写essay时感到我的经历较复杂，很难写。请高手给一些建议，如何处理比较复杂的经历。谢谢！ 作者: joyoni 时间: 2003-10-17 02:28
you know yourself the best. you can igonore some part of your w/e or emphasize on one or two parts. especially, pay attention to the criteria of the University you aim at.
I am not a niu ren.作者: chipmunk 时间: 2003-10-17 06:33
Agree with joyoni that you pick up part of your experience.作者: SmileFM 时间: 2003-10-17 13:43
You could try to find a main line to connect parts of your experience.作者: sfish 时间: 2003-10-17 13:51
I think one important thing is you need give Adm Com good reason(s) why you have such complicate W/E.作者: zt6127 时间: 2003-10-17 15:50
thaks a lot!!!!!!!作者: tsljz 时间: 2003-10-17 23:41
when you write about a lot of w/e, you need to make sure that you explain why you made those transitions.作者: wangp_cn 时间: 2003-10-18 17:49
俺也类似，嘿嘿
鄙人以为当您自己开过公司，又有过高管经历，那就不要再谈工作了： 从事业发展的角度去写。 不管是自己经营还是寄人篱下，都是为了事业的长期发展做准备，而不是简单的工作和打工。 据说牛校比较看重这个。作者: zt6127 时间: 2003-10-19 23:38
thanks to wangp_cn. could we discuss the issue in question and some other issues about application , since we have the same experience.
my e-mail is zhangtian@peoplemail.com.cn
作者: wangp_cn 时间: 2003-10-20 13:10
No problem brother. However, I am not sure what your questions were. Each school has different essay set, and should be addressed accordingly. I believe your unique experience and perspective in business could be discussed more, rather than, say my xxx project at xyz Corporation taught me abc :-)
I am struggling with applications too, for which I have written over 20 essays and trying to pick the good ones to further elaborate... good luck for both of us.
m y j u n k @ 1 6 3 . c o m 作者: cathine 时间: 2003-10-22 10:02
I am facing the similar problem too. difficult point is at the transition part. How to link everything with one theme. can I join your guys too? if ok, will email you soon.作者: zt6127 时间: 2003-10-22 16:47
you are welcome