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标题: 整句划线的这种语法题，不知道从哪里入手 [打印本页]

作者: cissie0128 时间: 2006-3-18 16:27
标题: 整句划线的这种语法题，不知道从哪里入手

Q19:

Heavy commitment by an executive to a course of action, especially if it has worked well in the past, makes it likely to miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.

Heavy commitment by an executive to a course of action, especially if it has worked well in the past, makes it likely to miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
An executive who is heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that worked well in the past, makes missing signs of incipient trouble or misinterpreting ones likely when they do appear.
An executive who is heavily committed to a course of action is likely to miss or misinterpret signs of incipient trouble when they do appear, especially if it has worked well in the past.
Executives’ being heavily committed to a course of action, especially if it has worked well in the past, makes them likely to miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpreting them when they do appear.
Being heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, is likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.

到底是c 还是e?

另外求教这种整句划线题的思路？

作者: lkl4008 时间: 2006-3-19 00:40
C,

作者: yaoyao99 时间: 2006-3-19 04:50
e.

The "it" in c is too far away from "a course of action". In e, "one" follows immediately after "a course of action", "them" and "they" follows right after "signs of incipient trouble", creates a tighter structure overall with no ambiguity.

I don't generally treat the fully underlined sentences any differently than partially underlined sentences. You'd always be looking for the usual, grammatical correctness, clarity, and conciseness.

作者: cissie0128 时间: 2006-3-19 15:38
到底选什么啊

作者: Miyokozhu 时间: 2014-1-16 13:39
选E!

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