It's a fine day today,and I'm going to travel to my uncle's home,a place where is 64 kilometers away from here.There are some different kinds of transportations I can use,such as bus,airplane,boat and train.All of them have their own advantages and disadvantages,it seems to be a hard decision I should make among them.But as for me,I will certainly choose bus to travel.This is based on the three main thoughts as follows.
First of all,64 kilometers is not a very far distance,so it’s not necessary for me to take the airplane or the train.Obviously,they are both more expensive than the bus.Although I can reach my destination much faster with them,as a student still depend on parents,I would rather choose bus to save money.This is the thought of economy.
Secondly,I will take my personal interest into account.Maybe it’s a little strange for some people,taking bus is one of my favorate things.It’s really a great joy for me.I like enjoy the different sights outside the window,while listening my favorate CD.At that time,I would think of many things without limits.Sometimes I would recall my happy memories,sometimes I would imagine my further,and sometimes I would miss someone I care.Doing all these things always make me feel peace and delighted.This is the thought of my own habit.
The third reason,however,not as important as the former ones,is my body reaction to boat.Taking boat sometimes makes me feel uncomfortable.It’s thus not a good choice for me.This is the thought of my health.
Therefore,with the three reasons above,economy,habit,and health,taking bus is my best choice.I’m sure I would have a pleasure trip with it. 作者: elsiechz 时间: 2003-10-16 23:34
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————————————————————————————— Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone,and others like to be with friends most of the time.As for me,I would prefer to choose the latter one,that is ,to be with my friends most of the time.My choice is based on several reasons as follows.
First of all,when I talk with my friends,I always feel happy.Especially after class or the busy study,talking with friends is the best way for me to relax.We can discuss everything we are interested in,or complain about the difficult problems in class and exchange our thoughts with each other.Sometimes when I feel down,my friends' company and encourage could make me feel much better.If I spend most of my time alone,I will feel lonely and depressed.
In the second place,spending most of the time with friends also has another advantage.It can help me obtain many useful information that I don't have from my friends.I would also share the information I know with them.By this kind of communication,we can all know much better about the surroundings,and broaden our knowledge in this information age.
Thirdly,in the modern society, inter-personal relationship is very important for every one.Spending time with friends is the best way to expand our inter-personal relationship.From doing this,I can enhance the friendship with my friends,and when I am in dilemma,I would not feel helpless.I would also be pleased to help my friends when they have difficulties.This can make me feel my value among people.
Of course,spending most of the time alone also has some advantages,for instance,it can provide people with a quiet space to think over carefully.But in my view,due to the reasons listed above,spending most of the time with friends is much more suitable for me. 作者: invisiblewy 时间: 2003-10-17 14:37
交通工具这篇题目太无聊了，还是说说第二篇吧，我建议如下Revision，仅供参考哦 ：）
第一段：As for me,I would prefer to choose the latter one--->As far as I am concerned, I prefer the latter 第二段：... encourage could make me feel much better---> encouragement can make... 第三段：...we can all know much better about the surroundings,and broaden our knowledge in this information age---> we all broaden our horizon and get to know better about the world around us. 第四段：to expand our inter-personal relationship--->to build up a network (因为上面刚刚用过interpersonal relationship，换一下下啦~~)作者: elsiechz 时间: 2003-10-17 14:41
感谢！！！^^ 终于有人指点了~~~ 我的作文大概在什么水平啊？。。。心虚ING。。。 作者: invisiblewy 时间: 2003-10-17 14:43
还有，thirdly那段，我感觉主题不够鲜明，你是想说develop interpersonal relationship呢？还是想说feel your value呢？读到这一段结尾的时候有点点confused