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标题: 看看ETS怎么折磨大家的 大全-12-18 [打印本页]

作者: promising    时间: 2006-4-22 17:40
标题: 看看ETS怎么折磨大家的 大全-12-18

这句话,我读完以后,都差点呕吐出来. 如果放在SC里面,简直是错的一塌糊涂.


他们这么写,纯粹就是为了制造阅读困难.



Two years ago, expenditures in Accounting for clerical supplies were the same as were expenditures that year in Billing for clerical supplies.


错误1. 重复.


错误2. were多余


错误3.that year位置难受


错误4.不平行



这么修改后,估计就舒服多了。


Expenditures for clerical supplies  in Accounting  two years ago were the same as those in Billing that year.







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