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作者: njsjfr    时间: 2003-10-15 19:31
标题: 向改错高手们请教一道题目?
In 1990’s, there are more babies were born by women over thirty years old than under it.
A than under it.
B than were they under it.
C than had been under it
D than were the babies.
E than those were under it.

我不知道参考答案, 大家讨论一下, 我个人在(A)和(E)之间犹豫不决.
作者: chenmoon    时间: 2003-10-15 20:34
哪里的题目?
作者: ricesu    时间: 2003-10-15 21:21
个人倾向于a
理由:1)e德those指代不清,从句的代词优先指代主句主语,而主句主语是babies
2) 前面是there be,后面是those were,不符合平行结构
a虽然省略的利害一点,凑合着还像样吧,不知道诸位大大的意见呢
印象中,这种时间,地点的比较,是可以这样省略的

作者: chenmoon    时间: 2003-10-15 21:31
问一个问题,这句前面部分there are ... were born by ... 算不算run-on sentence啊?
作者: njsjfr    时间: 2003-10-19 08:55
是一道朋友告诉我的十月份真题.
作者: tony6    时间: 2003-10-19 09:13
是老题吧,偶认为是A,因为在THAN之前有两个复数代词BABIES和WOMEN,用THOSE反而指代不清,另外这个比较是在修饰成分中,直接用省略后的UNDER表达更好一点。
作者: snowdrop1    时间: 2003-10-19 09:17
题目没有记完整吧?
题干就有问题,
a不对,it能指代thirty years old ?
作者: yzlinlin    时间: 2003-10-19 18:51
A,简练清晰干脆。

E容易有歧义,其中的were使得整句的平行仿佛是:more babies were born...than those were....




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