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作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-4 23:11
标题: @_@9月考,作文互改小组,招队员啦@_@

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作者: tracy1dy    时间: 2006-8-5 21:54
每天写一篇感觉有点多, 呵呵, 如果每两天写一篇可以.
作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-6 00:06

恩。那就两天写一篇。想多写的,可以自己加练。

希望快一点有多些人来参加。够四人,我们就马上开始。


作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-12 01:27
怎么没人啊?!大家都不重视,还是很厉害,还是容易?
作者: pumpkin    时间: 2006-8-12 02:04
是大家怕写,呵呵
作者: 顾风    时间: 2006-8-12 02:09
是啊。。。写作文很痛苦滴。。。。
作者: pumpkin    时间: 2006-8-12 02:17

楼主先写一片贴出来看看吧

或者先看看改改

AI022

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=26&ID=186650&page=1

AA009

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=26&ID=186649&page=1


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作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-13 01:52

就是啊,我也很懒写,所以才想找点人一起有多点气氛和动力。

我自己用了个别人的摸版,套了两篇,感觉挺别扭的,不敢拿出来吓大家;但还想坚持套摸版。

作文真的好重要,工作天天要用。

有大家的回复,挺高兴的,大家下下决心,一起坚持来练一练吧。


作者: pumpkin    时间: 2006-8-14 12:06
会看,会改,比纯粹的写要有用。
作者: roric    时间: 2006-8-17 11:26

痛苦的来报个名,作文是我永远的痛,还有整一个月,这次要更认真的对待,不知能否坚持下来


作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-18 00:53
以下是引用roric在2006-8-17 11:26:00的发言:

痛苦的来报个名,作文是我永远的痛,还有整一个月,这次要更认真的对待,不知能否坚持下来

欢迎roric”加入啊!我都几天没理作文了,大家一起来写写吧。

"tracy1dy"和“顾风”是报名的吗?快来加入或回复吧。


作者: susancheng    时间: 2006-8-18 03:05

when you want to take the exam?

when will th plan ends?


作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-18 14:06
以下是引用susancheng在2006-8-18 3:05:00的发言:

when you want to take the exam?

when will th plan ends?

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作者: kathy8446    时间: 2006-8-18 15:54

没有毅力和时间写这么多作文。。。

不过建议照着今年高频题和7、8、9月的出频挑题目写,感觉对AWA来说去年的JJ作用不大。


作者: tracy1dy    时间: 2006-8-18 16:49
以下是引用kathy8446在2006-8-18 15:54:00的发言:

没有毅力和时间写这么多作文。。。

不过建议照着今年高频题和7、8、9月的出频挑题目写,感觉对AWA来说去年的JJ作用不大。

同意, 感觉不用写太多, 关键是记住一些经典句子,另外有时间的话不如多分析题库的题目, 可以在短时间内写出有意义的东西.


作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-18 18:10

到底AWA的jj应该参看什么时候的啊?cd里不是有一个jj时间参考表格,我是按那个表格找去年的。

现在开始,每两天写一篇,一点也不多了。


作者: kathy8446    时间: 2006-8-18 18:30

个人意见~特别是今年换出题东家的情况下

就我去年11月考的情况,也没出3个月的范围。当然啦,我不是说去年9月的JJ肯定没用,只是觉得今年7、8、9会更有用。

PS.这里没有false dilemma问题


作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-18 19:08

不过,作文的jj还不是最重要的,基本黄金80题,都好经典。

数学的jj应该是看7、8、9还是去年8、9呢


作者: kathy8446    时间: 2006-8-18 20:20

数学我没研究,好像是今年9月>去年9月>今年8月。7月隔太远了

基本上只有AWA是3个月吧


作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-19 01:14

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作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-23 03:34

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作者: vivianwsp198    时间: 2006-8-23 08:52

加我一个吧,我也是9月25号上海考,真愁作文怎么写呢。

MSN/EMAIL:vivianwsp198(a) 163.com

BQQ:547030748


作者: vivianwsp198    时间: 2006-8-23 08:56

不过你上线挺晚的啊,那会我估计睡着了。这样你晚上发给我我白天帮你看,我写的白天发给你你晚上帮我看完再发给我。


作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-24 00:56

Tracy和Vivian我已经从企业群向你们发出加入邀请,请加入.

请其他G友也快点来加入.


作者: roric    时间: 2006-8-24 09:28

这个号好奇怪,不是群哩

53257181加下我吧


作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-24 16:15

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作者: wencui0602    时间: 2006-8-25 23:31

也算我一个吧。9月26日就要考了。现在一直都没怎么写作文呢,急啊!!!

QQ:4948295

楼主加我吧


作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-25 23:37

0607-0608出频4次以上(基本都在06最新黄金80题之内)

AI:2,9,12,13,21,22,29,33,42,45,60,62,65,68,87

AA:2,9,10,34,40,43,44,47,52,105,106,110,112

题目太多,只好找这个来练练,再看看06最新黄金80题。


作者: he草    时间: 2006-8-30 20:33

楼主,人数够了吗?加我一个吧。9.16考试, 打字很慢,正在用功练习中


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作者: he草    时间: 2006-8-30 20:55

红色的是自己加的,实在没法在30min内打那么多字

13. “Responsibility for preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, not to government.”

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.

 

 

Who should take the responsibility of preserving the natural environment, individual person or governmentWhile some people claim that the responsibility of preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, others argues that government should take the main responsibility in this compain. In my view, both individual person and government should be responsible for preserving the natural environment and both the two play an important part in preserving the natural environment.

 

 

On the one hand, individuals (persons and corporations ) tend to pursue their short term interest regardless the public good. Although there are some individuals willing to make sacrifices and take the responsibility of preserving the natural environment, most corporations are more interested in their own benefits. The ultimate goal of individuals is to pursue interest. Moreover, the individuals willing to make sacrifices may not really want to make sacrifices, and all that they do are under their goal of maximizing corporation value. Without government, ----. Only government----.

 

 

On the other hand, government has the authority and power to regulate individuals and the ability to solve complex problems. Since most individuals will not spontaneously take the responsibility of preserving the natural environment, they may frequently do harm to environment, and bring many environmental problems, when their interests conflict with preserving the natural environment. Moreover, environmental problems are so complex that it naturally requires different departments in the government and social organizations from kinds of different areas to take part in solving problems. Therefore, a universal and powerful organization is needed to solve problems and government is the best one to assume the responsibility and plays an important role in coordinating individuals and the public good in environmental problems.

 

 

However, government also need help form individuals. Individuals should be responsible for what they have done to harm the environment, and thus they are supposed to 配合government to solve environmental problems. Moreover, some individuals can supply professional knowledge and expertise and some individual companies can give financial support government.  

  

 

 

To sum up, athough some individuals willing to make sacrifices and take the responsibility of preserving the natural environment, most corporations and - individuals -- are more interested in their own benefits. Moreover, the nature of the environment problems need a universal and powerful organization- government to take the responsibility of preserving the natural environment.


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作者: emute    时间: 2006-8-31 02:18
以下是引用he草在2006-8-30 20:33:00的发言:

楼主,人数够了吗?加我一个吧。9.16考试, 打字很慢,正在用功练习中


我们还没组成队呢,大家可能都正忙别的东东吧。

你的文章直接发到外面去,贴个连接进来就可以,这样比较多人看得到。

加油!!


作者: nicolechan28    时间: 2006-9-3 09:10

加我也可以吗??

9.22 广州考,深大学生

MSN:lum828(A) hotmail.com

QQ23821465

可以的话请尽快联系我~~


作者: emute    时间: 2006-9-6 02:47
几天没来。不好意思。




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