修饰的是哪个成分。

应该是作为一个原因与due to后面的内容并列的，但是，由于逗号的隔开，使得它可能去修饰主句，产生歧义并改变句意。

不知道分析的对不对，请NN现身！

作者: southnorth 时间: 2009-1-24 23:52

同意楼上的,此外for表原因,别扭啊

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