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标题: 完全批驳-ai28,遗憾没举例(加分析) [打印本页]

作者: lisiyin    时间: 2006-8-4 12:42
标题: 完全批驳-ai28,遗憾没举例(加分析)

`Because businesses use high-quality advertising to sell low-quality products, schools should give students extensive training in how to make informed decisions before making purchases.~

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.

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Your Answer:

Indeed,business advertisements are ubiquitous (obsess our daily life)in our daily lives disseminated everywhere in order to promote business products.However,conflicts generally emerge concerning whether this publication is extravagantly expressed so as to bail(allure) customers or its dazzling content is basically true(摸班).While there is hyperbole in many an advertisement,we cannot take for granted that high-quality advertising invariably follows(accompanies) low-quality commodities and that therefore it's necessary for schools to place excessively importance on this allegation and to organize training to help students to get to distinguish the genuine from the fake in the light of advertising alone.(全文主论点)
     Exaggerated though some advertisements have been,generally advertising does aptly illustrate the genuine quality of a product and informs potential buyers of its characters and how it can be used effectively(论点一).Advertising,in fact,is the most essential means to inform customers rather than propagate the product itself alone(废话,解释下advertising).High quality advertisements can mostly be adopted and powerfully promoted by producers who have confidence in the products and have substantial cash flow at hand to uphold advanced advertising campaign(展开,直接拨论).A low-quality manufacturer banking his sale strategy simply on advertising would soon find out that customers would never be conned the sencond time after their first using of the manufacturer's merchandise,goods not consistent with the descriptions in the advertisments ,and that all his investment in propaganda can never be recouped.Because promotion products with excessively exaggerated advertising is akin to falling into a vicious closed cycle in which money invested in advertising can never be compensated for by sales revenue(如果按照作者的想法推下去会有什么结果,可用反问句增强气势).For this reason,any sane low-quality merchandise producer would prudently promote his products within a relatively limited scope and in a moderate level of advertising,all in the control of his financial background and his estimation of the  feedback  in the market.Thereby,high-quality advertising generally reflects corresponding quality in the goods rather than low-quality commodities(小结).
   Furthermore,schools ,especially primary schools should not in the least level focus on how to help students orient their buying senses regardless of the background of advertising distorting products or whatsoever(论点2).Schools should follow the principles of youngsters in the selection of what should be the training focus(指出选择训练重点的根据不是外界可能流行什么而是孩子需要什么能理解什么).In such an early age,advised sense in distinguishing between the good and the wrong ,or in how to protect one's personal safety while walking alone should take precedence over these distracting matters such as advertising distinguishing.Thus,schools should devote time to helping students develop their senses in accordance to their ages and within the scope of their recognition rather than train them to be an advised buyers especially in such an early age,an action distracting and unseasonable(小结).
  In conclusion,from all these analyses can be seen that generally advertising is in compliance with the products it promotes and schools should not swerve to focus on excessive training in order to help students to be better customers.


作者: bestxuan    时间: 2006-8-4 15:54
LZ你能用中文说说你写的第1个原因吗?我不是很理解。不好意思。
作者: lisiyin    时间: 2006-8-5 00:24
是说如果low-quality merchandise producer采用high-quality advertising方法就会收不回成本,因为消费者得到的产品和宣传的不一样,因此没有low-quality producer会选择和high那些厂商一样的宣传方式,而是谨慎的控制宣传成本




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