“Company A has a large share of the international market in video-game hardware and software. Company B, the pioneer in these products, was once a $12 billion-a-year giant but collapsed when children became bored with its line of products. Thus Company A can also be expected to fail, especially given the fact that its games are now in so many American homes that the demand for them is nearly exhausted.”
我看了范文,也只归纳出两个问题:
1.similities are insufficient to support the conclusion
2.there might be relevant differences
这两点其实就是一回事,对吗?
是这个题目的内容过于简单了,还是我没找到问题的所在???
如果考试中遇到这种题目,没得可写该怎么办???
请NN指点,谢谢!
怎么还是没人理我?555555~
1。他因导致B倒闭
2。错误类比
3. so many 是多少,作者没给出具体数值
4。A公司是国际公司,国内市场饱和不代表要完蛋了。
1 false analogy
2 oversimplification: the popularity is not the direct reason of failure.
对于这道题,我的理解是——大的错误就是我列出的两个。小的还可以找很多,比如入画说的。但都可以归到大类里面。至于范文,我同意lz看法,他只不过是把类比错误拆开了讲。
继续讨论讨论……
除了上述的几点。还可以提提例如A公司也会不断研发新产品,以满足新市场等的可能性,所以不会倒闭!
挑几个重要的错误展开阐述,觉得应该就会不错了!个人觉得不一定要每一个点咬文嚼字一样地抓出来,特别是那些很小的点!
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