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作者: puccamummy    时间: 2005-11-11 16:39
标题: GWD 17-14

Q14:


Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.




  • Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

  • Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

  • The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

  • Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete

  • Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies

    •    Answer: B


    为什么A错呢 ？

    作者: tigerzheng    时间: 2005-11-11 20:43
    我个人认为AS在此表示原因，而A从AS后不是一个句子，所以不对。
    作者: puccamummy    时间: 2005-11-11 21:06

    是啊


    现在头脑清醒多了


    就是这个原因！

    要用such as 或者as＋句子
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    作者: yangxiaogang    时间: 2005-11-12 12:13
    我不同意2楼意见， B中as后边仍然是引导完整状语从句。我觉得A和B相比 有2个错误，‘they'指代不清；competing company 由于定语从句。请指教！
    作者: wanze    时间: 2005-11-12 21:12
    b　　　读不通啊
    作者: drift_er    时间: 2005-11-12 21:55
    B的平行结构最工整，they指代lines。
    作者: tom_2008    时间: 2005-11-12 23:41
    B中的they是否指代不清，可以指代industries？
    作者: narcissus1225    时间: 2005-11-13 02:09

    有幾點疑問 如果有誤 務必請各位指正


    1. A,和B的指代對像不是都是一樣嗎? 都是指代lines??


    還是因為B的...the lines of competition...  以N1 of N2的時後 N1要用the明確指出來嗎?? 不太清楚可不可以這樣判斷 請各位指正


    2. 另外前面有nn提到  "B的competing company 由于定语从句" 但是這樣說來A的" the more established industries" 不也是很好嗎?


    3. A的" , as companies that compete one day may be partners the next" 不也是一個完整的句子嗎? 是因為 compete後面不完全的關係嗎? (沒有說清楚compete甚麼東西) 所以不選的嗎?


    作者: Joey    时间: 2005-11-13 08:49
    以下是引用puccamummy在2005-11-11 16:39:00的发言：

    Q14:


    Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.





    1. Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

    2. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

    我觉得A，B的前半部分都没错，因为they附近都有in the internet industry做状语，they可以确定是指代lines，并且B的结构更平行，使得they的指代更清晰。


    而后半句A就没有B好，


    1。companies that compet 没有competing companies 简洁


    2。化简a 为companies may be partners..


          化简B为 competing companies may be partners... B的逻辑性更清晰的表现了对比的关系



    个人观点



    1. The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

    2. Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete

    3. Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies

       Answer: B


    为什么A错呢 ？



    作者: yangxiaogang    时间: 2005-11-13 09:08

    "2. 另外前面有nn提到  "B的competing company 由于定语从句" 但是這樣說來A的" the more established industries" 不也是很好嗎"


    回楼上， 我认为more established indusries 有歧义，是更多的已经建立的产业呢（MORE做形容词）？还是建立程度比较深的产业呢（MORE做副词）？另外好像ETS不喜欢这种冠词+形容词（副词）+形容词+名词这样的结构。请指教！

    作者: zx_nju    时间: 2005-11-23 20:50

    more established industries是有歧义

    作者: zhanghuiyong    时间: 2005-11-23 21:38
    同意B
    作者: felix_zheng    时间: 2005-11-25 16:02

    Q14:


    Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.




    1. Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete (WHEREAS 结构比较概念最好一致.COMPANIES用ADJ修饰好于定语从句)

    2. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies(正确)

    3. The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete(UNLIKE不清+不必要的定语修饰)

    4. Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete(同C)

    5. Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies(UNLIKE比较不清)
    作者: aph7    时间: 2005-12-17 18:43

    我支持A，并且认为B 的错误非常明显。


    B中，as competing companies one day may be partners the next—— one day是做什么成分呢？它显然是和后面的the next (day)对应的，而the next 显然是组状语的，那么one day也是做状语，在可能修饰一个名词短语呢？


    A中大家攻击的the more established industries，并不会有歧义，因为有the；有歧异的案例是to produce more cost-saving small cars（大致如此，呵呵）和to produce small cars that are more cost-saving。很明显这个案例和本题是不同的。如果没有the，的确有两种含义；加了之后就没有歧义了。

    作者: elvislg2003    时间: 2005-12-21 09:50

    I vote for A.


    in B "..., as competing companies one day may be partners the next" What does "one day" modify? A : as companies that compete one day may be partners the next . It is clear and unambiguous.


    Also in A, "the more established industries " is ok. The following is search result from Google:


    Jurisprudence - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
    The more established themes are listed below:. Legal history, including legal
    historiography and hermeneutics;; Legal philosophy;; Legal science, ...
    en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jurisprudence - 25k - Cached - Similar pages

    作者: hotlinda    时间: 2005-12-24 18:41

    奇怪了,怎么搜寻到的页面都直接看不到回复的啊  

    作者: 棱角优雅的冰    时间: 2006-2-6 00:49
    以下是引用aph7在2005-12-17 18:43:00的发言：

    我支持A，并且认为B 的错误非常明显。


    B中，as competing companies one day may be partners the next—— one day是做什么成分呢？它显然是和后面的the next (day)对应的，而the next 显然是组状语的，那么one day也是做状语，在可能修饰一个名词短语呢？


    A中大家攻击的the more established industries，并不会有歧义，因为有the；有歧异的案例是to produce more cost-saving small cars（大致如此，呵呵）和to produce small cars that are more cost-saving。很明显这个案例和本题是不同的。如果没有the，的确有两种含义；加了之后就没有歧义了。


    完全同意。而且B用although总觉得逻辑意思上怪怪的。GMAT中如果原文的逻辑结构没有错，就最好不要改成其他的逻辑结构。


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    作者: wycg    时间: 2006-2-6 08:59

    我觉的原答案B好些.


    A写的不太好.竟管AB意思差不多.

    作者: 五大老    时间: 2006-3-4 11:33
    奇怪
    作者: 追逐梦想2006    时间: 2006-3-17 21:59

    同意A


    competing companies one day may be partners the next 好像有些不同


    one day / the next都应该是状语


    而A中companies that compete one day may be partners the next


    one day 修饰compete， the next修饰may be，很通顺。


    作者: ritta    时间: 2006-3-17 23:17

    Whereas lines of
    competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in
    the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies
    that compete     one day may be partners the next.

    1. Whereas
      lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established
      industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct,
      as companies that compete    A的明显错误是as后跟了名词，同时the more established industries歧义，lines of competition应该是特指industries的lines of competition,需要定冠词the
    2. Although
      the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are
      more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet
      industry, as competing companies 句子中的as做连词，表示原因，Compeing companies one day may be partners the next.意思是：今天还是竞争对手的公司明天可能成为合作伙伴。one day 和the next都是时间状语。如，我们在讲故事时经常会说，one day...  the next day...
    3. The
      lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established
      industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct,
      as companies that compete    unlike用法错误
    4. Unlike
      more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly
      defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as
      companies that compete 同C
    5. Unlike
      more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition,
      those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing
      companies  同C
    所以，答案应该是B。
    作者: amber0919    时间: 2006-4-22 10:14
    作者: amber0919    时间: 2006-4-22 10:22

    Q14:


    Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.




    1. Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

    2. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

    3. The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

    4. Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete

    5. Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies

    本来选Ａ．　现在觉得Ｂ对．


    这题其实考平行．Ｂ：the lines of competition 对应they，in industries that are more established对应 in the Internet industry．competing companies对应paterner．　非常的工整．　而Ａ把in the Internet industry 提前，很不好．　


    再者：Ａthey指代不清．　　the more established industries有歧义．

    作者: MayFair    时间: 2006-8-23 04:16

    看了半天,还是A好。

    B的后半句是个硬伤。

    作者: yboo    时间: 2006-8-23 05:08
    the latter part of B sounds like a perfect parellelism to me:

    competing companies one day
    may be
    partners the next ("day" understood).

    in comparision, A obviously doesnt do well, unless it is changed into something like:
    as companies
    that compete     one day may cooperate the next.
    作者: lbd2006    时间: 2006-8-23 06:45

    Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

    这句话错的，平行对称结构啊，句子的意是是“尽管。。。。，然而。。。”具有比较的意思在里边，所以应该想UNLIKE A，B DO 结构，A和B要是一样的物质

    而B选择最合理

    1. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

    THEY 直待的就是 THE LINES OF 。。。

    作者: Sunvie    时间: 2006-8-23 08:31
    冒昧问一句，啥是GWD?
    作者: imp01    时间: 2006-8-23 10:56

    Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

    这句话错的，平行对称结构啊，句子的意是是“尽管。。。。，然而。。。”具有比较的意思在里边，所以应该想UNLIKE A，B DO 结构，A和B要是一样的物质

    而B选择最合理

    1. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

    THEY 直待的就是 THE LINES OF 。。。

    同意

    而且A中AS跟了名词,肯定不对

    作者: 晴天小狗    时间: 2006-11-9 15:42

    B好在对称一点，但是

    B： as competing companies one day may be partners the next.这是人话吗？？？完全看不懂说什么

    不同意上面的mm，A选项怎么不是句子了？

    as companies （that compete one day） may be partners the next.

     

    nn 指点

    as companies （that compete one day） may be partners the next.

     

    nn 指点

    作者: 晴天小狗    时间: 2006-11-11 19:02

    B好在对称一点，但是

    B： as competing companies one day may be partners the next.这是人话吗？？？完全看不懂说什么

    不同意上面的mm，A选项怎么不是句子了？

    as companies （that compete one day） may be partners the next.

     

     

    nn 指点

    as companies （that compete one day） may be partners the next.

     

     

    nn 指点

    as companies （that compete one day） may be partners the next.

     

     

    nn 指点

    作者: 晴天小狗    时间: 2006-11-11 19:03

    B好在对称一点，但是

    B： as competing companies one day may be partners the next.这是人话吗？？？完全看不懂说什么

    不同意上面的mm，A选项怎么不是句子了？

    as companies （that compete one day） may be partners the next.

     

     

    nn 指点

    as companies （that compete one day） may be partners the next.

     

     

    nn 指点

    as companies （that compete one day） may be partners the next.

     

     

    nn 指点

    作者: 花仙子    时间: 2007-1-8 22:38
    UP
    作者: catherine_fo    时间: 2007-4-18 13:39

    自己开始选了A，现在看一看，发现B才对的。

    A Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

    B Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

    a中的MORE可以修饰industries， 也可以修饰established

    B里面的more修饰的对象很清晰

    作者: bigbighead    时间: 2007-4-19 13:03

    我地又错埋同一题啦，细bear。

    作者: lb1900    时间: 2007-5-8 17:33
    ding
    作者: nickynicky    时间: 2007-8-8 13:28

    我觉得哪个more established industries不太能造成歧义，因为后面提到了IT industry，逻辑上也能知道比较的是IT industry和更加成熟的industry之间的竞争特点区别。

    B中Although地用法我也不同意，比较的是两个行业line of competition的区别，用although这种强烈转折，不合适。用whereas是正确的，只是对比两个行业的区别，并没有强烈转折的意思。

    作者: Hiz    时间: 2007-9-17 10:37
    谢谢
    作者: woyuhong    时间: 2007-10-10 16:52
    可以借鉴一下这里http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=23&ID=146174&replyID=&skin=1
    作者: Zspirit    时间: 2008-11-11 00:01

        

    the latter part of B sounds like a perfect parellelism to
    me:

            

            competing companies one day

    may be

            partners the next ("day" understood).

            

    in comparision, A obviously doesnt do well, unless it is changed into something
    like:

            as companies that  compete
    one day may cooperate the next.

    --------------------------------------------------------------------


        

    Make sense, vote for B now

    作者: md634    时间: 2009-1-19 19:57

    B中in industries that are more established, 与in the Internet industry不对称，

         one day位置变，意思变

    A对称较差，但最不致死

    故A必然对

    作者: wangyi217    时间: 2009-2-3 17:33

    Whereas" and "although" are both correct. We can't choose between A and B on the basis of these words.

    The reference of the pronoun "they" is unambiguous in both A and B. It refers both logically and grammatically to the subject of the preceding clause "lines." We can't choose between A and B on the basis of this word either.

    What makes B wrong is the phrase: "as competing companies one day may be partners the next." The separation of "competing" from "one day" confuses the intended meaning. In A, "companies that compete one day may be partners the next" is clear and logical.

    引自http://www.urch.com/forums/gmat-sentence-correction/79835-whereas-lines-competition-3.html

    其实个人感觉逻辑含义上，although和whereas是有区别的

    作者: songlovegt    时间: 2009-2-3 21:14
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    作者: yzhao26    时间: 2009-2-20 09:52
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    作者: ivymxy    时间: 2009-3-8 18:22
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    作者: ivymxy    时间: 2009-3-8 19:06

    这道题选A！

    1. whereas 和although 在这里都是对的

    2. they也是没有歧义的，都指代lines

    3.B错，是因为后半句 as competing companies one day may be partners the next. B把动词compete和one day分开，改变了强调的内容

    原意是说某天在竞争的公司第二天可能就是合作伙伴，而B是 某天是竞争性公司在第二天可能是合作伙伴

    4. 正如前面一个MM说的，the more established industries 没有歧异，the more 只能修饰established, 不同于more established industries,就会有歧义了。

    作者: lupisces    时间: 2009-5-7 20:04

    A.      as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

    我也同意选A

    这个事致命的问题，B错

    作者: 寒天冷袖    时间: 2009-9-21 17:05
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