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作者: feijinbufeijin 时间: 2023-2-24 09:43
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Day123
1.(221)A recent study has cited overcomplexity, increasing worker mobility between companies, and poor financial planning in estimating that fewer than half of eligible American workers had contributed the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans.
(A) A recent study has cited overcomplexity, increasing worker mobility between companies, and poor financial planning in estimating that fewer than half of eligible American workers had contributed the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans.
(B) Overcomplexity, increasing worker mobility between companies, and poor financial planning have been cited by a recent study that estimated that over half of eligible American workers do not contribute the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans.
(C) Citing overcomplexity, increasing mobility of workers between companies, and poor financial planning, less than half of eligible American workers had contributed the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans, a recent study estimates. 这边的修饰也是有问题的
(D) A recent study of American workers, citing overcomplexity, increasing mobility of workers between companies, and poor financial planning, has estimated that fewer than half of eligible American workers had contributed the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans.
(E) Citing overcomplexity, increasing mobility of workers between companies, and poor financial planning, a recent study has estimated that fewer than half of eligible American workers contribute the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans.
A
E
2.(222)Even though the original text of the U.S. Constitution, adopted in 1787, mandated that any U.S. president or senator must be an American citizen, but the Constitution did not contain a definition of citizenship itself until the Fourteenth Amendment was ratified on July 28, 1868.
A. Even though the original text of the U.S. Constitution, adopted in 1787, mandated that any U.S. president or senator must be an American citizen, but the Constitution did not contain a definition of citizenship itself until the Fourteenth Amendment was ratified on July 28, 1868.
B. The original text of the U.S. Constitution, which was adopted in 1787, specifies any U.S. president or senator who must be an American citizen, although the Constitution did not actually define citizenship until the ratification of the Fourteenth Amendment on July 28, 1868. 这里的构造像是说特指谁 who
C. In the original text of the U.S. Constitution that was adopted in 1787, it is specified that any U.S. president or senator be an American citizen; an actual definition, however, did not exist until the Fourteenth Amendment was ratified on July 28, 1868.
D. When the U.S. Constitution was adopted in 1787, its original text specified that any U.S. president or senator must be an American citizen, but that citizenship itself would not be defined until the ratification of the Fourteenth Amendment on July 28, 1868. When会造成误会 现在不是这么说的了
E. Although the original text of the U.S. Constitution, adopted in 1787, mandates that any U.S. president or senator be an American citizen, citizenship itself was not actually defined in the Constitution until July 28, 1868, when the Fourteenth Amendment was ratified.
B
E
3.(223)Bo Jackson, who is widely believed to be both one of the greatest athletes of all time and the first player to make an all-star team in baseball and football, leaves a legacy that will likely live on for generations to come.
a. Bo Jackson, who is widely believed to be both one of the greatest athletes of all time and the first player to make an all-star team in baseball and football, leaves a legacy that
b .Bo Jackson, widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time, was the first player to make an all-star team in both baseball and football, and he leaves a legacy
c. The first player to make an all-star team in baseball and football, Bo Jackson, widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time, leaves a legacy that
d. Widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time, Bo Jackson, who was the first player to make an all-star team in baseball and football, and leaves a legacy that 会导致没有完整的句子
e. Since he is the first player to make an all-star team in both baseball and football and is widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time, Bo Jackson’s legacy
D A的错误再无both and用错了位置，导致了句意不对 B是后半句，C的语序不如D好
C
4.(224)At last month's meeting Mr. Iqbal, the chair of a business association for immigrants, described the most significant problems he had experienced in adapting to his new country's business regulations and outlined several actions that he had taken to deal with those problems.
要注意这里有个and的平行
A - had experienced in adapting to his new country's business regulations and outlined several actions that he had taken to deal
B - experienced, adapted to the business regulations of his new country, and outlined several actions that had been taken in his dealing
C - had experienced in adapting to the business regulations of his new country and in outlining several actions that he had taken in dealing
D - experienced while adapting to his new country's business regulations and outlining several actions taken in his dealing
E - experienced in adapting to his new country's business regulations and outlined several actions with which he had taken in dealing
A 首先就是时态的问题，take deal一定是在experience之后的，所以排除BE，然后take这里是作为动词， take to do，最终选择A
5.(225)The new government requires employers to inform an employee of their legal right to holidays and overtime pay.
(A) employers to inform an employee of their
(B) employers to inform employees that he has a
(C) employers to inform employees that there is a
(D) that employers inform an employee of their
(E) that employers inform the employees that they have a
E 单复数的问题，关于这里需不需要用that从句我不是很确
C E的they指代不明，所以其实综合下来C最好
6.(226)In comparison with tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone of maximum winds located farther from the center, and typically have a less symmetric wind field.
A. with tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone of maximum winds located farther from the center, and typically have
B. with tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone of maximum winds located farther from the center, and typically has
C. with tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone located farther from the center of maximum winds, and typically have
D. to tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone of maximum winds located farther from the center, and typically have
E. to tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone of maximum winds located farther from the center, and typically has
A in comparison with, 还有最后的单复数
When describing the similarities between unlike things, the idiom “compare to” is used.
When describing the differences between like things, the idiom “compare with” is used.
7.(227)In China, a country not known for freedom of political expression, the number of social protests increased from slightly less than 10,000 in 1993 to more than 58,000 in 2003.
A. the number of social protests increased from slightly less than 10,000 in 1993 to more than 58,000 in
B. the numbers of social protests increased from slightly less than 10,000 in 1993 to more than 58,000 in 这个就是idiom的错误，没有the numbers of的说法
C. protests of a social nature increased from slightly less than 10,000 in 1993 to more than 58,000 in
D. the social protests increased from slightly less than 10,000 in 1993 to 58,000 or more in
E. the number of social protests increased from slightly less than 10,000 up to 58,000 from 1993 to
A 首先要明确的是number增加，不是其他的东西增加，所以排除掉CD
8.(228)Federal government financing is an essential key in the survival of the interstate rail system.
A. an essential key in
B. an essential key for
C. essential for
D. essential in
E. essential
C 首先verb优于noun，然后对于什么事很重要 应该是for， in我不确定
Essential & key are redundant expression
Essential for
9.(229)Antigenic shift refers to the combination of two different strains of influenza; in contrast, antigenic drift refers to the natural mutation of a single strain of influenza.
(A) influenza; in contrast, antigenic drift refers to the natural mutation of a single strain of influenza
(B) influenza, different than the natural mutation of a single strain, known as antigenic drift
(C) influenza, in contrast to the natural mutation of a single strain, known as antigenic drift 没有平行
(D) influenza, different than antigenic drift, which refers to the natural mutation of a single strain of influenza 是different from
(E) influenza; in contrast to antigenic drift, which refers to the natural mutation of a single strain of influenza
A 比较的话用in contrast to比较好，然后C比较的部分有问题，E的分号后面没有完整的结构
10.(230)Studies of the rotational velocity of a galaxy at various distances from their center of mass have shown that ninety percent of the universe’s mass could exist in the form of dark matter.
(A) rotational velocity of a galaxy at various distances from their center of mass have shown that ninety percent of the universe’s mass could exist in the form of 在这里99%是从句的主语，exist也单复数不对
(B) rotational velocity of galaxies at varying distances from their centers of rotation have shown that as much as ninety percent of the mass of the universe exists in the form of
(C) rotational velocity of galaxies at varying distances from their center of mass has shown that up to ninety percent of the mass of the universe is made of
(D) rotational velocity of galaxies at varying distances from their rotational centers has shown that as much as ninety percent of universal mass might exist as
(E) galactic rotation at various distances from the galactic center of rotation have shown up to ninety percent of the mass over the universe exist in the form of 这边也少了从句，变成studies have shown up 99，而不是后面整件事
B 单复数，然后还有句意的排除
作者: DonkeyG 时间: 2023-2-24 12:06
3.(223)Bo Jackson, who is widely believed to beboth one of the greatest athletes of all time and the first player to make anall-star team in baseball and football, leaves a legacy that willlikely live on for generations to come.
a. Bo Jackson, who iswidely believed to be both one of the greatest athletes of all time and thefirst player to make an all-star team in baseball and football, leaves a legacythat （后面哪个all star是事实，但前面用的believed 所以不对）
b .Bo Jackson, widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time,was the first player to make an all-star team in both baseball and football,and he leaves a legacy
c. The first player to make anall-star team in baseball and football, Bo Jackson, widely believed to be oneof the greatest athletes of all time, leaves a legacy that
d. Widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time, Bo Jackson,who was the first player to make an all-star team in baseball and football, andleaves a legacy that
e. Since he is the first player to make an all-star team in both baseball andfootball and is widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time,Bo Jackson’s legacy
C错选A
作者: zephyr21 时间: 2023-2-24 12:36
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作者: zephyr21 时间: 2023-2-25 02:36
1. E
2. E
3. C错选A believed to be the first player 逻辑不对，first player 是一个 fact，不能 believed to be
4. -A 超时了...
5. A错选E 做题的时候就比较纠结 AE，因为其它三个选项的代词单复数不一致；但 E 的 they 也存在指代模糊的问题
6. A错选C C的修饰位置和A不同，改变了句意
7. A
8. C
9. A 不是很确定，但是用分号拆成两句话感觉更清晰
10. B
作者: Echo~ 时间: 2023-2-25 20:17
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221 E
A 使用过去完成时，前面的时态是现在完成，没有基于过去时
B 句子意思的重心被转移，从study的结果变成cite；动作发出者出现，主动优于被动。estimate 和cite都是与study相关的，研究中引用了，研究中估计了，应该是一样的时态
C citing 开头，逻辑主语没有立即出现
D 同A，
222 E
A 虽然但是同时出现，mandate 命令语气后面直接跟be 而不是must be
B specify +人+who 。。。指出的不是人而是应该是什么样的人
C specify that ...be ?这个词没有命令语气吧,an actual definition 没能明确说出是什么的definition
D but that 跟前面的specify that 不应该平行；过去时态specified 和when的结合暗示这个法案现在不这么认为
223 B 错——C
A believed 只有一个信息，不能并列
B 仔细看了下，应该是时态有问题（想多了），was the first player表示过去是现在不是啊啊啊啊B有两个谓语啊没划线的后面的部分很重要！！
C 把两个modifier 分别置于主语两侧，
D 无谓语
E since的逻辑无中生有 since he...J‘’s legacy...j没有单独出现而是作为所有格出现，那么he指代的就是legacy
224 A
很完美的平行，意思也对，时态上过去完成时的出现前面也有过去时作为铺垫，做的事情肯定是在开会之前做的
225 E错——C
an employee的错，he的错，谁家只通知一个员工个的，ABD排除
CE二选一，因为基本there be 的很少对。。。答案说因为不知道they指的是员工还是老板。。。看来指代只是次要考虑不是不考虑，能没有歧义的还是没有歧义好
226 C错——A
has排除BE
in comparison with ,compared to ,compared with （不是这个搭配。。。）
描述相似点用compare to
描述不同点用compare with
接下来是两个modifier的位置交换了（一般这种情况采取A的顺序更好，不然可能造成意思改变，而且只有这一个选项换了modifier的位置，肯定错）
227 A
number 是数量不用复数B排除
protests本身不会increase，是它的数量increase,C 排除
from to,没有from up to E排除
or more替换了more than意思改变
228 C
我觉得essential 和key重复了，有一个就够了何必AB
介词肯定要有（排E）for 还是in 凭感觉了。。。。固定搭配essential for
229 A
A挺平行的
BD排different than
C不平行
E第二个句子无谓语
230 B
their center说明galaxies得是复数A排
centers也要是复数,C排
studies做主语，have不能用单数CD排
show that 不可省，show的是that后面的这件事，不是mass,E排,百分数修饰mass不可数，exist要用单数
作者: Echo~ 时间: 2023-2-26 00:31
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231 C
a number of +复数
the number of+单数
232 D
比较对象一致排除ABC
increase 和control并列时态一致
233 A错——C
看清楚比较的是spending在不同的goods，A后面写的是goods remain constant 而没有任何指代spending的词，
B 读起来很奇怪，regardless of 和even though同时出现也很怪
C 完美平行
D 逻辑反了，经济健康取决于周期。。。whether 和whereas重复（这两个居然不能同出）
E goods remain应该用单数，周期模式取决于经济错了，是spending取决于经济，同时错误同A
234 A
consider X Y
235 A
team做主语不是advisors,谓语has，排BD
controversial education reform proposal 和 proposal on controversial education reform意思是不同的！（果然这种时候要忠于A）
since releasing的逻辑主语是team，而不是governor
for comment 和 to make comment二选一，前者好像搭配更常见，好吧是因为前者更简洁
作者: 花花嘛嘛 时间: 2023-2-26 14:46
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作者: 花花嘛嘛 时间: 2023-2-26 15:42
Day123 (错了5,6,8）
1.(221)A recent study has cited overcomplexity, increasing worker mobility between companies, and poor financial planning in estimating that fewer than half of eligible American workers had contributed the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans.
(A) A recent study has cited overcomplexity, increasing worker mobility between companies, and poor financial planning in estimating that fewer than half of eligible American workers had contributed the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans.
(B) Overcomplexity, increasing worker mobility between companies, and poor financial planning have been cited by a recent study that estimated that over half of eligible American workers do not contribute the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans.
(C) Citing overcomplexity, increasing mobility of workers between companies, and poor financial planning, less than half of eligible American workers had contributed the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans, a recent study estimates.
(D) A recent study of American workers, citing overcomplexity, increasing mobility of workers between companies, and poor financial planning, has estimated that fewer than half of eligible American workers had contributed the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans.
(E) Citing overcomplexity, increasing mobility of workers between companies, and poor financial planning, a recent study has estimated that fewer than half of eligible American workers contribute the maximum amount to their employer-offered retirement plans.
答案：E
2.(222)Even though the original text of the U.S. Constitution, adopted in 1787, mandated that any U.S. president or senator must be an American citizen, but the Constitution did not contain a definition of citizenship itself until the Fourteenth Amendment was ratified on July 28, 1868.
A. Even though the original text of the U.S. Constitution, adopted in 1787, mandated that any U.S. president or senator must be an American citizen, but the Constitution did not contain a definition of citizenship itself until the Fourteenth Amendment was ratified on July 28, 1868.
B. The original text of the U.S. Constitution, which was adopted in 1787, specifies any U.S. president or senator who must be an American citizen, although the Constitution did not actually define citizenship until the ratification of the Fourteenth Amendment on July 28, 1868.
C. In the original text of the U.S. Constitution that was adopted in 1787, it is specified that any U.S. president or senator be an American citizen; an actual definition, however, did not exist until the Fourteenth Amendment was ratified on July 28, 1868.
D. When the U.S. Constitution was adopted in 1787, its original text specified that any U.S. president or senator must be an American citizen, but that citizenship itself would not be defined until the ratification of the Fourteenth Amendment on July 28, 1868.
E. Although the original text of the U.S. Constitution, adopted in 1787, mandates that any U.S. president or senator be an American citizen, citizenship itself was not actually defined in the Constitution until July 28, 1868, when the Fourteenth Amendment was ratified.
答案：E
3.(223)Bo Jackson, who is widely believed to be both one of the greatest athletes of all time and the first player to make an all-star team in baseball and football, leaves a legacy that will likely live on for generations to come.
a. Bo Jackson, who is widely believed to be both one of the greatest athletes of all time and the first player to make an all-star team in baseball and football, leaves a legacy that
b .Bo Jackson, widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time, was the first player to make an all-star team in both baseball and football, and he leaves a legacy
c. The first player to make an all-star team in baseball and football, Bo Jackson, widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time, leaves a legacy that
d. Widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time, Bo Jackson, who was the first player to make an all-star team in baseball and football, and leaves a legacy that
e. Since he is the first player to make an all-star team in both baseball and football and is widely believed to be one of the greatest athletes of all time, Bo Jackson’s legacy
答案: C
4.(224)At last month's meeting Mr. Iqbal, the chair of a business association for immigrants, described the most significant problems he had experienced in adapting to his new country's business regulations and outlined several actions that he had taken to deal with those problems.
A - had experienced in adapting to his new country's business regulations and outlined several actions that he had taken to deal
B - experienced, adapted to the business regulations of his new country, and outlined several actions that had been taken in his dealing
C - had experienced in adapting to the business regulations of his new country and in outlining several actions that he had taken in dealing
D - experienced while adapting to his new country's business regulations and outlining several actions taken in his dealing
E - experienced in adapting to his new country's business regulations and outlined several actions with which he had taken in dealing
答案：A
5.(225)The new government requires employers to inform an employee of their legal right to holidays and overtime pay.
(A) employers to inform an employee of their
(B) employers to inform employees that he has a
(C) employers to inform employees that there is a
(D) that employers inform an employee of their
(E) that employers inform the employees that they have a
答案：E
6.(226)In comparison with tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone of maximum winds located farther from the center, and typically have a less symmetric wind field.
A. with tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone of maximum winds located farther from the center, and typically have
B. with tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone of maximum winds located farther from the center, and typically has
C. with tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone located farther from the center of maximum winds, and typically have
D. to tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone of maximum winds located farther from the center, and typically have
E. to tropical cyclone systems, subtropical cyclone systems have a relatively broad zone of maximum winds located farther from the center, and typically has
答案：C
7.(227)In China, a country not known for freedom of political expression, the number of social protests increased from slightly less than 10,000 in 1993 to more than 58,000 in 2003.
A. the number of social protests increased from slightly less than 10,000 in 1993 to more than 58,000 in
B. the numbers of social protests increased from slightly less than 10,000 in 1993 to more than 58,000 in
C. protests of a social nature increased from slightly less than 10,000 in 1993 to more than 58,000 in
D. the social protests increased from slightly less than 10,000 in 1993 to 58,000 or more in
E. the number of social protests increased from slightly less than 10,000 up to 58,000 from 1993 to
答案：A
8.(228)Federal government financing is an essential key in the survival of the interstate rail system.
A. an essential key in
B. an essential key for
C. essential for
D. essential in
E. essential
答案：D
9.(229)Antigenic shift refers to the combination of two different strains of influenza; in contrast, antigenic drift refers to the natural mutation of a single strain of influenza.
(A) influenza; in contrast, antigenic drift refers to the natural mutation of a single strain of influenza
(B) influenza, different than the natural mutation of a single strain, known as antigenic drift
(C) influenza, in contrast to the natural mutation of a single strain, known as antigenic drift
(D) influenza, different than antigenic drift, which refers to the natural mutation of a single strain of influenza
(E) influenza; in contrast to antigenic drift, which refers to the natural mutation of a single strain of influenza
答案：A
10.(230)Studies of the rotational velocity of a galaxy at various distances from their center of mass have shown that ninety percent of the universe’s mass could exist in the form of dark matter.
(A) rotational velocity of a galaxy at various distances from their center of mass have shown that ninety percent of the universe’s mass could exist in the form of
(B) rotational velocity of galaxies at varying distances from their centers of rotation have shown that as much as ninety percent of the mass of the universe exists in the form of
(C) rotational velocity of galaxies at varying distances from their center of mass has shown that up to ninety percent of the mass of the universe is made of
(D) rotational velocity of galaxies at varying distances from their rotational centers has shown that as much as ninety percent of universal mass might exist as
(E) galactic rotation at various distances from the galactic center of rotation have shown up to ninety percent of the mass over the universe exist in the form of
答案：B
作者: wlive2022 时间: 2023-2-26 17:40
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作者: Ak777 时间: 2023-2-27 20:42
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作者: Ak777 时间: 2023-2-27 21:15
C x3A is believed to后面不能跟太客观的东西，
C x5e require that do；require sb to do 等价；they指代问题，错了好几次了
C x8a essential for… essential 和key等价
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