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作者: 小脚乱飞    时间: 2006-6-27 18:25
标题: run-on结构是什么呢?

刚看到有关大全72,A选项

(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured 是一个ETS称为run-on的结构,精简后是Aho held festivals, they featured。2个句子不能这样并列

不太明白,什么是RUN-ON结构呢?

请NN们指点~


作者: carolhide    时间: 2006-6-27 18:53
不间断句子(run-on sentences)

  什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。

  例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.

  剖析:这个句子包含了两层完整的意思:“there are many ways.”以及“we get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。

  改为:

  there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.或:

  there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world


作者: littledou    时间: 2006-6-27 21:21

摘自kaplan Grammer Ref. guide

RUN-ON SENTENCES
When a sentence consists of more than one clause, those clauses must be joined properly. It is never acceptable
to hook two clauses together with a comma, as the “sentence” below does. That’s called a run-on sentence.
Wrong: Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869, he planned to teach classical philology.
There are a number of acceptable ways to fix a run-on.
1. Make two separate sentences:
Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869. He planned to teach classical philology.
2a. Change the comma to a semicolon:
Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869; he planned to teach classical philology.
2b. Join the clauses with a semicolon and a transition word such as however or therefore.
Nietzsche planned to teach classical philology; therefore, he moved to Basel in 1869.


作者: linda816    时间: 2006-9-26 08:57
以下是引用littledou在2006-6-27 21:21:00的发言:

摘自kaplan Grammer Ref. guide

RUN-ON SENTENCES
When a sentence consists of more than one clause, those clauses must be joined properly. It is never acceptable
to hook two clauses together with a comma, as the “sentence” below does. That’s called a run-on sentence.
Wrong: Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869, he planned to teach classical philology.
There are a number of acceptable ways to fix a run-on.
1. Make two separate sentences:
Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869. He planned to teach classical philology.
2a. Change the comma to a semicolon:
Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869; he planned to teach classical philology.
2b. Join the clauses with a semicolon and a transition word such as however or therefore.
Nietzsche planned to teach classical philology; therefore, he moved to Basel in 1869.

可是OG11上对run-on的解释里,说下面这个句子是对的,和kaplan的说法矛盾啊?

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