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作者: 马尔代夫 时间: 2006-6-2 13:39
标题: GWD-27-Q7

（1） GWD-27-Q7

Providing initial evidence that airport are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
as much annually as is emitted by the
as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
that emitted annually by all
that emitted annually compared to the

答案是D,我选得B,错在什么地方啊?

作者: gonghao 时间: 2006-6-2 14:27

the total amount....... is twice that(that必须补出)........

B as much annually as is emitted by the

两点错误：

1.amount不好用much，最好用big或者great

2.没有补出amount的代词

作者: 马尔代夫 时间: 2006-6-4 14:52

以下是引用gonghao在2006-6-2 14:27:00的发言：

the total amount....... is twice that(that必须补出)........

B as much annually as is emitted by the

两点错误：

1.amount不好用much，最好用big或者great

2.没有补出amount的代词

为什么必须补出呢.不明白?

作者: seastone 时间: 2006-6-6 02:49

看必较的对象是什么, 比较的是the total...emitted ...by... is twice that(the total....) emitted by.. 这里的emmitted 是定语修饰the total amount

作者: 香香茶 时间: 2006-6-6 10:51

我觉得B选项要改成as much as what is usually emitted by the才是可以接受的。

原选项省略了that，其实这里要用what，另外usually的位置也不对，当然这不是优先排除的考点。

作者: 马尔代夫 时间: 2006-6-7 12:10

谢谢楼上的XDJM,明白了,找到大全的两个例子

大全102例

1. American productivity is declining in relation to Europe’s; the energy expended
per unit of production in the United States is as much as twice that expended in West Germany.

(A) as much as twice that expended in West Germany( that指代the energy)

(B) as much as twice that of West Germany’s expenditure

(D) up to two times what West Germans expended（A）

(E) up to double the West German expenditure

大全404

2. In the 1980’s the rate of increase of the minority population of the United States was nearly twice as fast as
the 1970’s.

(A) twice as fast as(概念不对称)

(B) twice as fast as it was in(句子和短语不对称)

(D) two times faster than that of（C）

(E) two times greater than

twice用于数量上的翻倍

作者: ly365 时间: 2006-7-10 16:27
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作者: bluetea 时间: 2006-7-21 07:40
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作者: babypigsxm 时间: 2006-8-5 03:13

可是twice是副词，后面that如果是指代amount的话，一个副词直接跟代词好像也怪怪的

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作者: hedge 时间: 2006-12-10 09:50

看看

作者: heshaohua666 时间: 2006-12-12 09:57

the amount of ...is tiwce as great as ...

the production is tiwce as much as....

作者: michaellu97 时间: 2006-12-18 22:09

D is wrong, should be "what is emitted annually by all"

B is correct

作者: boochxu 时间: 2007-3-9 10:44

这题有无定论啊？

作者: ly365 时间: 2007-5-19 11:14
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作者: andylouis 时间: 2007-8-30 17:46
ding??

作者: happycg 时间: 2008-7-6 15:42
dddddddddd

作者: songlovegt 时间: 2009-3-10 19:07
GWD-27-Q7

（1） GWD-27-Q7

Providing
initial evidence that airport are a larger source of pollution than
they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that
the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare
International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
as much annually as is emitted by the
as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
that emitted annually by all (D)
that emitted annually compared to the

much 不能修饰 amount ？
可以google到很多使用 much amount 的例子，

作者: xiaoniuren 时间: 2009-4-19 12:34
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作者: xiaoniuren 时间: 2009-5-18 12:35
YES

作者: Eliott 时间: 2009-5-19 22:51
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作者: ccccccccccab 时间: 2009-8-2 23:30
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作者: 斯咏 时间: 2009-8-5 10:18
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作者: dedeson 时间: 2009-8-13 17:03

From ManhattanGmat:

i think the combination of "amount" and "as much as" would be tagged as redundant and therefore wrong.

i am not 100% on this, as the gmat's usage preferences are rather slippery at times, but there's no doubt that this suggestion is inferior to the version without "as much as".

shorter versions:
amount X is twice as much as amount Y --> inferior, and possibly even wrong (redundant)
amount X is twice amount Y --> undoubtedly better

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作者: moonlolita 时间: 2009-11-21 17:08
看来没有定论哦

作者: lala974 时间: 2011-5-30 13:32
Here is my take on this question:

Providing initial evidence that airport are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.
A. as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
That and which together are not right.

B. as much annually as is emitted by the
Altered intent because the word “all” is dropped.

C. as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
Unidiomatic: Idiom is “as much as”

D. that emitted annually by all
Correct. This is an eclipse. Notice the fully blown sentence:

Providing initial evidence that airport are a larger source of pollution than they were
once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice [the total amount of pollutant]emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago
metropolitan area.

Replace with our eclipse:
Providing initial evidence that airport are a larger source of pollution than they were
once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice that emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago
metropolitan area.

E. that emitted annually compared to the
Unidiomatic: “compared to” is used for examining similarities. “compared with” could be used”.

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