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标题: 【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day12
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作者: anduyin 时间: 2022-10-7 08:51
Day 18
1. 老鼠大脑实验
研究表明，压力会导致老鼠大脑的一个区域变小。科学家们研究了因为压力而导致disorder的人，发现他们的那个区域也变小了。结论是，压力对于这块区域的作用在老鼠身上和在人身上是一样的。evaluate题。
P1：压力会导致老鼠大脑的区域变小
P2：压力——人出现disorder——大脑的区域也变小了
C：压力对于这块区域的作用是一样的
猜测：压力的作用机制得一样才行
答案：老鼠的大脑区域变小是否也是因为压力导致的disorder
2. 产量低的时候存冰箱
Which of the following most logically completes the passage?
Pecan growers get a high price for their crop when pecans are comparatively scarce, but the price drops sharply when pecans are abundant. Thus, in high-yield years, growers often hold back part of their crop in refrigerated warehouses for one or two years, hoping for higher prices in the future. This year's pecan crop was the smallest in five years. It is nonetheless quite possible that a portion of this year's crop will be held back, since___ A______
P：价格受产量影响，产量高则价格低。
P2：人家想通过存放来保证第二年的价格很高
C：尽管今年产量最少，但是这个豌豆的占比会升高
(A) each of the last two years produced record-breaking pecan yields（因为去年产量巨高，已经有很多库存了）
(B) the quality of this year's pecan crop is no worse than the quality of the pecan crops of the
previous five years
(C) pecan prices have not been subject to sharp fluctuations in recent years
(D) for some pecan growers, this year's crop was no smaller than last year's
(E) the practice of holding back part of one year's crop had not yet become widespread the last time the pecan crop was as small as it was this year
3. 灯泡vs灯泡
一种F打头的灯泡怎么怎么着，然后LED灯泡比起它来，持续时间长是它的5倍，价钱大概也是它的五倍（一个LED灯泡可以买5个F灯泡），问以上最有可能得出什么结论？
P：LED的续航时间是F的五倍，价格也是五倍
C：可能会问谁更适合买
这种得看LED的维修或者其他安装费用等对比
选项： C
①F灯泡应该改进技术，增加与LED灯泡的竞争力；
②LED灯泡应该减价，增加与F灯泡的竞争力；
③LED灯可以用在换灯泡比较难的地方。
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Day12
1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
D
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,（三单）
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
（从句里面主语明显是复数）
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,（同E）
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
（uncontrolled和深海没有关系 ）
2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.B
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging（their 不对）
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging（单数）
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges （名词后面才跟in，动词直接接名词）
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges（只能考语义了，应该这个市场在这个国家，而不是国家的书本市场）
3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern. A
A. Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B. Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that（比较不对）
C. Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes（同B）
D. Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds （同B）
E. Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes（同B）
4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas. C
A. minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice（应该是to do）
B. minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing（同A，而且这里直接than 后面没有不定式了）
C. minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice （rather than 不对）
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only C
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only（和人比较）
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well（同A）
C. those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D. those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well （not 后面不能是as well ）
E. department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball（同A）
6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772. A
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and（and 莫名其妙）
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and（不需要过完）
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives （得是人，因为主动词是understand）
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives（同D）
7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits. D
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing （which 要修饰的是remedy ，但是太远了）
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing（同A）
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of（后面没有定冠词）
8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars. C
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,（后面是co2）
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,（同A）
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon, （没谓语）
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,（同A）
9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded. A
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was（to do 表目的）
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were （them 指代太远了，不如A的好）
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was （有one了）
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were（同D）
10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings. D
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been（than 后面得有名词）
C.movies, which is less than those（which 不管修饰啥都是有问题的，应该是死亡人对比）
D.movies, a number lower than the people
E.movies, fewer than the ones（可数才能few）
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作者: hs999 时间: 2022-10-7 11:05
Day 12 打卡
1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,【have错误；because和by不并列】
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,【because和by不并列】
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,【because和by不并列】【MANHATTAN SC 上 提 到 ： Never select an answer choice containing the phrase THE NUMBERS OF】
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled, 【相对E来说不是很好？】【总结：现在进行时一般描述状态，描述事件或动作只有两个情形：1）一般真理 2）正在发生的事情，用现在进行时。所以在本题中are reduced by时态不好，不是一般真理，不是正在发生的动作】
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,【正确】【现在完成时更好；uncontrolled放到前面更简洁，且同时修饰两者】
2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging【their没有指代】
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges【which就近修饰，不优】【which可以跳跃指代，但是此处which离其指代对象隔了一个状语in the country，而 且country与ranges是gramatically matched的，故B不佳。】
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging【their指代错误】
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges【in多余，increase是作为动词，而非名词，无需使用in；which就近修饰不优】
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges【正确】
3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes【正确】
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that【不能构成转折关系】
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes【主语不可比】
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds【主语不可比】
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes【定语从句应该描述比较对象的差别】
4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice【likely to do】
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing【likely to do】
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing【正确】
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice【likely to do，不能加that从句； more…than比较句型 不完整】 【It is likely that是可以用的，只是需要看清楚这里的it是形式主语还是指代。形式主语的话引导强调句，正确；指代的话就是某物可能……，就是错误的】
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice【as……as】
5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only【but转折关系无法构成，无论和哪个句子并列；比较主语不对等】【Unlike后面不可以加介词短语，即便省略也不能省去those】【not…but…不平行，应改为but leaving with a basketball only，但这样改了也有but leaving修饰they come in for a basketball的歧义，还是不好】
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well【比较主语不对等；as well和also重复】【shop impulsively very little有另一个含义：冲动地买一些小东西(little可以作为adj.，不一定是adv.)】
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball【do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis之间不是并列关系，是解释说明；but转折关系不对】【but不能连接三个并列成分，只能连接两个，do not buy之前也要加上and。“ but”不能像“ and”或“ or”那样连接三个事物。】
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well【正确】【 两个不同层次却有联系的句子用semicolon连接是最合适的】 【Only做adj.修饰basketball】
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball【比较主语不对等；but转折关系无法构成】
6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives【正确】
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and【thinking修饰不如定语从句，无法表达时态，持续性也不够；and recorded没有并列的】
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and【recorded与had thought并列，是主动形式，主语为学者，错误】【过去完成时表示过去的过去，在此没有必要使用过去完成时】
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives【与后面的谓语understand无法衔接】【some scholars once thought，叫做“嵌入式关系分句”，具体见补充说明。】
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives【与后面的谓语understand无法衔接；which定语从句结构错误】
7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing【remedies是定语从句的主语，谓语用复数；and requiring与the establishment不平行】
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing【remedies是定语从句的主语，谓语用复数】
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of【and requiring与the establishment不平行】
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing【正确】
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of【and requiring是动词， the establishing of是动名词，形式不平行】
8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,【than are fungi放在后面，感觉植物更有效只强调了acquiring这个动作；in the form of carbon dioxide作为状语修饰acquiring，没有问题，无关与 fungi之间的衔接】
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,【than are fungi位置问题同A；缺少are，不优】
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,【正确】
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,【缺少谓语动词】
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,【and converting没有并列的；than fungi最好加上do】
9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were【正确】
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was【an offer for buying不优；was在虚拟语气中错误；they错误，不是这些投资者签署，第一遍做的时候想不到这点，需要根据常识和语义判断】
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were【until a merger agreement be signed不是虚拟语气，不能用原型be；with a provision语义上不如including a provision，且有作状语修饰签署这个动作的嫌疑】
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was【are expected；the deal was；offer for buying】
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were【are expected；they sign】
10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those【less修饰不可数名词】【文用those仅仅指代了people，失去了”数值概念”，所 以是错误的，唯一一个好的解决方法是than后面省略主语，后面补出have been，让 省略的主语自动拥有”数值”属性】
B.movies—fewer than have been【正确】
C.movies, which is less than those【is错误，如果which指代seven people，不能指代这件事】
D.movies, a number lower than the people【a number与the people不可比，因为单纯的people并没有”数值属性”】
E.movies, fewer than the ones【the ones特指前文出现过的复数名词，those泛指前文出现的那一类复数名词】【the ones没有”数值”概念，无法与seven进行数值上的比较】
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1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,（number和have主谓不一致）
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled, （and前后不平行）
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,（numbers和has主谓不一致）
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled, （ deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled表达冗余）
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, ✅
2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging （their和company主谓不一致）
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges （which修饰歧义）
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging （their和company主谓不一致）
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges （in多余；which修饰歧义）
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges ✅
3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes ✅
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that （前后SVO不对应；tiny tubes for the conveying表达错误）
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes （mammals和birds’ tubes 无法比较）
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds （mammals和tubes 无法比较）
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes（which修饰歧义；the tubes前面加入in birds 不算绝对平行）
4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice（likely in planning搭配错误）
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing （likely 后面缺少结构）
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing ✅
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice （more和rather than搭配错误）
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice（as和rather than搭配错误）
5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only （unlike后面只能加名词；not buying和leave不平行）
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well （unlike后面只能加名词）
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball （but转折逻辑错误；run-on）
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well （and和as well有点重复，整句话不太pretty，但还是选他✅）
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball（shoppers和department stores无法比较；they无所指）
6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives✅
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and （recorded by missionaries or anthropologists是用来修饰 oral narratives,不用and连接）
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and （recorded by missionaries or anthropologists是用来修饰 oral narratives,不用and连接；had thought过去完成时没有必要）
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives （Native American literatures无法 understand ）
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives （Native American literatures无法 understand ）
7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing （which修饰歧义）
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing （which修饰歧义）
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of （which修饰歧义）
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing ✅
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of （并列形式不对）
8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, （carbon和后面 in the form of carbon dioxide距离太远）
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,（fungi存在歧义）
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon, ✅
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon, （缺少谓语）
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi, （carbon和后面 in the form of carbon dioxide距离太远；and前后不平行）
9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were✅
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was（make an offer for buying搭配错误；虚拟语气用was错误）
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were （by them多余）
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was （not one和are主谓不一致；make an offer for buying搭配错误；it无所指；with XXX included表达unidiomatic；虚拟语气用was错误）
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were（not one和are主谓不一致；expect to be making进行时没有必要）
10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those （less不能修饰people）
B.movies—fewer than have been ✅
C.movies, which is less than those （which修饰歧义；less不能修饰people）
D.movies, a number lower than the people （缺少have been，前后不平行）
E.movies, fewer than the ones （缺少have been，前后不平行）
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1.(209)InScotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because ofuncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats tothe fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced becauseof uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea andcoastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced becauseof uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-seaand coastal netting that is not controlled,
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolleddeep-sea and coastal netting,
E（注意划线后面的by pollution, and by…，因此要找平行的）
2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions,the company will increase their share ofthe country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a marketranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion bookmarket from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billionbook market in the country, which ranges
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share ofthe $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, ofthe $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21billion book market, which ranges
E（这里which修饰有靠近market，那优先就选靠近的，其次还有their和its的问题。）
3.(211)Whereas inmammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed inparallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients tobone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying ofnutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds havetubes that
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes forconveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes thatconvey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes inbirds
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients tobone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
A（前后对比需要注意比的东西要一致，逻辑要对）
4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medicalstudents conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than areother graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely thanare other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times morelikely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as othergraduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely thatminority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minoritygraduates than other graduates to plan to practice
C（本来在AC之间摇摆不定，C的意思数量上和A也就是原文不一样了，但A的in planning也有问题，four times more likelythan和as likely as都是对的）
5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping,not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball,but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulseshopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for abasketball, but they leave with a basketball only
B.in department stores, shop impulsively verylittle; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball onlyand not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
C.those in department stores, do very littleimpulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come infor a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulseshopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketballonly and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little;someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for abasketball but will leave with only a basketball
D（注意对比的内容要一致，前面是shopper，后面也是）
6.(214)Scholars whoonce thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists nowunderstand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and thewritten works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures weresolely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literaturesonce solely as oral narratives, and
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native Americanliteratures solely as oral narratives and
D.Native American literatures, which some scholarsonce thought were solely oral narratives
E.Native American literatures, which some scholarsonce, thinking they were solely oral narratives
A（主谓逻辑要一致，C的过去完成有问题）
7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaignurged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in theshark population, which includes the establishment of size limits forshark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during puppingseason, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limitsfor shark catches, closing
B.which includes establishing limits to the sizeof sharks that can be caught, closing
C.which include the establishment of size limitsfor shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches,closing
E.including the establishing of limits to the sizeof sharks that are caught, the closing of
D（这里用which就不对了，形容的是remedies）
8.(216)Plants aremore efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, andconverting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbonthan are fungi,
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiringcarbon,
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently thanfungi,
C（这里需要额外注意后面的修饰，in the form of CO2，指的就是获得C的方式，所以C最优）
9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bankuntil a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties ifthe deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bankuntil a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties ifthe deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying FirstInterstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision forpenalties if the deal was
C.is expected to make an offer to buy FirstInterstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision forpenalties if the deal were
D.are expected to make an offer for buying FirstInterstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision forpenalties included if the deal was
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy FirstInterstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision forpenalties if the deal were
A（首先用is，until后面不能用they，指代有问题）
10.(218)Only seven people this century have beenkilled by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been
C.movies, which is less than those
D.movies, a number lower than the people
E.movies, fewer than the ones
B（前面有7 people…have been后面也需要用have been，E中还用了the，就指的是前面的7个人了）
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1.E 2.E 3.A 4.xA √C (likely必须接不定式，主系结构比较省略系动词) 5.D
6.A 7.D 8.C 9.A 10.B
作者: 邦德王 时间: 2022-10-7 15:41
1. E 平行结构by
2. E （纠结B）但是which离指代对象越近越好
3. A
4. C
5. D
6. A
7. D
8. C
9. A
10. B the ones没有数值概念
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作者: 在水里睡觉 时间: 2022-10-7 17:29
E
E
A
C
D
A
D
C
A
C---B
这里破折号表达意外的意思
B的have been killed在5个选项里也是最优
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作者: 一只小白 时间: 2022-10-7 19:09
"注意语境：by..., and by.....
reduce& reduce by：排ABC
modifier有无，修饰歧义排D"
"1.their& its，排AC
2.BD modifier没有E直接"
"比较对象排排BCD
E：tube前不能加入介词短语，排"
"比较结构错误排DE
be likely to& in & 无，排AB"
"1.比较对象错排ABE
2.C选项run on，排
补充：but不能连接三个事物"
"缺谓语排BE
主语不同：谓语understand，说明主语是主体，排D
thought& had thought（时态）后面是now，排C"
"语境：平行排CE
主谓不一致排AB"
"排D缺谓语
语境平行排E
are有无，歧义排B；carbon位置，修饰错误排A"
"1.is& are one of...排DE
2.if were& was，虚拟语气排B
3.them有无，找不到指代对象"
"less不可数，排AC
number与people不可比排D
the ones指代前面的people，错误"
作者: 小雪要上学 时间: 2022-10-7 19:13
EEACCADCAB
作者: xkxkxkk 时间: 2022-10-7 19:22
1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball
6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives
7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of
8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,
9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were
10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been
C.movies, which is less than those
D.movies, a number lower than the people
E.movies, fewer than the ones
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1. E 平行结构by
2. E range修饰market越近越好
3. A unlike需要严格平行
4. C
5. D
6. A
7. D
8. C
9. A
10. B
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Day12
1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
E
A: The number of + 单三，A错误
B: 应该用现在完成时，B错误
C: 与___后的by by不平行，C错误；
D: 应该用现在完成时，D错误；
E: 正确
A number of 一些
Numbers of 大量
The number of …的数量
2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
C✖ E✔
A: a market没有接着 book market，A错误；
B: which前接的是country，应该描述的是book market，B错误
C: 错选；
D: which前接的是country，应该描述的是book market；increase in后面接名词，increase这里做了名词，D错误；
E: 正确
3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
A
A: 正确
B: tiny tubes和birds平行了，B错误；
C: mammals和tubes平行了，C错误；the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells表达不清晰同B
D: mammals和tubes平行了，D错误；
E: which修饰了bone cells，应该要修饰tubes，E错误；
4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
C
句意：少数族裔毕业生打算去社会经济不发达地区实践的可能性是其他毕业生的4倍
A: A错误；
B: 缺少谓语动词，B错误
C: 正确
D: rather than用法错误，D错误；
E: 应该是as likely as，E错误
5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball
D
句意是：在运动商店购物的人更少进行冲动消费，不像在百货商场购物的人；当他们进入商店买一个篮球的时候，不会买一组滑雪板和回力标，而是只拿着一个篮球离开
A: unlike比较的对象是百货商场里购物的人，是2个比较对象；not buying和but they leave不平行，A错误；
B: unlike比较的对象是百货商场里购物的人，是2个比较对象；not also错误，B错误；
C: do, do, but leave，结构不对，C错误；
D: D正确
E: unlike比较的对象是百货商场里购物的人，是2个比较对象，E错误；
6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives
A
A: 正确
B: 前半句没有谓语，and recorded by错误，B错误；
C: 主句now understand是一般现在时，从句应该用过去时，C错误；
D: 谓语动词是understand，主语不能是literature，D错误
E: 谓语动词是understand，主语不能是literature，D错误；
7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of
D
A: which remedies，用inlcude；划线句子应与____句子后平行，应为动名词结构，A错误；
B: which remedies，用inlcude，B错误；
C: 划线句子应与____句子后平行，应为动名词结构，C错误；
D: 正确
E: 划线句子应与____句子后平行，应为动名词结构，E错误
8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,
B✖ C✔
句意：植物获取碳，以二氧化碳的形式，并把它转化为富含能量的糖比真菌更有效率
A: 有歧义，可能理解为植物获取碳比获取真菌更有效率，A错误；
B: 有歧义，可能理解为植物获取碳比获取真菌更有效率，B错误；
C: 正确；in the form of carbon dioxide修饰carbon
D: 没有谓语动词，D错误
E: acquire, 和and converting不平行，E错误；
9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were
句意：没有一个投资者被期望去买FIB直到FIB签署了一个并购合同，并购合同包括如果交易没有完成就有处罚的条款
B✖ A✔
A: A正确；
B: they指代不明，one of the investors也不应该用they；was是过去时，使用错误，这里要用虚拟语气were，B错误；
C: them指代不明，C错误；
D: are错误，one of the investors应该用单三；it指代不明；was是过去时，使用错误，这里要用虚拟语气were，D错误；
E: are错误，one of the investors应该用单三；to be making冗余；they指代不明，E错误
10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been
C.movies, which is less than those
D.movies, a number lower than the people
E.movies, fewer than the ones
B
句意：在这个世纪只有7个人被大白鲨杀死，（大白鲨是电影中的食人动物），比被蜜蜂蛰死的人少
A: less修饰不可数名词，people是复数概念，A错误；
B: 正确，have been也和前面平行；
C: which修饰movies，less修饰不可数名词，C错误；
D: a number和people不平行，D错误；
E: 感觉the ones不对，但不知道哪里错误，E错误；
作者: slowdiving 时间: 2022-10-7 21:08
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2. E（错选A）
AC its share错误！company，如同之前做的白宫，都要用单数it指代！
BD which用错
E把to颠倒到from前面也不能说错，选项是比较出来的
4. C（错选E）
记住！！four times as likely as…和four times more likely than…都是可以的
首先根据more likely to排ABD，然后E是as likely for…不对，排除
5. D（错选C）
do very little impules shopping和do not buy a pair of skis一个是概括，一个是细化，功能不同无法平行，而且but不能连接三个并列成分！！！！，不像and一样有A, B, and C的结构，只能连接两个，所以即便不考虑逻辑上的层次，do not buy之前也要加上and
10. B（错选A）
首先人是可数的，用fewer而不是less，排AC；D这个modifier不对，排；E，the ones没有数值概念，且killed和前面have been killed不平行
当时看到A就觉得than后面一定要加个those，但其实than前后比较的是两种人的死因，成分，没有名词跟在than后面结构也平行
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12mins
1-5
1. 去D选E
EAAD
6-10
6. 去C选A
DCAB
正确率：90%
错题：4
疑惑：1&6
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1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat. E
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, the number of后谓语应为单数，because of 与未划线部分的by不平行
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled, ---is错
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, the numbers of错
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled, ---is错
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks. E
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging---- their错，主语为company代词应为its
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges--- which指代错
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging---- their错，主语为company代词应为its
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges --- which指代错
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern. A
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes--whereas后的介词需要位置上平行对称
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that---被动多余，比较形式不对等
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes---比较对象错
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds ---比较对象错
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes---比较对象错
4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas. A错。C
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing---- who plan on practicing错
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice ---不简洁
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice---不简洁
5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only C错为D
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only---unlike后不可以加介词短语 ，即便省略也不能省去those
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well--- unlike后不可以加介词短语
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well---as well
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball---unlike比较对象错
6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772. A
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and---and不平行
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and--- had thought of没必要
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives 后句谓语understand，主语为人
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives后句谓语understand，主语为人
7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits. D
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing---which指代错，and不平行
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing---which指代错
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of---which指代错，and不平行
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of-- and不平行
8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars. C
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,--- in the form of carbon dioxide应修饰carbon
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,歧义
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon, 缺谓语
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi, 歧义
9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded. B错 为A
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were--- 虚拟语气！
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was---表示动作目的to do更好；they无指代；虚拟语气用was错
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were –them单复数不匹配
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was ---虚拟语气用was错
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were--- are错误，主谓不一致
定从关系代词跨越谓语动词指代：如果关系代词与先行词相隔较短， 关系代词能跨越谓语动词指代
(not) one of the+名词复数+单数形式谓语；Not one of =none of。“No letters”必 须使用复数动词，“No one”必须用单数动词，None of plural noun 单复数灵活， 要结合上下文判断。
虚拟语气：与将来事实相反，条件从句的谓语be动词一律用were to+动词原形。通
常，命令虚拟语气只在涉及某种要求、请求或重要声明的上下文中使用。
10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings. E错为B
补充：破折号在本题中有反讽或表达意外的含义：被蜜蜂蛰死的人比被专门吃人的大白鲨吃掉的人还多
A.movies—less than those—less错，此处people为复数概念；those仅指代people失去了数值概念，than后省略主语，补出have been
B.movies—fewer than have been—as/than可以作比较从句的主语
C.movies, which is less than those----which指代错，than后加have been
D.movies, a number lower than the people 比较对象错number不能和people比
E.movies, fewer than the ones the ones没有数值概念，无法和前seven比较
作者: brownie1101 时间: 2022-10-8 21:03
1.E 2.E 3.A 4.C 5.E（更正D）
6.A 7.D 8.C 9.A 10.C(更正B，which不优，指代不明)
作者: Mechanized 时间: 2022-10-8 21:31
谢谢
作者: Carolineccc 时间: 2022-10-8 23:35
Day 12
1. E
划线句子后by…, and by….平行结构可排除ABCD
2. E
A. Their——company 单复数错误❌
B. Which 指代不清❌
C. 同A ❌
D. 同B❌
E. ✅
3. A
A. In mammals the tiny tubes—in birds the tubes 对称✅
B. Tiny tubes—birds 不对称❌
C. Mammals— bird’s tubes 不对称❌
D. Mammals— the tubes 不对称❌
E. The tiny tubes— the tubes 对称，which 指代不清❌
4. C
考点:
- as +adj./adv. +as, more than
- Plan to do sth/ on doing sth/ sth
- Be likely to do sth 很容易，倾向于做某事
A. 主系表结构中主语比较系动词要省略; be more likely in doing sth❌
B. Be likely to do 不完整❌
D. More…than不完整❌
E. Four times as …than❌
5. D
A. Unlike 后不能加介词, those 不能省; not …but不平行，且but后改了以后也有歧义❌
B. Unlike 后不能加介词，those不能省; also 和 as well 重复; leave with only a basketball—带走的只是一个篮球，而不是两个或更多; leave with a basketball only带走的只是篮球而不是还有其他什么❌
C. Do very little impulse shopping 概括，do not buy a pair of ski 细化，不能并列❌
D. ✅
E. Shoppers — department stores不平行; not… but 不平行❌
6. 句子动词是understand ，所以主语是人，排除BDE❌
C. And前后不平行❌
7. D
Include修饰study
ABC Which 指代不清❌
D✅
E. Closing 要和including 平行❌
8. C
A. In the form of 错误地修饰了fungi, acquiring 应与converting 平行❌
B. 同A❌
C.✅
D. 无动词❌
E. Acquiring 应与converting 平行❌
9. A
考点:
- not one of= none of. No lettres of必须跟复数，no one of必须跟单数，none of单复数灵活
- 虚拟语气: 与将来事实相反，谓语动词be一律用were to➕动词原型
A. If the deal were ——虚拟从句，虚拟句式不一定非要用主语，相似于if any✅
B. They 无指代，虚拟语气was错❌
C. Be signed with a provision 逻辑错—用一个条例规范签署。而应该是签署带有这一条例的协议; them❌
Are 单复数不一致排除❌
10. B
考点: as, than可以做比较从句的主语
A. People是复数，应用few❌
B. Than 即作连词又作代词指代people✅
C. which 指代不明❌
D. 比较前后不平行❌
E. The ones 没有数值的概念，没法和people比❌
作者: T7willG700 时间: 2022-10-9 00:25
错题：4
疑惑：1&6
错题：4
According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by Association of American Medical College, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
why OE attractive
why 排除OA
我根据比较对象对等原则，前面是are more likely，后面的other graduates也应该加are才对
否则就是对比错误，as first part of comparison is possibility, but the 2nd part of comparison is graduates themselves
之前Ron举的例子
the likelihood V.S. the thing that actually happens. ❌
· I am more likely to eat cheese than my wife does/will/can --> nonsense.
OG例子
Many teenagers undergo stress, but results of a recent study indicate that the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression than are those that boys experience.
boys' stress patterns do
ü why in the sentence above 不能比但在OA中可以比?
According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by Association of American Medical College,minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as 【?️are】other graduates to plan on practicing in socioeconomically deprived areas.
the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression than are those that boys experience.
= 换成和该题目一样的语序
the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely than are those that boys experience to result in depression
boys' stress patterns do
ü whats their difference?
Ron说的这个point
* the likelihood V.S. the thing that actually happens. ❌
I am more likely to eat cheese than my wife does/will/can --> nonsense.
但是！
* the likelihood V.S. the likelihood ✅
I am more likely to eat cheese than my wife
I am more likely to eat cheese than my wife is
--> both correct.
Ron举的这个例子是为了说明为什么boys' stress patterns do ❌
Many teenagers undergo stress, but results of a recent study indicate that the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression than are those that boys experience.
boys' stress patterns do
但是在本题中
According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by Association of American Medical College,minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as 【?️are】other graduates to plan on practicing in socioeconomically deprived areas.
属于* the likelihood V.S. the likelihood —> acceptable
人家只是妹有helping verb
Ron说的the likelihood V.S. the thing that actually happens 指的是helping verbs之间的不合理对比 are 和 do
我真厉害XD
why OE ❌
OE：minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
Idiom
more likely to do sth ✅
more likely in doing sth ❌
Ron: "likely" must be used with an infinitive.
the gmat writers have camouflaged this poor idiomatic usage behind not only lots of noise (the words between "likely" and "in"), but also a second, correct idiom (the one you singled out).
that's tough.
e.g.,
My team is more likely ____ than your team. (or, My team is more likely than your team _____.)
• to win?
• in winning?
incidentally, a correct sentence can contain both 'likely' and 'in X'... but only as separate constructions.
e.g.,
Car accidents are especially likely in bad weather.
note that this sentence could just as well be written as In bad weather, car accidents are especially likely.
we're NOT saying that accidents are likely to do anything; we're just saying that they are likely. (it would clearly be nonsense to say that a PERSON 'is likely'. therefore, choice A is nonsense.)
(and of course you can have all three: Drivers are especially likely to have accidents in bad weather.)
why dont we need helping verb [are]?
helping verb is only needed when:
1. to avoid ambiguity
james is more likely to meet with thomas than lydia
--> unacceptable, because there are two meanings.
in this case, you have to add a helping word to dispel the ambiguity:
james is more likely to meet with thomas than is lydia (meaning #1)
james is more likely to meet with thomas than with lydia (meaning #2)
but
james is more likely to drive to work than lydia
you don't need "is" here, since this sentence can only mean one thing. (it's not wrong to include "is" -- just not necessary.)
2. to signify tense change
in this case, no tense change, no ambiguity
——
关于noun 和 noun的比较
It is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates will plan to practice... than other graduates.
This sentence doesn't work.
If the second part of the comparison is just "other graduates", then the first part clearly must be a noun; that noun can work in one of two ways.
1/
It can appear directly next to "than".
Harvard graduates who start companies are more likely to hire strangers than other graduates.
2/
It can be the subject of "is/are more likely".
Engineering graduates are more likely to earn high starting salaries than other graduates.
In case #2, the sentence would be better written with the comparison in one continuous piece (Engineering graduates are more likely than other graduates to earn high starting salaries), although the current #2 is not strictly wrong.
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In the sentence here, "4 times more likely" is buried in the middle of the clause It is ... that xxxx will happen, so the other half needs to be an entire statement that will parallel the statement that xxx will happen.
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It is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates will plan to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas than to work for multinational pharmaceutical corporations.
The above sentence is incorrect, right? Although it looks very parallel.
对应上面店1/
No. This sentence is fine, for exactly the same reason as "reason #1" listed in my post above (link: post95689.html#p95689 ).
You've got the two parallel constructions flanking "than", so you're good.
In many cases, that's the best you can possibly do.
E.g., In New York City, more people walk than drive to work. --> "Walk" and "drive" are flanking "than", so you're good. (There's obviously no way to get "more" directly in front of "walk".)
idiom usage: Likely for (someone) to (verb)"
"It is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates as for other graduates to plan to practice...
"Likely for (someone) to (verb)" isn't a thing. Once you've seen that, you've seen that; the issue has nothing to do with the comparison.
don’t break up that structure that is one of two parts being compared
" and "It is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates than other graduates will plan to practice...", except memorise them as incorrect expressions one by one.
If the sentence starts out with "It is more likely that...", then you can't break up the clause starting with "that", just as you wouldn't want to break up any other construction that is one of the two things being compared.
Unlike the idiom above, this one requires no knowledge beyond "don't break up stuff that shouldn't be broken up".
acceptable:
1. It is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates will plan to practice... than that other graduates will.
2. It is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates will plan to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas than to work for multinational pharmaceutical corporations.
idiom
Is PLAN ON a correct idiom ?
it's in the correct choice, so, you already know the answer to this question.
疑惑：1&6
1. In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
DE split 感觉都像Fake split
split 1: are reduced by V.S. have been reduced
做的时候I think both acceptable ❌
Ron：
the present tense (e.g., "are reduced") is used for 2 things:
1/ GENERALITIES that are true regardless of the timeframe (Blood flows through veins and arteries)
2/ STATES or CONDITIONS (NOT events or actions!) that are true AT PRESENT (I am happy)
this present tense CANNOT be used for EVENTS or ACTIONS. if an event is happening right now, then you use "is/are __ing". (The factory is operating at reduced capacity because its machines are undergoing routine maintenance.)
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in general, it's a good idea to consider only MAJOR verb-tense issues. you absolutely will NOT need SUBTLE verb-tense differences to solve the problems.
this difference is pretty plain—"are reduced" is written in a tense that can NEVER be used for something like that (a single instance; an event). that's not "subtle".
split 2: deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled V.S. uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting
I think both acceptable, the latter is more concise 所以我选了E，but不确定whether is that a decision point or not
Ron
there's no reason to make this decision so difficult—it's perfectly straightforward as a COMPARISON between answer choices (= a 'beauty contest').
uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting --> FAR better
deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled --> FAR worse
this is not a matter of opinion; the difference is very clear and completely objective. the former is more efficient; the latter is less efficient.
6. Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and
in choice c,, had thought is a wrong verb tense because of no sign of past tense
^^ yes.
if the scholars' realization were also presented in a past timeframe, then that tense could work:
Last year, scholars who had long believed the principles of the xxxxxxx theory were shocked by the discovery of irrefutable counter-evidence.
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E E A C D A D C A B
作者: 动感糕人 时间: 2022-10-9 07:43
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作者: 动感糕人 时间: 2022-10-9 08:38
1.E
the number单数，numbers复数，排除AC；and by+名词 平行结构，排除BD
2.E
company应该对应its share，排除AC；increase是及物动词，排除D；增加share应该对应book market，which修饰也是book market，E表达更好
3.A
Unlike后成份不一致，排除CDE；比较应该是tubes，B比较不好
4.C
be likely to do，排除A；as as和more than固定搭配，排除DE；B句子不完整
5.C❌——D✅
unlike后应该是shoppers/those in…，排除ABE；后面两个动作应该是第一个动作的补充/解释，不应该为并列关系
6.D❌——A✅
scholars：学者们，understand的主语应该是人& recorded by…是后置定语修饰narratives：叙述，排除DE；BC句子不完整
7.D
and requiring平行结构，-doing的并列，排除ACE；D表达更简洁，并且B中which修饰population不对
8.C
and converting平行结构，排除ABE；D句子不完整
9.B❌——A✅
one单数，排除DE；这里是虚拟语气，所以不能用deal单数来判断，排除B；be signed不对，排除C
10.E❌——B✅
-eater of the movies-是修饰man，可以划掉，人数相比用fewer，排除A；-eater of the movies后面没有dash则代表修饰语直到结尾，此时the man为white shark的同位语，语义有问题，排除CDE
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作者: Tiffnini 时间: 2022-10-9 13:14
1.E，根据by pollution, and by various threats可以知道这个平行结构也需要是by xxx，排除ABC，此外AC还有SV不一致的问题。D中that is not controlled不如uncontrolled精炼。
2.E，主语是the company单数，排除AC。Which修饰book market，BD的which指代不清， 可能指代country，排除。
3.A，in mammals the tiny tubes和in birds the tubes比较对象一致
4.D（错误，应选C），A中likely in planning to practice的用法不对，排除；B的who从句使得minority graduates没有了谓语动词，排除。C中four times as likely as和four times more likely than都是正确的结构。
知识点1：主系表结构的比较中，如果比较的是主语，那么系动词要省略。A中的are多余了；
知识点2：D中是强调句型，但是more…than的结构不完整。使得minority graduates没有比较对象。应用：it is x times more likely that A will happen than B will happen. 或者A is x times more likely to happen than B.
5.D，unlike比较的是shoppers in sporting goods stores和shoppers in department stores，所以要用those指代shoppers，排除ABE；C中do not buy是run-on句子，排除。
6.A，根据谓语动词understand可知主语是人，排除DE。C的过去完成时态不对，并列关系oral narratives和recorded修饰literatures也不对，排除。B中and并列的主语是scholars，排除
7.D，a number of修饰可数名词，谓语应用复数形式，排除AB。And requiring表示前面的并列需要与它一致，只有D是结构一致的。
8.C，如果fungi放在句尾那么in the form of carbon dioxide就是修饰fungi了，语义错误，ABE都排除；D的主句没有谓语动词了
9.A，not one of用单数，排除DE。Make an offer to buy正确，排除B。agreement be signed by them的动词使用不对，them指代不清，排除C。
10.E（错误，选B），修饰人只能用fewer，排除AC。D a number和people做比较不对，排除；E中的the ones没有数值的概念，不能和seven进行比较；另外than后面应用一个句子来与前面的句子平行。
知识点1：as/than可以做比较从句的主语
知识点2：本句中比较的不仅是only seven people，而是Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark整句话，所以比较句里面，不能单纯用those来指代seven people，而应该用平行结构than (the people who) have been killed。
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Day12 40-58
1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
E
考点：平行
Number of
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,（number谓语是单数）
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, （numbers谓语是复数）
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
E
考点：increase in 和increase
代词指代单复数
Which就近指代
还有所有格和of的问题
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A
考点：平行（好像也可以不平行 whereas没要求完全平行）
Unlike的平行(这个必须)
语义
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients（有错吗这个） to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
C
考点：More..than/as likely as..
比较的前后共用问题（B和C）
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
C
考点：平行 A,B, AND C
Unlike这里是不是平行those in ..或者in …都行啊
And和as well的重复
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball
6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A
考点：SVO
谓语的动作发出者
过去完成时和一般过去时
修饰名词的两种形式 定从和-ing
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives
7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
D
考点：谓语单复数
平行
Which includes和including（介词）
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of
8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
C
考点：
平行（acquiring和converting）
SVO
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,
9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
B
考点：谓语单复数
Make… to do
代词指代 （我没搞清这里them和it的指代 具体说就是没搞清句子意思）
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were
10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
B
考点：
可数vs不可数
比较（必须可比才行）
Which的修饰
the ones
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been
C.movies, which is less than those
D.movies, a number lower than the people
E.movies, fewer than the ones
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作者: lastchance2010 时间: 2022-10-11 02:29
B (错了，正确答案是D)EACD ADCAB
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Day12
1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,（不优that is not controlled不如uncontrolled简洁）
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
答案：E
①主谓一致；②平行
2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging（their无指代）
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges（与E相比，which和market的指代相对不优）
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging（their无指代）
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges（from 6 percent to 10 percent打断意群its share of）
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
答案：E
3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
答案：A
①Whereas，Unlike比较，比较对象对等
4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
答案C
①be likely to do、it is likely that②more than
5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball
答案：D
①unlike比较②not...but平行③Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping和not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only的句间关系
6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives
答案A
①根据understand，主语一定是Scholars
②recorded的修饰对象是oral narratives
7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of
答案D
①which这里不能跳远修饰remedies②平行
8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,(fragment)
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,
答案：
intended meaning: plant和fungi在两件事上acquiring carbon和converting it to energy-rich sugars相比，plant更有效率
①acquiring和converting靠在一起，且平行
②in the form of carbon dioxide也要靠近carbon
9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was（for变成了修饰，这里用to表目的更好）
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were（be动词时态不好）
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were
答案：A
①主谓一致，one of 用单数
②dea lnot to be concluded是一种假设，用虚拟时态
10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those（less不可数）
B.movies—fewer than have been
C.movies, which is less than those（less不可数）
D.movies, a number lower than the people（比较对象不对等）
E.movies, fewer than the ones（比较不平行）
答案：B
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作者: 肥宅二号 时间: 2022-12-1 03:02
Day 12
1. E 考点平行 修饰
the number of 是单数
A number of 是复数
numbers of 的表达不正确 ->错了！ numbers of表大量的，动词永远跟复数
因此排除掉number of 用复数的A，numbers of 用单数的C
剩下的选项可以用平行和修饰排除
B前后不平行，未划线句子有by..by的结构排除
D和E之间用定语从句修饰不简洁，不优，E是更好的
2. E 考点主谓一致 修饰
句子主语是company，因此排掉用their的A和C
在BDE中，BD的which修饰到了country上，是不优的
另外：关于from..to倒用的合理性，在正确的句子里出现过，因此是可以的
3. A 考点比较
这一题可以靠比较对象来排除
B/C/D的比较对象完全错位
E的unlike结构后面只能接名词，in birds the tubes是错误的，结构不好
4. 错选A 考点比较 idiom 修饰
这道题可以靠修饰排除B(who plan on practicing修饰other graduates，错误）
另外more+adjective+rather than结构错误，排除D
E as+adjective+than也是结构错误 排除
A/C之间split在于more likely than vs. as likely as和in planning to vs. to plan on practicing
这两个点：
1. plan的用法: plan on doing somethine/plan something/plan to do something
2. be likely to do 只有这个句型是正确的用法
3. as likely as 和more likely than都是正确用法！这里不做区分
判断点归在more likely to do something,因此应该选C
5. 错选C 考点平行 grammatical construction 比较
比较对象应该是shoppers in sporting goods store和 shoppers in department stores，因此排除掉ABE的错误比较
D看到了and和as well就想排除，冗余 错误！ 这里and 和as well不属于重复，as well 修饰的是谓语动词的buy
在句子结构上do... do not... but属于是三个元素，没有and连接就变成了run-on sentence, 属于绝对的错误
因此应该选D
6. A 考点修饰 rhetorical construction
这句话后半句动词时understand，因此主语必须是一个可以发出understand的人，D/E的主语不符，排除
B和C用and连接recorded
B逗号and意思变成了scholars recorded by missionaries，语义错误且导致前半句话没有谓语
C的had thought时态没有必要用这个，表过去的过去，而这句话没有时间层次的标志语
7. D 考点平行 grammatical construction
which就近修饰了shark population排除ABC,另外C include也是主谓不一致的，就算which修饰到了a number of remedies也是单数形式，错误
E的平行结构the establishing of, the closing of和后半句话的requiring结构不平行不优
D是最好的
8. 错选A 考点比较 修饰
感觉我的比较真的是稀碎，一直错错错
先排除D，用逗号变插入语形式没有谓语动词错误
认为A的are结构没有歧义于是选了A
这里有一个重要的点是介词短语的placement，就近修饰是最优的，跳跃修饰容易有歧义
因此in the form of carbon dioxide在ABE里面错误的修饰了fungi，不由
C的结构是最优的
9. A 考点修饰 主谓一致
not one of the potential investors重点在one因此复数的谓语排除掉DE
补充读书笔记的一点：not one of = none of
Bhe Cthey无所指代
补充虚拟语气：
与现实相反，一律要用were to+动词原形
这里句子是：if the deal were not to be concluded
10. 错选E 考点idiom 比较
比较对象是seven people 因此不能用less，A/C排除掉
D的a number 和seven people不对等
E的the ones更加简洁 错误了！ the ones 没有数值的概念，无法语seven进行数值的比较
如果仔细观察还能看见B选项的have been和前面的have been平行，因此应该选B
作者: Ranyo 时间: 2022-12-3 19:48
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1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
E*
AC的单复数不对。B的because后面不平行。D的单复数不对，至少应该是that are，而且写得太复杂了。
2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
E*
A不应该是 their，a market修饰也不对。
B的which距离market太远了，好像是在修饰country而非market。
C不应该加in。D不应该加in。不过更明显的错误是C不应该their，D的which不知道是在修饰market还是country。
3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
A* 比较对象合理。
B比较对象是tiny tubes和birds，不合理。
C比较对象不合理。
D比较对象不合理。
E说得太乱了。A完美。
4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
C*
four times不可以和more than一起使用，排除ABD。其实可以一起用，不过要注意咋用。four times more likely that A will happen than that B will happen，或者A is four times more likely to happen than is B.
as和than不可以一起使用。排除E。
socioeconomically deprived areas 社会经济贫困的地区
5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball
D*
unlike后面一定要加名词成分，排除AB。比较的是购物者而非商店，排除E。
C的前一个动作和后两个动作不对。选D。
6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives
A*
DE排除：understand应该是学者理解，而非literatures理解。
B的and不对。recorded by是在修饰narratives，C不对。选择A。
7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of
D* 完美平行
ABC的which修饰shark population，不对。
E不平行。
8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,
C* 平行。
AB都不包括后面的converting
D没有主语
E不平行。
9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were
A*
not one of… 应该用is，排除DE。
BC的they和them都不知道是在指代谁。
A的if the deal were虚拟语气。
10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been
C.movies, which is less than those
D.movies, a number lower than the people
E.movies, fewer than the ones
E*
形容人，应该用fewer而非less，排除AC。 D的a number离前面的seven太远了，排除。B没有说是谁have been killed？E没啥毛病。
这道题应该选择B。Ron说他99%确定我们不可以用ones指代人，以及“THE ones”意思是“其他的ones”。
作者: Fox的Dream 时间: 2023-1-12 21:49
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1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’[url=]Url[/url]s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,平行，排除ABC，D中is与deep-sea and coastal netting 不一致
10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been
修饰人用fewer, 排除AC；E 用the ones 无法进行数值比较，排除；B省略the people who;
C.movies, which is less than those
D.movies, a number lower than the people
E.movies, fewer than the ones
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