所以当我试用了中文逻辑来思考,会发现“无话可说”这个问题就不复存在了,与此同时自己写作的逻辑也会顺畅很多。
1、将题目翻译成中文,写下来,一定要写,不差这一分钟
2、用中文brainstorm,这个事情的利和弊,带来什么影响,潜在发展规律
用A推出B推出C这样的顺序写下来,用中文
3、整理论点,一般来说,这样子的论证过程在一段里都是层层推进的。
example:Nowadays some old people choose to live in retirement communities with other people, rather than living live with their adult children. Is it a positive or negative development? (应该会有语法错之类的,我主要说一下结构)
那首先这是我写之前的brainstorm
好处:老年人的生活质量提高了— 现在的护理社区都有先进的设备和专业的护工来维持和保障(guarantee)他们的生活水平,再加上在社区里老人有更多的机会和同龄人社交。—他们的物质水平(Material standard of living)和精神水平(mental standard of living)都得到了提高。
子女都要上班—没时间照顾老人—和子女生活基本需要老人自己照顾自己—不方便
弊端:子女和老人沟通减少,不能给老人提供及时的帮助— 有很多新闻报道,老人在养老院被虐待,殴打—子女和老人缺乏沟通,导致他们无法及时给老人提供帮助。如果他们和老人生活在一起,他们可以确保老人的生活是比较安全的
落笔: 1、表明论点。
It is true that the living standard of the elderly population will improve if they live in retirement communities. As a result, it would be more convenient for them to live in retirement communities. 2、why we do this
Advanced facilities and professional nurses bring them convenience and guarantee their living quality. 总括
For example, they can go upstairs by elevators instead of walking and they no longer need to spend time and effort on preparing every meal. In addition to the development of the material standard, their mental standard of living also will raise by having more opportunities to communicate with their peers.
Living with their children means that they need to cover everything by themselves, as most of their children are working all day.