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Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted

Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

请问这题A为何不对？还有请教一下both的用法，谢谢！

作者: llfllfllf 时间: 2006-6-23 04:53

both A and B 这里的A和B必须要对称

这个题目A选项里面, both A and B 的结构不对称.

A=in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith, B=Duke Ellington

其实Willie (The Lion) Smith和Duke Ellington是对称的. 所以该题不应该用both A and B

另外: 正常的结构应该是 rooted both in```` and in `````

作者: lklszlklsz 时间: 2006-6-23 11:01
d

作者: icon 时间: 2006-6-23 14:36
同意D

作者: flybatter 时间: 2007-4-28 23:37
b为什么不对阿？，我觉得同位语应该用逗号分开的

作者: iamsan1984 时间: 2007-4-29 01:25
b的that was可省，不如e简洁

作者: selinahsiao 时间: 2007-11-2 19:06

以下是引用llfllfllf在2006-6-23 4:53:00的发言：

both A and B 这里的A和B必须要对称

这个题目A选项里面, both A and B 的结构不对称.

A=in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith, B=Duke Ellington

其实Willie (The Lion) Smith和Duke Ellington是对称的. 所以该题不应该用both A and B

另外: 正常的结构应该是 rooted both in```` and in `````

agree

所以
        ABE 快速删除
        因为both A and B 这些选项都没有平衡

C 感觉
        缺少谓语
        没有动词存在
        句子不完整

所以选D

作者: chixigua 时间: 2007-11-2 21:39

偶觉得是E阿

D中的that was可以应该省略的阿,不简洁

作者: GMMBA 时间: 2007-11-3 00:25

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