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作者: laihong    时间: 2005-12-5 17:02
标题: GWD17-18

Q18:


Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.




  • Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

  • Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.

  • With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.

  • The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.

  • Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.

  • 答案:C.


    但我觉得with 的用法有问题


    作者: justintime    时间: 2005-12-5 20:32

    比较几个选项中C是最可行的一个,A 和B不平行,D 前半句不成句子,E 无主句。


    C 不是很順眼,但是要想表达两个并行的原因C还是最佳的,没有毛病;另外,C符合标准的动名词的复合结构,只不过感觉不好,英语中有类似的表达。


    作者: laihong    时间: 2005-12-5 22:45

    其实A的平行是对的.C中的WITH的修饰有问题,而不是感觉的问题


    作者: yangxiaogang    时间: 2005-12-6 03:38
    我觉得A不平行
    作者: laihong    时间: 2005-12-6 08:58

    Q3:


    Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.




    1. Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people


    2. As the cost of wireless service plummeted in the last year and as mobile phones became increasingly common, many people


    3. In the last year, with the cost of wireless service plummeting, and mobile phones have become increasingly common, there are many people


    4. With the cost of wireless service plummeting in the last year and mobile phones becoming increasingly common, many people are


    5. While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are

    这道题中的WITH的用法是不行的.


    作者: justintime    时间: 2005-12-7 01:05
    这是GWD9-3吧,有个哥们曾说过“21号以身试法,GWD 9-3一道语法题终于可以定论!”



    作者: sunnybest    时间: 2005-12-15 23:05
    以下是引用laihong在2005-12-6 8:58:00的发言:

    Q3:



    Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.







    1. Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people


    2. As the cost of wireless service plummeted in the last year and as mobile phones became increasingly common, many people


    3. In the last year, with the cost of wireless service plummeting, and mobile phones have become increasingly common, there are many people


    4. With the cost of wireless service plummeting in the last year and mobile phones becoming increasingly common, many people are


    5. While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are

    这道题中的WITH的用法是不行的.



    这题不是选D吗?


    作者: aph7    时间: 2005-12-17 19:12

    我认为C的问题非常多,完全可以排除:


    C. With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.


    绝对错误:


    1) with后面的表达完全可以用主动语气- With coal replacing charcoal


    2) by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery有歧意:by coal as the fuel used in (the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery)——括弧中的可以是一种理解。


    GMAT不喜欢形式:


    1)with ; 2) being; 3) 非人用's.


    而A中,有同学提到Over the course of 冗余,我查了GOOGLE,有这样的表达。我理解是强调过程,并没有绝对错误。后面的result和becaue 可能很不爽,但是不是绝对错误。


    作者: GMAT阿驴    时间: 2006-3-15 16:08

    Q3:



    Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.







    1. Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people


    2. As the cost of wireless service plummeted in the last year and as mobile phones became increasingly common, many people


    3. In the last year, with the cost of wireless service plummeting, and mobile phones have become increasingly common, there are many people


    4. With the cost of wireless service plummeting in the last year and mobile phones becoming increasingly common, many people are


    5. While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are

    这道题中的WITH的用法是不行的.

    这题选D 把   are using.....


    作者: amber0919    时间: 2006-4-22 10:37

    作者: lxzjojo    时间: 2006-11-2 16:24
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    作者: 晴天小狗    时间: 2006-11-9 15:57

    Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

    还是支持A。

     C实在是有点恶心


    作者: irinamm    时间: 2007-3-15 14:17

    还是c好点...


    作者: sweetbeer    时间: 2007-4-5 21:12
    大家考试的时候 或者做Prep时有没有遇到像这种being作正确选项的,我无奈了
    作者: 罗马青年    时间: 2007-7-6 11:58

    第1次碰到 with...being 是正确答案的!

    看到with...being ,我上来就排除了C;考试别碰到这种题就行!


    [此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-6 12:38:31编辑过]

    作者: Amyfly    时间: 2007-7-27 20:51
    虽然偶选的B,还是支持A, C我觉得非常不对.我首先就排掉了.原文中有原因的意思,而用with我觉得不能很好的表达原因的意思,应该还是一种伴随.而且being的用法,og里基本都是错的
    作者: 阿土莎莎    时间: 2007-11-29 16:37
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    作者: zhangtao32510    时间: 2010-9-28 15:40
    为什么D不能看成是, 表示伴随原因的一半独立主格
    作者: zhangtao32510    时间: 2010-9-28 15:40
    为什么D不能看成是表示伴随原因的一般独立主格




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