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作者: DonkeyG 时间: 2023-2-10 09:17

1.(81)Manydaring vacationers who participate in guided boat tours on the Tarcoles River encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whoseeyes and noses are peeking out from the surface of the murky water.

(A) encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows,whose eyes and noses are peeking out（whose距离鳄鱼太远了，容易修饰成shallow）

(B) encountered native crocodiles lurking in theshallows, whose eyes and noses peek out

(C) had encountered native crocodiles lurking inthe shallows, whose eyes and noses peek out

(D) encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, witheyes and noses peeking out （但是这里的with不会变成修饰vacationer吗？？）

(E) encounter native crocodiles lurking in theshallows, with eyes and noses that are peeking out
D

总结如下:

类似于 ", with ..." 这种absolutephrase结构，和主句逻辑相关即可，修饰对象取决于逻辑意思，不局限于就近修饰或者非要修饰主句主语。

类似 ", whose ..." 这种，必须遵从touch rule，修饰逗号前面的名词

而 ", v-ing ..." 是要求跟主句share同一个逻辑主语，还有时态、句意的要求

2.(82)At the end of the Na Pali Coast Trail inKauai is a gorgeous beach, which stretches on for a mile, anda waterfall that provides fresh water for the many people who camp there.

(A) is a gorgeous beach, which stretches on for a mile,and a waterfall that provides fresh water for the many people 倒装的话，前面is错误，后面有beach and waterfall

(B) is a gorgeous beach, which stretches on for a mile,beside a waterfall that provides fresh water for the many

(C) there is a gorgeous beach stretching on for amile and a waterfall that provides fresh water for many of the people 同a，后面是俩

(D) there is a gorgeous beach stretching on for amile and a waterfall providing fresh water for the many 同a，后面是俩

(E) there is a gorgeous beach that stretches onfor a mile beside a waterfall, providing fresh water for many of the people提供谁的是瀑布不是沙滩
B
3.(83)The governor’s team of advisors, includingher education and political strategists, has not beenavailable for comment since the governor released her controversial educationreform proposal.

(A) has not been available for comment since the governorreleased her controversial education reform proposal （这里不是判断available for或者 to do，这里前面因主语是governor’s team，而没有介绍governor，所以必须要写governor，不然her无法判断是谁。For comment也比较清楚了，比to make comment好）

(B) have not been available for comment since thegovernor released her controversial education reform proposal （team单复数）

(C) have not been available for comment since shereleased her proposal on controversial education reform（team单复数）

(D) has not been available for comment since shereleased her controversial education reform proposal

(E) has not been available to make comments since shereleased her proposal on controversial reform in education
A错选E
4.(84)The mountain corn floss, native to the RockyMountains from Colorado to Canada and thought of as beingthe most beautiful of all wildflowers, grow on steep ledges and in deep cracks on remotemountaintops.

A. of as being the most beautiful of allwildflowers, grow 单数
B. of as being the most beautiful of allwildflowers, grows 错误：of as being
C. to be the most beautiful of all wildflowers,grow单数
D. to be the most beautiful of all wildflowers, grows
E. of as the most beautiful of all wildflowers,grow单数
D
5.(85)In the wake of several serious cases ofmercury poisoning caused by tainted fish, the state government ordered that all lakes and streams should be tested for mercury levels.

A. all lakes and streams should be tested formercury levels 有order了不应该再有should
B. all lakes and streams should have their mercurylevels tested有order了不应该再有should
C. the mercury levels be tested for all lakes andstreams 湖的位置错了
D. the mercury levels of all lakes and streamsshould be tested有order了不应该再有should
E. the mercury levels of all lakes and streams be tested
E
6.(86)With herarchaeologist husband, travels inspired several mystery novels by AgathaChristie; travelers to Egypt can still stay at the OldCataract Hotel, the model for the hotel in one of Christie's most famous books.

(A) With her archaeologist husband, travelsinspired several mystery novels by Agatha Christie 前面的with修饰了travels

(B) Agatha Christie used her travels with herarchaeologist husband to inspire several mystery novels 错误inspire novels？

(C) Because her husband was an archaeologist, Agatha Christiewas able to use their travels as inspiration for several of her mystery novels

(D) Together with her archaeologist husband,Agatha Christie was inspired to incorporate their travel into several of hermystery novels 这句话的意思是AC和她老公一起被inspire意思错误

(E) Agatha Christie's travels with her archaeologist husbandserved as inspiration for several of her mystery novels
E

解释："its" is a possessive pronoun, so it can have either apossessive or a non-possessive noun as its antecedent. If you have a possessiveNOUN, then the limit applies.

For example, in "the cat'sfur," the word "cat's" is a possessive noun. If I wanted to usea pronoun to refer to the possessive noun "cat's," I could only use apossessive pronoun.

The cat's fur makes her taillook bigger than it really is. In this sentence the pronoun "her" isa possessive pronoun and it is referring to a possessive noun. That IS okay.

The cat's fur makes her seemreally fluffy. In this sentence, the pronoun "her" is an objectpronoun and it is referring to a possessive noun. That's NOT okay.

The cat is so fluffy that hertail looks bigger than it really is. In this sentence, the pronoun"her" is a possessive pronoun and it is referring to a regular noun.That IS okay. So, a possessive pronoun can refer to both a regular noun and apossessive noun.

BUT if you have a possessiveNOUN, you can only use a possessive pronoun to refer to it - you can't use anobject or subject pronoun to refer to a possessive NOUN.

7.(87)Though it had about 11 inches of snow, aviation officials said conditions on the runway at the timeof the emergency landing was acceptable.

A. aviation officials said conditions on therunway at the time of the emergency landing was acceptable （it had 11 inches of snow是要形容后面主语的）
B. the runway conditions during the emergencylanding were acceptable according to aviation officials（it had 11 inches of snow是要形容后面主语的）
C. according to aviation officials, the runway wasin acceptable condition during the time of the emergency landing（it had 11 inches of snow是要形容后面主语的，这里离得太远）
D. the runway was said by aviation officials to be inacceptable condition during the emergency landing
E. aviation officials said that conditions on therunway at the time of the emergency landing were acceptable（it had 11 inches of snow是要形容后面主语的）
D
8.(88)Unlike lions and tigers, which can be roaring by causing its hyoid bones to vibrate,domestic cats have fixed hyoid bones and are thereforeunable to roar.

A. which can be roaring by causing its hyoid bonesto vibrate, domestic cats （can be roaring为啥要用这个时态，后面its也错误）
B. which can roar by causing their hyoid bones to vibrate,domestic cats
C. who can roar by causing their hyoid bones tovibrate, domestic cats differently （who只能指代人）
D. who can roar by causing its hyoid bones tovibrate, domestic cats（who只能指代人）
E. of which the hyoid bones vibrate to cause a roar,domestic cats （of which错误）
B
9.(89)Though thelanguage of Beowulf is practically incomprehensible to contemporary readers,careful linguistic analysis reveals a multitude of similarities to modernEnglish.

(A) Though the language of Beowulf is practically incomprehensibleto contemporary readers, careful linguistic analysis reveals a multitude ofsimilarities to modern English.

(B) Despite that it is practicallyincomprehensible to contemporary readers, careful linguistic analysis revealsthat the language of Beowulf has a multitude of similarities to modern English.（it is incomprehensible的是语言，不应该是analysis）

(C) Though being practically incomprehensible tocontemporary readers, the language of Beowulf reveals through carefullinguistic analysis a multitude of similarities to modern English. （是analysis reveal不是语言）

(D) Though Beowulf has a language that ispractically incomprehensible to contemporary readers, a multitude ofsimilarities are revealed to modern English through careful linguistic analysis.这句话整体很奇怪，前面用B地区，后面又说相似性

(E) Despite having practically incomprehensiblelanguage to contemporary readers, Beowulf reveals through careful linguisticanalysis a multitude of similarities to modern English. （it is incomprehensible的是语言，不应该是analysis）
A
10.(90)The decline and fall of the Roman Empireremains a topic of vigorous debate to this day; historians have attributed it to a variety of causes, including militaryinsurrection, ethnic conflict, and widespread immorality.

(A) have attributed it to a variety of causes, includingmilitary insurrection, ethnic conflict, and

(B) attribute it variously to causes that includemilitary insurrection, ethnic conflict, or 前面的variously to causes不是说多种理由，语义就有问题，后面还用了or更奇怪

(C) have variously attributed them to causes whichinclude military insurrection, ethnic conflict, and 前句用了remains，所以判断是单数

(D) attribute them to various causes, includingmilitary insurrection, ethnic conflict, as well as前句用了remains，所以判断是单数

(E) variously attribute them to causes includingmilitary insurrection, ethnic conflict, and前句用了remains，所以判断是单数

作者: zephyr21 时间: 2023-2-10 09:56
mark！

作者: zephyr21 时间: 2023-2-10 12:44
1. D 句末部分修饰主语，用定从与修饰成分过远，排除ABC；encounter与participate时态一致，排除BC; 同位语中 that are peaking 不如 peeking 直接做定语修饰

2. B 错选 A 由于选项都是is，则只能是单数的表语，因此ACD的平行结构就不对；E中的V-ing结构只能描述句子的真实主语，此处即beach，与原先的句意不符

3.A 主语team是单数，排除BC；DE中she指代错误
*：GMAT中可以用“The editor's team and his family went to the ceremony.” 但不能用 “The editor's team accompanied him to the ceremony.” 因为 his 等于editor's。

4. D as being 重复，排除AB；thought to be 固定搭配，排除E；主语是一个整体（一种花），因此用单数谓语

5. E order 表示命令时，所引导的从句中用虚拟语气，即应该用动词原形，不能有should，排除ABD；C 中 for all lakes and streams 修饰test，没有E清晰

6. E 错选 B - their 没有指代的对象，排除 CD；AB句意错误，句意应该是"Travels that she took with her husband inspired Agatha"

7. D 错选B it 应该指代ranway，而且两个分句之间不应该有任何修饰成分，避免歧义

8. B lions and tigers 是动物，不能用who，排除 CD；主语和 roar 的关系是主动，排除 A；

9. A B中 it 指代 language of B 而不是analysis；C 句意为 language of B reveal ... 而不是 analysis reveals，与原句不符；D 中的similarities对比的是 B 地区和Modern England，而不是语言；E 逻辑同D，且reveal 的主语是B地区而不是analysis

10. A 根据 remains 得出主语是单数，指代应该用 it，排除CDE；variously 应该修饰 cause 而不是 attribute，排除B

作者: Ak777 时间: 2023-2-10 13:21
同意！

作者: Ak777 时间: 2023-2-10 14:25
1D whose应该修饰鳄鱼，但却离着shallows更近，此外ABC时态都有些混乱；E that are多余
2B 倒装，is后应该是单数；CD感觉there 有些冗余，还有主语应该搭配are；E providing修饰问题：-ing在句尾且前有逗号时，表示结果或者修饰临近句子的主语beach。题目中，providing本意应该去修饰邻近的waterfall，错
3A 主语team单数；she无指代
4D 单数
5E order that命令，虚拟需要原型be tested; C 中for后面的修饰位置不优
6E A 读起来是旅行，其本身，伴随丈夫而不是伴随丈夫的旅行; B 读起来感觉AC用旅行，伴随丈夫，激发了…；CD their无指代; E准确表达了是伴随丈夫的旅行
xD7C D感觉插入挺顺，选错。除了modifer位置越近越好这个问题，感觉according to sb这里夹心修饰：本意是修饰后半句，道路状况据说xxxx；夹在中间，有可能修饰前半句，据说雪厚11..
xB8E 醉了，应该是狮子老虎吼，不是骨头
9A despite that错；being冗余； Beowulf has a language 不如 the language of B
10A remains提示单数，需要it指代，句意是需要and

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作者: Fox的Dream 时间: 2023-2-13 16:32
Day109
1.(81)Many daring vacationers who participate in guided boat tours on the Tarcoles River encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses are peeking out from the surface of the murky water.

(A) encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses are peeking out
(B) encountered native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses peek out
(C) had encountered native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses peek out
(D) encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, with eyes and noses peeking out
(E) encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, with eyes and noses that are peeking out

2.(82)At the end of the Na Pali Coast Trail in Kauai is a gorgeous beach, which stretches on for a mile, and a waterfall that provides fresh water for the many people who camp there.

(A) is a gorgeous beach, which stretches on for a mile, and a waterfall that provides fresh water for the many people
(B) is a gorgeous beach, which stretches on for a mile, beside a waterfall that provides fresh water for the many
(C) there is a gorgeous beach stretching on for a mile and a waterfall that provides fresh water for many of the people
(D) there is a gorgeous beach stretching on for a mile and a waterfall providing fresh water for the many
(E) there is a gorgeous beach that stretches on for a mile beside a waterfall, providing fresh water for many of the people

3.(83)The governor’s team of advisors, including her education and political strategists, has not been available for comment since the governor released her controversial education reform proposal.

(A) has not been available for comment since the governor released her controversial education reform proposal
(B) have not been available for comment since the governor released her controversial education reform proposal
(C) have not been available for comment since she released her proposal on controversial education reform
(D) has not been available for comment since she released her controversial education reform proposal
(E) has not been available to make comments since she released her proposal on controversial reform in education

4.(84)The mountain cornfloss, native to the Rocky Mountains from Colorado to Canada and thought of as being the most beautiful of all wildflowers, grow on steep ledges and in deep cracks on remote mountaintops.

A. of as being the most beautiful of all wildflowers, grow
B. of as being the most beautiful of all wildflowers, grows
C. to be the most beautiful of all wildflowers, grow
D. to be the most beautiful of all wildflowers, grows
E. of as the most beautiful of all wildflowers, grow

5.(85)In the wake of several serious cases of mercury poisoning caused by tainted fish, the state government ordered that all lakes and streams should be tested for mercury levels.

A. all lakes and streams should be tested for mercury levelsorder... be done..., 虚拟语气，不加should; not tested for mercury levels, should test the Mercury level directly.
B. all lakes and streams should have their mercury levels tested
C. the mercury levels be tested for all lakes and streams
D. the mercury levels of all lakes and streams should be tested
E. the mercury levels of all lakes and streams be tested

6.(86)With her archaeologist husband, travels inspired several mystery novels by Agatha Christie; travelers to Egypt can still stay at the Old Cataract Hotel, the model for the hotel in one of Christie's most famous books.

(A) With her archaeologist husband, travels inspired several mystery novels by Agatha Christie
(B) Agatha Christie used her travels with her archaeologist husband to inspire several mystery novels
(C) Because her husband was an archaeologist, Agatha Christie was able to use their travels as inspiration for several of her mystery novels
(D) Together with her archaeologist husband, Agatha Christie was inspired to incorporate their travel into several of her mystery novels
搞清楚是谁被inspire了
(E) Agatha Christie's travels with her archaeologist husband served as inspiration for several of her mystery novels

7.(87)Though it had about 11 inches of snow, aviation officials said conditions on the runway at the time of the emergency landing was acceptable.

A. aviation officials said conditions on the runway at the time of the emergency landing was acceptable
B. the runway conditions during the emergency landing were acceptable according to aviation officials
C. according to aviation officials, the runway was in acceptable condition during the time of the emergency landing
D. the runway was said by aviation officials to be in acceptable condition during the emergency landing
E. aviation officials said that conditions on the runway at the time of the emergency landing were acceptable

8.(88)Unlike lions and tigers, which can be roaring by causing its hyoid bones to vibrate, domestic cats have fixed hyoid bones and are therefore unable to roar.

A. which can be roaring by causing its hyoid bones to vibrate, domestic cats
B. which can roar by causing their hyoid bones to vibrate, domestic cats
C. who can roar by causing their hyoid bones to vibrate, domestic cats differently
D. who can roar by causing its hyoid bones to vibrate, domestic cats
E. of which the hyoid bones vibrate to cause a roar, domestic cats

9.(89)Though the language of Beowulf is practically incomprehensible to contemporary readers, careful linguistic analysis reveals a multitude of similarities to modern English.

(A) Though the language of Beowulf is practically incomprehensible to contemporary readers, careful linguistic analysis reveals a multitude of similarities to modern English.
(B) Despite that it is practically incomprehensible to contemporary readers, careful linguistic analysis reveals that the language of Beowulf has a multitude of similarities to modern English.
(C) Though being practically incomprehensible to contemporary readers, the language of Beowulf reveals through careful linguistic analysis a multitude of similarities to modern English.
(D) Though Beowulf has a language that is practically incomprehensible to contemporary readers, a multitude of similarities are revealed to modern English through careful linguistic analysis.
(E) Despite having practically incomprehensible language to contemporary readers, Beowulf reveals through careful linguistic analysis a multitude of similarities to modern English.

10.(90)The decline and fall of the Roman Empire remains a topic of vigorous debate to this day; historians have attributed it to a variety of causes, including military insurrection, ethnic conflict, and widespread immorality.

(A) have attributed it to a variety of causes, including military insurrection, ethnic conflict, and
(B) attribute it variously to causes that include military insurrection, ethnic conflict, or
(C) have variously attributed them to causes which include military insurrection, ethnic conflict, and
(D) attribute them to various causes, including military insurrection, ethnic conflict, as well as
(E) variously attribute them to causes including military insurrection, ethnic conflict, and

作者: petittomato 时间: 2023-2-15 18:01
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作者: petittomato 时间: 2023-2-15 21:35
Many daring vacationers who participate in guided boat tours on the Tarcoles River encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses are peeking out from the surface of the murky water.
(A) encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses are peeking out
(B) encountered native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses peek out
(C) had encountered native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses peek out
(D) encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, with eyes and noses peeking out
(E) encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, with eyes and noses that are peeking out
D
这里的大类别是修饰语，关于修饰语的规则非常严格。如果你想修饰一个名词，修饰词和被修饰者（我发明的词）必须接触。
你不可避免地看到的第一个分裂（除了前面的动词时态问题，我们还可以讨论）是 "whose"与 "with"。"whose"是一个相对代词，只能用于修饰名词。这意味着，"whose"最好紧挨着它所修饰的事物。不幸的是，在A、B和C中，它修饰的是 "shallows"。这没有任何意义，原因很明显。
"with"是一个介词，也是一个修饰短语。然而，这个短语不是修饰鳄鱼（如你所想），而是修饰 "lurking"。确定被修饰的内容的一个方法是问自己这个修饰短语所回答的是什么问题。换句话说，你不能用这个修饰语来回答一个关于鳄鱼的问题（"鳄鱼在做什么？" "With eyes and noses peeking out" -- 这没有意义）。但是你可以回答 "鳄鱼是如何潜伏的？"这个问题。"With eyes and noses peeking out"）。我们在修饰一个动词，而动词修饰语不需要接触它们所修饰的动词。
在D和E之间，D只是更简洁（没有理由引入相对代词 "that"；它只是使意思更复杂）。
另外，在这里没有理由使用除了现在时以外的任何时态。注意原来的动词 "participate"，它是现在时，然后问问自己是否有什么好的理由来改变时态。没有。答案是D。

作者: jimjimflyfly 时间: 2023-2-16 17:44
1. D 错选A
ABC whose就近修饰的不是crocodile，而是shallow
2. B
there is和is无法排除答案
E中providing fresh water修饰beach，语义错误
5. E
In addition, it is illogical to test a lake or stream "for mercury levels": this implies that one is testing to see whether mercury levels exist，test for sth指的是测试有没有mecury level，语义不合理，无法测试一个level
6. E 错选C
没懂
7. D 错选E
未划线部分有it，只能指代runway
8. B 错选C
who只能修饰人，不能修饰动物

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