hi,大家好，这是我写的一篇issue. 请大侠们指点。万分感谢!没有用模版，但是觉得我写的例子好奇怪阿，不知道老外看得懂吗？可以这样写吗？这样写有什么问题吗？请指教。
16. “Public buildings reveal much about the attitudes and values of the society that builds them. Today’s new schools, courthouses, airports, and libraries, for example, reflect the attitudes and values of today’s society.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
In our daily life, various things reveal much about the attitudes and values of the society such as the novels, media and the contents of people always talking. How about public buildings? Different people hold different opinions. As far as I am concerned, I believe that today’s public buildings reflect the attitudes and values of today’s society. The following reasons would support my position.
First, public building is the product of architect who lived in our society and whose thought could be influenced by the whole society. People talks, thinks differently according to the different education backgrounds, the situations of contemporary society. For example, in
Second, public building, as the window of culture, is an important part of the society’s values. When a person visited a place, the first thing he or she looked is the public building such as airport, the highway or shopping mall. Each of buildings plays different function and also show the characteristic of this region. For instance, Most of buildings in
To sum up, public buildings can reveal the attitudes and values of society in a certain degree. When we open history books which describe every history period, it is affirmed that almost each book introduced the style of building. From these detailed information, the historian could analyze the direction of society development and the characteristic of each different period. Due to the above mentioned, we can admit that one of way to reveal culture of societies is to research public building.
In our daily life, various things reveal much about the attitudes and values of the society such as the novels, media and the contents of people always talking位置应该在things之后. How about public buildings? Different people hold different opinions. 这句话没有解释，否则就成废话了As far as I am concerned, I believe 这两个短语的意思一样重复了that today’s public buildings reflect the attitudes and values of today’s society. The following reasons would support my position.
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Second, public building, as the window of culture, is an important part of the society’s values. When a person visited a place, the first thing he or she looked is the public building复数 such as airport, the highway or shopping mall. Each of buildings plays different function and also show 单数the characteristic of this region. For instance, Most of buildings in
To sum up, public buildings can reveal the attitudes and values of society in a certain degree. When we open history books which describe every history period, it is affirmed that almost each book introduced the style of building. From these detailed information, the historian could analyze the direction of society development and the characteristic of each different period.这是理由，不应该放在这里 Due to the above mentioned, we can admit that one of way 复数to reveal culture of societies is to research public building.这句话又转移了文章主旨了。
个人观点，仅供参考。姐姐写得没有连贯和逻辑，想当然地写，很容易地忘了段落的主题句，和文章主旨。此外，基本的语法不能错。
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