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作者: 林limbo 时间: 2022-11-10 23:24
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作者: 小张的诗 时间: 2022-11-11 06:48
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作者: Serenatt 时间: 2022-11-11 10:13
D45
1.
A had不对吧，没有时间标志词
B 现在时也不太对
C 同A
D to sort,and search for, and guide不对，不一致
E
2.
A 不是discipline to grow a business
B
C 同A
D 同A
E 同A
3.
A 后面是are，所以要用benefits
B 同A
C that are 有点累赘啊，直接去掉that are 都行
D 感觉E描述得更准确
E
4.
感觉只有B是平行的
5.
A 在过去，时态错误
B
C 两个动词哇，have been和proceeds?
D 同A
E also不能连接两个句子哇
6.
A 要加those of才能表示比较的是正确的可比对象
B compare不能和more
C in relation to 是个啥
D
E more ...as ?
7.
A
B more than 不是more ... as
C 宾语从句that不能省哇
D 同C
E 同C
8.
A
B 没动词啊
C 还是一致好一些吧，像A一样
D having been 不修饰名词
E 也没动词
9.
A which 不能指代整个句子
B
C 同A
D 是institute sequenced和conclude的吗？应该是人吧
E 改变主语了
10.
A their的问题
B that不太对，重点不解释audition
C 同B
D
E as help to 有点怪异
作者: G_ellen 时间: 2022-11-11 13:28
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作者: hesssh 时间: 2022-11-13 20:59
1. d
6.d 观点需要和观点比较
10.d 主语是单数
作者: guohaohao135 时间: 2022-11-15 02:04
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作者: Sophie_Lee 时间: 2022-11-19 09:26
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作者: Sophie_Lee 时间: 2022-11-19 10:47
41. D
B: is being 被动态进行时，没必要
AC：没必要用过去完成式，从句都是现在时和现在完成时
E：不平行
42. B/A
DE：改变句意，while growing 状语从句的省略，省略了主语discipline，明显不对
C：in order to 没有to 简洁
B：感觉在没有明确说明主语的情况下最好用被动态代替
to grow a young business, 后面应该跟人，人才能grow business
43. D
ABE: 主谓不一致排除
44. B/C
A：its不对，主语是companies
平行结构 the city deep pool of a y and z, 因此C排除因为不平行，city's 和its（AD)排除，因为前面已经有the city 's deep pool of 了；E排除因为retail market前面没有不定冠词，但是后面有
45. A/B
CDE：平行不正确排除
AB：时态问题（存疑）
46. D
BCE：搭配错误排除
A：比较对象不对等
47. A
BE：搭配错误排除
CD：强调的是一件事情，而不是educators本身
48. B
ACDE:and前后不平行
49. B
AC：which 不能修饰句子
D：sequencing 的动作发出者应该是paleogeneticist
E: the sequencing has led to the conclusion不优
50. D
BCE：表目的要用todo
A：their无指代
作者: 百日衣衫浸 时间: 2022-11-21 02:45
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作者: sofia索菲亚 时间: 2022-11-24 05:20
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作者: sofia索菲亚 时间: 2022-11-24 06:39
Day45
1.(41)Even as it wrestles with the nearly $10 billion of debt that has overwhelmed it, Stockton had already been billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt, to search for ways to restructure it, and to now guide the city through legal proceedings.
平行， 时态
A. Stockton had already been billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt, to search for ways to restructure it, and to now guide the city through legal proceedings （时态错）
B. Stockton is being billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt, search for ways to restructure it, and to now guide the city through legal proceedings
C. Stockton had already been billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt and search for ways to restructure it, all while guiding the city through legal proceedings （时态错）
D. Stockton has already been billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt, search for ways to restructure it, and now guide the city through legal proceedings （对）
E. Stockton has already been billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt and to search for ways to restructure it, and now guide the city through legal proceedings （主谓不一致）
d （对）
2.(42)To grow a young business, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required to achieve progress and success.
(A) To grow a young business, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required to achieve progress and success.
(B) To grow a young business, one needs discipline to maintain what works and change what is required to achieve progress and success.
(C) To grow a young business, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required in order to achieve progress and success.
(D) In order to achieve progress and success, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required while growing a young business.
(E) In order to achieve progress and success, discipline is needed in order to maintain what works and to change what is required while growing a young business.
b （对）
3.(43)While cost savings and employee satisfaction have led many businesses to adopt friendly work-from-home policies, a growing sentiment among managers is that the benefit of a communal office environment, with its centralized location for both collaboration and accountability, are enough to justify the costs of brick-and-mortar office space.
主谓一致
(A) benefit of （错）
(B) benefit derived from （错）
(C) benefits that are from
(D ) benefits of
(E) benefit that employees get from （错）
d （对）
4.(44)Up-and-coming athletic wear companies like Envirotek have recently moved to Portland to avail themselves of the city’s deep pool of health enthusiasts, retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and its growing community of investors in socially responsible companies, among other things.
平行
A) retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and its
B) a retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and a
C) a retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and of a
D) retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and the city’s
E) retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and a
b （对）
5.(45)In addition to the boom in tax revenue, the federal government’s books are being helped by lower defense spending, a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, and proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, the automakers that were taken over by Washington in 2009.
平行
(A) are being helped by lower defense spending, a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, and proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, the automakers
(B) have been helped by lower defense spending, a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, and by proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, automakers
(C) have been helped by lower defense spending, a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, and by the automakers
(D) are being helped by lower defense spending, by a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, and proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, the automakers 时态很奇怪
(E) were helped by lower defense spending and a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, also by proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, the automakers 错
b have been helped by A, 同位语， and by B， 同位语
错误 a
tense bce tense wrong 这里应该是ongoingd平行不对
6.(46)The views and opinions of elected politicians on this crucial global issue are no more significant than the private citizens they claim to represent.
A. than the private citizens （错)
B. compared to those of the private citizens （错)
C. in relation to those of the private citizens（错)
D. than those of the private citizens
E. as the private citizen’s views
more+than
d （对）
看一下compared to
7.(47)According to some social science researchers, recent studies show that educators are more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non traditional ideas - than when restricted to only well-tested techniques.
A. that educators are more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non-traditional ideas - than when
B. that educators are more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non-traditional ideas - as when
C. educators to be more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non-traditional ideas - than they are
D. educators as being more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non-traditional ideas - as they are when
E. educators as more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non-traditional ideas - than when
a （对）
8.(48)In 1945, Germany was defeated by the Allies, ended its occupation of Denmark, and left behind hundreds of thousands of land mines along the country’s North Sea beaches and tasking the weary natives with a massive clean-up project.
(A) Germany was defeated by the Allies, ended its occupation of Denmark, and left
(B) Germany, defeated by the Allies, ended its occupation of Denmark, leaving
(C) Germany was defeated by the Allies, ending its occupation of Denmark, and left
(D) Germany, having been defeated by the Allies, ended its occupation of Denmark and left
(E) Germany defeated by the Allies, ended its occupation of Denmark and left
b （对）
9.(49)Neanderthals didn't live in Africa, which is why sub-Saharan African populations have no trace of Neanderthal DNA, but other populations share DNA with Neanderthals, as discovered by a palaeogenetiscist at the Max Planck Institute in Germany that sequenced the Neanderthal genome.
modifier， 时态
(A) Neanderthals didn't live in Africa, which is why sub-Saharan African populations have no trace of Neanderthal DNA, but other populations share DNA with Neanderthals, as discovered by a paleogeneticist at the Max Planck Institute in Germany that sequenced the Neanderthal genome.
(B) Having sequenced the Neanderthal genome, a paleogeneticist at the Max Planck Institute in Germany has concluded that any human whose ancestral group developed outside Africa has inherited DNA from Neanderthals; since Neanderthals didn't live in Africa, sub-Saharan African populations have no trace of Neanderthal DNA.
(C) Neanderthals didn't live in Africa, which is why sub-Saharan African populations have no trace of Neanderthal DNA, but a paleogeneticist at the Max Planck Institute in Germany who sequenced the Neanderthal genome has concluded that other humans share DNA with Neanderthals.
(D) After sequencing the Neanderthal genome, the Max Planck Institute in Germany where a paleogeneticist researched the Neanderthal-human link, has concluded that any human whose ancestral group developed outside Africa has inherited DNA from Neanderthals; since Neanderthals didn't live in Africa, sub-Saharan African populations have no trace of Neanderthal DNA. （第一个modifier的逻辑主语错）
(E) The sequencing of the Neanderthal genome by a paleogeneticist at the Max Planck Institute in Germany has led to the conclusion that humans whose ancestral group developed outside Africa has inherited DNA from Neanderthals and sub-Saharan Africans have no trace of Neanderthal DNA due to Neanderthals not living in Africa.
（主谓不一致）
c
错误，b
10.(50)The Mariachi band, which performs every Saturday evening during the summer, is holding an audition to find a replacement for their departing trumpet player, who is forming his own group.
A. to find a replacement for their departing trumpet player
B. that find a replacement for its departing trumpet player
C. that find a replacement for their departing trumpet player
D. to find a replacement for its departing trumpet player
E. as help to find a replacement for its departing trumpet player
d （对）
代词，句子意思
错误：5，9
作者: blackblock 时间: 2022-11-24 19:48
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作者: blackblock 时间: 2022-11-25 14:33
1. E
A 时态 B 平行？ C时态 Dguide不对
2. B
ACDE 应该是人grow a business 不是discipiline
3. D
后面是are，应该是复数，排除ABE，第一次读的时候觉得是d，但后面有感觉d好像缺了点啥。。。
4. B
C的话应该是平行对象错了
5. B
A时态 Cautomakers应该是和general motors一起的
D 时态 Ealso不太合适吧
6. D
应该是private citizens' 的views，排除A；前面有比较级，用than更合适
7. A
more effective than不是as
8. A
三个过去式平行，B这个看着不规范，C ending像给前面的定语？不合适吧，D时态奇怪，E被动
9. B
主语应该是WPInstitute，which不能代前面一整个分句
10. D
主语是单数吧，表目的用to
作者: sofia索菲亚 时间: 2022-12-8 02:46
Day45
1.(41)Even as it wrestles with the nearly $10 billion of debt that has overwhelmed it, Stockton had already been billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt, to search for ways to restructure it, and to now guide the city through legal proceedings.
A. Stockton had already been billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt, to search for ways to restructure it, and to now guide the city through legal proceedings
B. Stockton is being billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt, search for ways to restructure it, and to now guide the city through legal proceedings
C. Stockton had already been billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt and search for ways to restructure it, all while guiding the city through legal proceedings
D. Stockton has already been billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt, search for ways to restructure it, and now guide the city through legal proceedings
E. Stockton has already been billed more than $11 million by firms hired to sort through that debt and to search for ways to restructure it, and now guide the city through legal proceedingse 错误 选d
had done is using the wrong tense, a, c 排除
doing 错误， 平行错误
e平行错误， 因为都是公司做的， 后面都是 to do a, do b, and now do c
为什么最后一个动词的主语不能是stockton？
2.(42)To grow a young business, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required to achieve progress and success.
(A) To grow a young business, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required to achieve progress and success.
(B) To grow a young business, one needs discipline to maintain what works and change what is required to achieve progress and success.
(C) To grow a young business, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required in order to achieve progress and success.
(D) In order to achieve progress and success, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required while growing a young business.
(E) In order to achieve progress and success, discipline is needed in order to maintain what works and to change what is required while growing a young business.
b
3.(43)While cost savings and employee satisfaction have led many businesses to adopt friendly work-from-home policies, a growing sentiment among managers is that the benefit of a communal office environment, with its centralized location for both collaboration and accountability, are enough to justify the costs of brick-and-mortar office space.
(A) benefit of
(B) benefit derived from
(C) benefits that are from
(D ) benefits of
(E) benefit that employees get from
d
4.(44)Up-and-coming athletic wear companies like Envirotek have recently moved to Portland to avail themselves of the city’s deep pool of health enthusiasts, retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and its growing community of investors in socially responsible companies, among other things.
A) retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and its
B) a retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and a
C) a retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and of a
D) retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and the city’s
E) retail market that prizes environmentally friendly products, and a
b
5.(45)In addition to the boom in tax revenue, the federal government’s books are being helped by lower defense spending, a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, and proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, the automakers that were taken over by Washington in 2009.
(A) are being helped by lower defense spending, a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, and proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, the automakers
(B) have been helped by lower defense spending, a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, and by proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, automakers
(C) have been helped by lower defense spending, a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, and by the automakers
(D) are being helped by lower defense spending, by a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, and proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, the automakers
(E) were helped by lower defense spending and a drop in outlays for benefits like Medicaid, also by proceeds from the sales of General Motors and Chrysler, the automakers
a
6.(46)The views and opinions of elected politicians on this crucial global issue are no more significant than the private citizens they claim to represent.
A. than the private citizens
B. compared to those of the private citizens
C. in relation to those of the private citizens
D. than those of the private citizens
E. as the private citizen’s views
d
7.(47)According to some social science researchers, recent studies show that educators are more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non traditional ideas - than when restricted to only well-tested techniques.
A. that educators are more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non-traditional ideas - than when
B. that educators are more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non-traditional ideas - as when
C. educators to be more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non-traditional ideas - than they are
D. educators as being more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non-traditional ideas - as they are when
E. educators as more effective when permitted to experiment with a variety of different teaching methods - including multimedia presentations, hands-on learning, and other non-traditional ideas - than when
a
8.(48)In 1945, Germany was defeated by the Allies, ended its occupation of Denmark, and left behind hundreds of thousands of land mines along the country’s North Sea beaches and tasking the weary natives with a massive clean-up project.
(A) Germany was defeated by the Allies, ended its occupation of Denmark, and left
(B) Germany, defeated by the Allies, ended its occupation of Denmark, leaving
(C) Germany was defeated by the Allies, ending its occupation of Denmark, and left
(D) Germany, having been defeated by the Allies, ended its occupation of Denmark and left
(E) Germany defeated by the Allies, ended its occupation of Denmark and left
b
9.(49)Neanderthals didn't live in Africa, which is why sub-Saharan African populations have no trace of Neanderthal DNA, but other populations share DNA with Neanderthals, as discovered by a palaeogenetiscist at the Max Planck Institute in Germany that sequenced the Neanderthal genome.
(A) Neanderthals didn't live in Africa, which is why sub-Saharan African populations have no trace of Neanderthal DNA, but other populations share DNA with Neanderthals, as discovered by a paleogeneticist at the Max Planck Institute in Germany that sequenced the Neanderthal genome.
(B) Having sequenced the Neanderthal genome, a paleogeneticist at the Max Planck Institute in Germany has concluded that any human whose ancestral group developed outside Africa has inherited DNA from Neanderthals; since Neanderthals didn't live in Africa, sub-Saharan African populations have no trace of Neanderthal DNA.
(C) Neanderthals didn't live in Africa, which is why sub-Saharan African populations have no trace of Neanderthal DNA, but a paleogeneticist at the Max Planck Institute in Germany who sequenced the Neanderthal genome has concluded that other humans share DNA with Neanderthals.
(D) After sequencing the Neanderthal genome, the Max Planck Institute in Germany where a paleogeneticist researched the Neanderthal-human link, has concluded that any human whose ancestral group developed outside Africa has inherited DNA from Neanderthals; since Neanderthals didn't live in Africa, sub-Saharan African populations have no trace of Neanderthal DNA.
(E) The sequencing of the Neanderthal genome by a paleogeneticist at the Max Planck Institute in Germany has led to the conclusion that humans whose ancestral group developed outside Africa has inherited DNA from Neanderthals and sub-Saharan Africans have no trace of Neanderthal DNA due to Neanderthals not living in Africa.
b
10.(50)The Mariachi band, which performs every Saturday evening during the summer, is holding an audition to find a replacement for their departing trumpet player, who is forming his own group.
A. to find a replacement for their departing trumpet player
B. that find a replacement for its departing trumpet player
C. that find a replacement for their departing trumpet player
D. to find a replacement for its departing trumpet player
E. as help to find a replacement for its departing trumpet player
d
第一题错，其他的都对
作者: 粉墨婉转 时间: 2023-10-9 20:37
2.(42)To grow a young business, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required to achieve progress and success.
(A) To grow a young business, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required to achieve progress and success.
(B) To grow a young business, one needs discipline to maintain what works and change what is required to achieve progress and success.
(C) To grow a young business, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required in order to achieve progress and success.
(D) In order to achieve progress and success, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required while growing a young business.
(E) In order to achieve progress and success, discipline is needed in order to maintain what works and to change what is required while growing a young business.
(B) 和 (D) 都是结构正确并且表意清晰的句子，但它们的焦点和结构有所不同。选择哪一个更好主要取决于你想强调的点和句子的上下文。
(B) To grow a young business, one needs discipline to maintain what works and change what is required to achieve progress and success.
(B)选项首先提到了“发展一个年轻的企业”，强调了为了这一目标所需要的纪律。这个句子的结构是："为了达到目标X，需要Y"。
(D) In order to achieve progress and success, discipline is needed to maintain what works and change what is required while growing a young business.
(D)选项首先提到了“为了实现进步和成功”，并将这个目标与“发展一个年轻的企业”结合在一起。这个句子的结构是："为了达到目标X，在进行Y的过程中需要Z"。
两者之间的主要区别在于它们各自强调的部分和结构：
(B) 更多地强调了发展年轻企业的挑战和需要的纪律。
(D) 更多地强调了实现进步和成功的普遍目标，然后提到了在发展年轻企业的过程中所需要的纪律。
如果你想强调发展年轻企业的挑战和所需的纪律，(B)可能更合适。但如果你想强调实现进步和成功的普遍目标，并在此基础上讨论发展年轻企业，那么(D)可能更为合适。
从流畅性和通用性的角度看，(D)可能稍微更好一些，因为它首先设置了一个普遍的场景（实现进步和成功），然后再具体到年轻企业的挑战。但是，从逻辑和自然性的角度看，(B)选项确实更有优势，因为"one"（某人）充当了这个角色，使句子的逻辑更加清晰：是“某人”需要纪律来发展业务。
总结：还是应该选B，因为D改变了原句A的句子意思。
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