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作者: jessiebetty    时间: 2006-8-15 17:25
标题: TTGWD30-41 好心人看看怎么觉得都不对啊

Q41:

Elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, which would make it seem that elk are mountain dwellers, while they once ranged over virtually all of the continental United States except for a small strip in the extreme Southwest.

 

  1. Elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, which would make it seem that elk are mountain dwellers, while
  2. The fact that elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains would make it seem that they are mountain dwellers, but
  3. It would seem that elk would be mountain dwellers because of their living now solely almost in the Rocky Mountains, but still
  4. Now living almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, it would seem that elk were mountain dwellers, although
  5. It seems that elk would be mountain dwellers from the fact that they now live solely almost in the Rocky Mountains, since

这题不明白为什么选A呢??

作者: dori0214    时间: 2006-8-15 20:02

which指代错误

作者: zimerman    时间: 2006-8-16 20:58
不是选B么？
作者: silviaqiu    时间: 2006-8-17 02:38

我也觉得应该选B啊,但是答案给的是A

作者: mbz    时间: 2006-8-17 10:22

B is correct.

A) Elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, which would make it seem that elk are mountain dwellers, while

A is wrong because the "which" is definitely a bad choice here.

作者: 挥着猪翅膀    时间: 2006-8-17 10:30

楼上的兄弟可否细讲一下，哪里规定了有which就一定错？再问一下你觉得这个题考的是什么？俺语法太滥了~~弄不明白

现在栖息地只在落基山，而以前是整个北美大陆。这是不是一个完整的对比呢？除A外其他选项哪个能清晰地表达这个意思？

作者: mbz    时间: 2006-8-17 10:43
  1. Elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, which would make it seem that elk are mountain dwellers, while
       (A is wrong simply b/c of "which", usually which can refer to Rocky Mountains, or Elk. But the logical meaning here obviously means the fact that Elk live in the mountains. Hence, the choice is  deadly wrong.)
  2. The fact that elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains would make it seem that they are mountain dwellers, but
       (Correct)
  3. It would seem that elk would be mountain dwellers because of their living now solely almost in the Rocky Mountains, but still
       (awkward)
  4. Now living almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, it would seem that elk were mountain dwellers, although
       (not parallel)
  5. It seems that elk would be mountain dwellers from the fact that they now live solely almost in the Rocky Mountains, since (wrong choice of words)

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作者: 挥着猪翅膀    时间: 2006-8-17 11:23
楼上的意思是which指代不清晰？which用于表示整个句子的时候就是错误的罗？是这样吗？
作者: mbz    时间: 2006-8-17 11:47
以下是引用挥着猪翅膀在2006-8-17 11:23:00的发言：
楼上的意思是which指代不清晰？which用于表示整个句子的时候就是错误的罗？是这样吗？

you are right.

作者: silviaqiu    时间: 2006-8-17 18:43
以下是引用挥着猪翅膀在2006-8-17 11:23:00的发言：
楼上的意思是which指代不清晰？which用于表示整个句子的时候就是错误的罗？是这样吗？

除了as其他代词都不能指代句子

作者: captain_ma    时间: 2006-10-7 22:42
这个题的答案到底是什么？a肯定有问题的
作者: MaccMichAA    时间: 2006-10-25 11:17

...

作者: boochxu    时间: 2006-10-30 09:12
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作者: harriethan    时间: 2006-12-19 21:11

我觉得如果从平行关系来看　选A是有一定的道理的

Elk
                now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, which would make it seem that elk are mountain dwellers,
                    while
                they once
                ranged over virtually all of the continental United States except for a small strip in the extreme Southwest.　

Elk -- they  now--once

while 用来对前后两部分形成对比

(前面说) Elk 现在几乎只住在Rocky Mountains  但是 (后面说)　他们过去实际上是遍布于美国大陆的除了在最西南部的小部分狭长地带（没有他们的居住）　

但我也很疑惑which 在这里的用法　

作者: harriethan    时间: 2006-12-20 12:21

没人理呀 顶一下

作者: bystander80    时间: 2007-5-22 21:08

支持选B.

作者: llxx1985cn    时间: 2007-6-5 08:33
不明白
作者: llxx1985cn    时间: 2007-6-5 08:36
以下是引用mbz在2006-8-17 10:43:00的发言：

D.Now living almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, it would seem that elk were mountain dwellers, although
   (not parallel)

E.It seems that elk would be mountain dwellers from the fact that they now live solely almost in the Rocky Mountains, since (wrong choice of words)

不明白D中为什么要平行呢

E中用词怎么了

作者: chamcham    时间: 2007-6-21 18:09
以下是引用llxx1985cn在2007-6-5 8:36:00的发言：

D.Now living almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, it would seem that elk were mountain dwellers, although
   (not parallel)

E.It seems that elk would be mountain dwellers from the fact that they now live solely almost in the Rocky Mountains, since (wrong choice of words)

不明白D中为什么要平行呢

E中用词怎么了

I think that is a typo, it should be "it" can not be the subject of "living" 
作者: colorful_na    时间: 2007-7-15 23:03
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作者: 小雪猫    时间: 2007-7-30 07:04
?
作者: LuckiPanda    时间: 2007-7-30 09:42
好心人啊，不要再问号刷屏了好吗，球球你了
作者: gusimei    时间: 2007-8-19 23:54
偶think, B is the best choice.

A) which 不能指代整个句子，白勇语法书里是一直这么写的。
B）
C）‘because of their being’ -ing分词前面不能加one's
D）‘Now living’, -ing分词在句首，逻辑主语应该是句子主语，it 显然不能充当
E) 'since'逻辑不对， 而且since从句里的they指代不明啊

一点看法
作者: david_sz    时间: 2007-8-20 12:23

The fact that elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains would make it seem that they are mountain dwellers, but

想要问问这里的IT不是指代elk对吗？

作者: ligaoping    时间: 2007-8-22 16:01
以下是引用david_sz在2007-8-20 12:23:00的发言：

The fact that elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains would make it seem that they are mountain dwellers, but

想要问问这里的IT不是指代elk对吗？

同问。感觉这个It很怪。另外B选项的would make it seem that+

从句这个用法对吗？


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作者: mimixiaxia    时间: 2007-8-30 22:08
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作者: mimixiaxia    时间: 2007-8-30 22:11
以下是引用LuckiPanda在2007-7-30 9:42:00的发言：
好心人啊，不要再问号刷屏了好吗，球球你了

这话说的太搞笑了(不好意思,水一下)
作者: eileenmu木    时间: 2008-3-25 10:03
我这边的答案是B
作者: pharmacystar    时间: 2008-3-25 14:55

B

从逻辑含义来看，A和B都可以

后面是转折

但是A中which不对

作者: 五月十三    时间: 2008-3-25 16:59
以下是引用silviaqiu在2006-8-17 18:43:00的发言：

除了as其他代词都不能指代句子

谢谢
作者: yzhao26    时间: 2008-5-25 23:37
ding
作者: yzhao26    时间: 2008-5-25 23:57
作者: shiverson    时间: 2008-5-26 00:14

逻辑优先吧,强调的是前面NOW这一句，现在住在山里，被认为是mountain dweller,虽然怎么怎么样

B的这个but...感觉重心调了个个儿

请指教

作者: ruru8ruru8    时间: 2008-8-11 10:11

请问B的it 是虚主词吗？

另，如果Ｅ后面未划线的they指代有问题，那B里头的they一样也有问题阿…

作者: georgetseng    时间: 2008-8-11 10:36
B)
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作者: jeffyofbupt    时间: 2008-9-17 22:42

A 选项中，which 在语法结构上明显指代 mountains， 从语义逻辑上，应该指代前面的整个句子！

在GMAT中，用which指代整个句子，这是明显的错误！

作者: singdeath    时间: 2008-10-23 17:35
先吐一个！图片点击可在新窗口打开查看 ETS真恶心！

觉得如果这题真的选A，那么逻辑意思就是唯一的解释了。原句while引导从句说过去的事，主句在前面，重心在说现在的事。而B选项用but，主从顺序颠倒了，重心转到说过去的事了。

语法上来说，A除了那个which之外，确实没什么错误，表达也很简洁清晰，把前后两个转折意思的事实写成ETS式的两个分句。记得很多SC的题目都是企图把两个分句写成一个整句造成awkward，作为错误选项的。
但是A的那个which，也经常出现在错误选项里的。
而B中的the fact that....would make it seem that.....确实不是很简洁.......

所以，我觉得相比之下，A虽然有错误（只是which的问题），但B的错误更多（不太简洁，主从句子重心改变－这个最致命）。
所以我投降，投靠A去了。图片点击可在新窗口打开查看 
哎，以后记得长个心眼，难选的时候先看看句子逻辑意思！


作者: NOTALOSER    时间: 2008-11-14 15:45

还是VOTE FOR B！用排除法

作者: iser    时间: 2008-12-12 16:29

选B.此题B选项包含有两个考点，都是关于词的用法。

1.it seems that...为固定搭配，意为"好像..."。it作为形式主语，指代后面的句子。注意这里seem为系动词，后面不一定要接表语。

如：It seems that something unusual will happen to them.

    It seems unusual that something will happen to them.

2.make sb do...中make为使役动词，后面接的是不加to的不定式。

使役动词make“使某人……”。用法如下：

1. "make + sb + adj"，make 是谓语动词，sb是make的宾语，后边的形容词在此作宾语的补足语。例如：

Rainy days make me sad.

雨天让我很悲伤。

What he said made the teacher angry.

他说的话让老师很生气。

Soft music makes me sleepy.

轻柔的音乐让我想睡觉。 

2. "make + sb + 过去分词"，此处的过去分词相当于形容词作宾补。例如：

Loud music makes me stressed out.

大声的音乐让我很紧张。

Waiting for him in the rain made me annoyed.

在雨中等他让我很烦。

The soccer game made the people excited.

那场球赛让人们很激动。

3. " make + sb + 动词原形"，此处的动词原形也叫省略to的不定式，也作宾补。例如：

Sad movies always make me cry.

伤感的电影经常让我哭泣。

Loud music makes Tina want to dance.

大声的音乐让蒂娜想跳舞。

Hard seats in fast-food restaurants make people eat fast and leave.

快餐店的硬座位使人们快点吃完离开。

4. 如果在被动语态中，宾语改为主语，宾补也应叫做主语的补足语，此时主动语态中的宾补——不带to的不定式，应改为带to的不定式作主语的补足语。例如：

The boss made him work for 15 hours a day.

→ He was made to work for 15 hours a day (by the boss).

（老板让）他每天（得）工作15小时。

The teacher made the boy do his homework again.

→ The boy was made to do his homework again ( by the teacher ).

（老师让）那个孩子（得）重新写作业。

作者: yzhao26    时间: 2009-3-13 05:30
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作者: 拉比rara    时间: 2009-4-2 09:12

1.     GMAT里面which只能指代前面的词，不能指句子，排除A

2.     B没有明显问题，用fact引导主语从句表达清晰

3.     C中because of living显得十分awkward，排除C

4.     It不能做living的逻辑主语，排除D

5.     整个句子结构和表达都不好，尤其是since这个词没有表达出转折的意思，明显排除E

作者: jean1280    时间: 2009-6-26 23:39
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作者: 苹果夹心派    时间: 2009-7-28 14:23
作者: Norgar    时间: 2009-8-4 03:22

芝麻开门

作者: IanV    时间: 2009-9-6 14:35

倒~elk单复同型啊。。。

作者: vany199033    时间: 2011-5-20 12:51
其实我觉得B选项也有指代不明的错误，比如说they到底是指代mountains还是elk（mountain dewellers)其实也是存在混淆的，而在OG上很多这样的选项都是算作错误选项的，大家怎么认为的呢？求牛人指点。。。
作者: W.H.Y    时间: 2016-9-11 18:34
这道题出现在GMATPrep上, 答案是B. 我也同意B.

A. COMMA+WHICH...修饰的是之前就近的Rockly Mountain, 意思是"落基山脉"让"麋鹿看上去成了高山行者", 但应该表述的是"几乎仅生活与落基山脉"这个情况让"麋鹿看上去成了高山行者".
B. 没问题. The fact 没问题. 另外有说重心改变, A强调的是"虽过去遍布九州, 已泯然高山行者" 重在已泯然, B强调"虽已泯然高山行者, 可过去曾遍布九州", 重在过去遍布. 感觉两个都make sense, 而且个人更偏好重在过去辉煌这个重心, 感觉更通顺
C. Because of their living不仅是awkward了, 是的确不对. 在咱考试里, Because + CLAUSE, Because of + NOUN是可以的, 但 Because of VERB-ing一定不对.
主要是这个问题, 还有两个, 我个人赶脚是次要问题:
i. solely almost在逻辑上不通. A, B, D酱讲almost solely是通顺的, almost是"差一点点就全部/几乎", solely是"排除所有其他情况/只", almost solely表述了"几乎仅生活在落基山脉", solely almost表述了"仅几乎生活在落基山脉", 就有些尴尬.
ii. would seem that elk would be... 和 seem that elk are...的意思也有不同. 前者表述了"仅活在落基山"的事实让麋鹿似乎"会成为高山行者", 后者表述了"仅活在落基山"的事实让麋鹿"看上去是高山行者". "会成为"是冗余的内容.
D. Now living...决定了逻辑主语是麋鹿, 而不是it would seem的it.
E. 当年曾遍布 vs 现今已泯然应该是反差的并列, 而不是前因后果的关系. 用since表达的含义不对鸟.
另外也有C.i和C.ii的小问题.




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