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作者: amber0919    时间: 2006-4-5 20:32
标题: 问having been done

这个做定语肯定错.见白勇讲解. 不做定语的情况下是不是有可能对呢?我没有找到确切例子.但OG86


86. Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War, Horace Pippin, a Black American painter, worked by holding the brush in his right hand and guiding its movements with his left.


(A) Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War


(B) In spite of his right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War


(C) Because there had been a sniper’s bullet during the First World War that crippled his right hand and arm


(D) The right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War(E)


(E) His right hand and arm crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War


In E, the best answer, the construction His right hand... crippled clearly and grammatically modifies the subject of the sentence, Horace Pippin. In A, the use of the two participles Having and being is ungrammatical. Choice B is awkward and changes the meaning of the original statement: the point is that Pippin’s method of painting arose because of, not in spite of, his injury. Choice C is wordy and awkwardly places the clause beginning that crippled... so that it appears to modify the First World War rather than bullet. In choice D, The should be His, and being should be omitted.


这里说A是不对的. 


我不知道是不是就在这一题里不对.有没有having been done用着没有问题的时候.一时找不到例子了.哪位知道??大家来讨论一下???


作者: amber0919    时间: 2006-4-6 10:57

作者: carolhide    时间: 2006-4-6 11:45

一般是不对的。因为这样的表达不简洁。


作者: cocomalawi    时间: 2006-4-6 21:23

Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War, Horace Pippin, a Black American painter, worked by holding the brush in his right hand and guiding its movements with his left.


A的确不对,我不知道小白怎么说的?我的看法是:


A的用法是现在分词做状语在句首表原因,他的主语应该是主句的主语,也就是hp先生.


你把HP代回来就有问题拉


HP同志用他的右手没问题,但是后面是一个平行结构and后面是arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet


不符合平行结构






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