Tom Mark, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie(The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
A. Tom Mark, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
B. Tom Mark, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
C. Jazz pianist and composer Tom Mark, who produced a body of work rooted
D. Jazz pianist and composer Tom Mark produced a body of work that was rooted
选D,其他为什么错啊
请大人指点!
A:who was不简洁;both结构错误,没有and与之搭配
B:也错误的使用了both
C:who produced...使句子没有谓语
个人意见,请指教
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