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作者: 林limbo 时间: 2022-10-3 23:57
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作者: 林limbo 时间: 2022-10-4 00:00
DCB

作者: Tiffnini 时间: 2022-10-4 02:20
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作者: Tiffnini 时间: 2022-10-4 02:38
1. D，A中they指代new equipment and improvements；B不需要用现在进行时；C时态有问题，文中是1988，应用过去式；E时态问题，另外producing不如production好。
2. C。考察比较，比较对象是 the honeybee’s stinger和the yellow jacket’s stinger，排除ABE。D中stinger不能able to。
3. D（选错，应选B）grassy fields and old pastures和the bird itself做比较。

作者: EasonZHAO 时间: 2022-10-4 08:07
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作者: 动感糕人 时间: 2022-10-4 08:58
dd

作者: ju子 时间: 2022-10-4 09:03
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作者: xkxkxkk 时间: 2022-10-4 09:06
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作者: anduyin 时间: 2022-10-4 09:14
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作者: xkxkxkk 时间: 2022-10-4 09:21
Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need（时态） in producing (in doing表达不当)
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used (stinger able to pulled out X)
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used
in comparison & whereas 重复

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in (the sandpipers vanishing的中心词是sandpipers（不是一个result））B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing （无主句）

作者: 动感糕人 时间: 2022-10-4 09:21
1.A
-from…-划掉看成分，此处need to do比doing更合适，排除CE；when表示同时，逻辑关系不对，排除B；时间和workers关系是被动关系，排除D
2.C
比较stinger，排除ABE；比较and cannot be retracted，排除E，同时E的两句之间关系应该为并列关系，而不是因果关系
3.B
like fields and pastures，应该为名词并列，排除ADE（动名词）、C（从句）

作者: 言言不吃盐 时间: 2022-10-4 09:33
同意！

作者: 言言不吃盐 时间: 2022-10-4 09:40
1. D
从句修饰
2. C
前后一致
3. B
比较对象一致

作者: anduyin 时间: 2022-10-4 09:42
Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.DA
A.needed by workers so that they could produce（X so thatY 应该引入带有不同主语的行动。语义上看，减少时间是为了让工人生产一顿媒，不如D好）
B.needed when workers are producing（are doing 不符合）
C.workers need in producing（没有that 连接，出现了两个独立句子）
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of（和C一样）

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again. CE
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used（because 和 therefore 不该一起出现）
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it（them 不对，前面没有复数）
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used（于 S+V1+O1, and V2+O2.结构，and 前并不经常补出逗号and 前面不该有逗号）
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used（同in comparison 和whereas 重复了意思C）
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used（同D，同时jacket 和stinger 的比较不对）

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.BA
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in（中心语是鸟，result不是鸟，所以不对）
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to（同Bthat 不对）
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in （这里会变成消失的比较了）
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing（change比动名词好）

作者: Ak777 时间: 2022-10-4 09:44
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作者: 野生小刘 时间: 2022-10-4 09:45
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作者: 一只小白 时间: 2022-10-4 09:49
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作者: 在水里睡觉 时间: 2022-10-4 09:50
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作者: hs999 时间: 2022-10-4 09:55
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作者: Ak777 时间: 2022-10-4 09:59
DCX
第三题错了 pasture记成名词形式的放牧了，没找到合适的对比，应该是草地和牧场都在消失，跟赖其生存的鸟一样

作者: hs999 时间: 2022-10-4 10:05
Day 9 打卡
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce【so that因果关系不是很直接】
B.needed when workers are producing【主语变成了状语；而且现在进行时不正确】
C.workers need in producing【现在时不优；in producing不如不定式好】【need sth. for sth/ need sth to do】
D.workers needed to produce【正确】
E.workers need for their producing of【their多余；现在时不好；for producing不如不定式好】

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used【therefore多余】【be able to be done错误；[size=14.7333px]whereas表示对比，但前后分句逻辑上无法形成对比】
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it【them没有指代】【use的动作发出者为smoothness错误】
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used【正确】
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used【in comparison多余】
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used【in comparison多余】

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in【主干不对，鸟是结果】【且sandipipers与后面的is主谓不一致】
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in【正确】
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to【鸟在消失这件事和草地牧场不可比】
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in【消失和草地牧场不可比】
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing【没有谓语】

作者: 一只小白 时间: 2022-10-4 10:21
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of
D：their producing错，排E；BC时态错，排；so that有无：行动+so that+ 目的，time不是行动，排
2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used
C：缺主句排A；比较对象错排BE；in comparison有无，重复排D
3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing
B：比较对象

作者: 在水里睡觉 时间: 2022-10-4 10:58
Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing    时态不对
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of 时态+用法不对

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used       because错误
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it    stinger allow错误
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used       符合句意
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used          对比重复
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used    对比重复

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in ----IS A RESULT OF×
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to  ---LIKED.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in       ----LIKE
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing    ----LIKE

作者: 秋桂红 时间: 2022-10-4 11:02
同意！

作者: 秋桂红 时间: 2022-10-4 11:13
C 选错因为没注意时态的变化
C
B

作者: charming- 时间: 2022-10-4 11:43
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作者: charming- 时间: 2022-10-4 15:09
Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel. D
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing—时态不对
C.workers need in producing--时态不对
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of时态不对，表示目的用for不优

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again. C
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used—because夹心修饰错
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it—比较对象错
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used 有连词表示对比，in comparison多余
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used –伴随状语错

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices. B
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in主谓不一致；核心词为sandpipers，语意不对，不是说鸟是一个结果
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to句子没主语，错
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in 比较对象不对等，错
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing 比较对象不对等，错

作者: SteveKim83 时间: 2022-10-4 15:55
谢谢

作者: ElodieZHU 时间: 2022-10-4 16:10
同意！

作者: 野生小刘 时间: 2022-10-4 16:20
D9

作者: 黑框旻 时间: 2022-10-4 18:27
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作者: girigiri_I 时间: 2022-10-4 19:20
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作者: girigiri_I 时间: 2022-10-4 19:37
1. D 57’’
a. 逻辑：time needed by workers 错误，工人”做什么”需要的时间没有写明
b. 前后时态不一；when 扭曲了句子原本要表达的意思，成了时间状语表示特定时间下才 need
c. 时态；need sth. in doing 搭配错
d. Correct
e. 时态；their producing of冗余

2. C 1’31’’
a. Because、therefore冗余；cannot和be able to 不呼应
b. 为平行结构应以yellow jacket’s stinger为主语；them指代不明
c. Correct
d. In comparison和whereas语义重复
e. 同bd

3. B 1’28’’
a. Sandpipers和后面is不一致
b. Correct
c. 不对称
d. 不对称
e. 主句成分缺失

作者: Rickyri 时间: 2022-10-4 20:14
顶楼主！

作者: Rickyri 时间: 2022-10-4 21:22
1.D 选项C need与主句时态不一致；need sth. in doing 搭配错误
2.C 本题技巧：形合意合
DE In comparison 和whereas 语义重复（关键错误）
前面未划线是heavily、cannot，后面用comparatively、cannot最好
3.B

作者: slowdiving 时间: 2022-10-4 23:58
感谢分享！

作者: Shell_liang 时间: 2022-10-5 12:41
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作者: ElodieZHU 时间: 2022-10-5 15:16
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
选D错选B
A.needed by workers so that they could produce 奇怪的因果关系
B.needed when workers are producing when 扭曲了句子原本要表达的意思，成了时间状语表示特定时间下才 need；时态和主句不一致
C.workers need in producing 定语从句省略了that，时态要与主句保持一致，应该是needed；need in doing❌
D.workers needed to produce 定语从句省略了that
E.workers need for their producing of for their多余；时态不一致

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
选C
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used 主句和whereas引导从句之间逻辑关系错误；be able to be done❌；it指代错误，应该是yellow jacket
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it 不对称；smoothness用词复杂，adj优于n；them无指代；use逻辑主语错误
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used in comparison重复；用can更好，对称
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used in comparison重复；不对称

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
选B
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in sanpiper不是结果；主谓不一致is
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to 没有主句，不对等
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in 不平行；由于 like/unlike的比较相对严格，所以比较对象应尽可能接近，所以把in the northeastern United States放在中间很awkward
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing 不平行，缺少svo

作者: G_ellen 时间: 2022-10-5 18:04
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作者: G_ellen 时间: 2022-10-5 18:18
Day9
05
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
D
A.needed by workers so that they could produce（主语清晰主动比被动好）
B.needed when workers are producing（当workers在producing时时间减少？）
C.workers need in producing （感觉现在时过去时好像都可以 in producing不好）
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of（名词没有动词好 producing）

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
E
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used （it 指代不清）
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it （them指代）
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used（and前的逗号没必要但是这句话好像很对..）
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used（and前的逗号没必要）
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
B
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in（比较不对前面是field 后面是sandpipers vanishing）
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to（名词和从句没法比较  后面的平行不清晰 changes in somewhere）
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in    (due to 能直接带to吗)（比较前加介词短语有点掐断了比较）
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing（比较前加介词短语有点掐断了比较）（没有主句）

作者: 曼特宁1213 时间: 2022-10-5 19:27
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作者: MOorG 时间: 2022-10-5 21:17
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作者: MOorG 时间: 2022-10-5 22:50
DCB

作者: lastchance2010 时间: 2022-10-6 13:06
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作者: lastchance2010 时间: 2022-10-6 13:21
Day9 DCD

作者: vestofmmw 时间: 2022-10-7 00:18
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作者: Shell_liang 时间: 2022-10-7 17:29
打卡day 9

作者: vestofmmw 时间: 2022-10-7 23:33
Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988— _needed by workers so that they could produce_ a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
时态错
C.workers need in producing
时态错
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of
冗杂
D

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, _because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used_ again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
whereas 和because ，双conj错
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
平行，可
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used
C

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, _the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in_ farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
是like grassy fields的东西，不是鸟
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
单复数
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing
选D

作者: 700啊700 时间: 2022-10-8 21:29
DC A(B)
195
A the sandpipers vanishing 中心词是sandpipers 前后主谓不一致

作者: olegg678 时间: 2022-10-9 15:04
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作者: olegg678 时间: 2022-10-9 15:10
1，d，定语从句；2，c，平行；3，a

作者: Jimii 时间: 2022-10-9 17:21
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作者: slowdiving 时间: 2022-10-9 21:42
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作者: slowdiving 时间: 2022-10-9 21:45
1. D(定语修饰，代词，need的idiom用法）
2. C( idiom，代词，平行）
3. B(比较，语意逻辑）

作者: 花花嘛嘛 时间: 2022-10-10 10:47
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作者: 持之以恒目的导向 时间: 2022-10-11 01:11
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作者: 花花嘛嘛 时间: 2022-10-11 03:29
Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of
答案：D
So that表因果关系，不恰当，排除A
Need in doing sth. 搭配不对，排除D
Their producing of 表达冗杂，排除E
B？时态不对？

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used
答案：C
比较对象对等，the honeybee’s stinger为比较对象，排除A B
In comparison和whereas都是对比的含义，排除D E

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing
答案：B
比较对象对等，the grassy fields and old pastures为比较对象，排除C D E
比较对象为物，并非是消失这件事情，排除A

作者: wannatechan 时间: 2022-10-11 17:37
Mark一下！

作者: wannatechan 时间: 2022-10-12 10:27
Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce(整句的含义：新器材把工人需要的时间减少了为了工人可以生产一吨煤，逻辑上不合理)
B.needed when workers are producing(are和reduced时态不一致)
C.workers need in producing(need和reduced时态不一致)
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of(need和reduced时态不一致;而且produce的抽象名词是production)
答案：D

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used(whereas表示对比，但前后分句逻辑上无法形成对比；be able to be done错误)
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it(them指代对象不明；the comparative smoothness can therefore use it语意错误)
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used(whereas表示对比，所以个人感觉前面半句为the honeybee’s stinger，后面半句也用yellow jacket’s stinger会更好)
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used(in comparison和whereas语意重复；be able to be done错误)
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used(in comparison和whereas语意重复;不如C选项结构平行)
答案：C

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in（这里首先比较对象错误，拿物grassy fields and old pastures和事the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States比较；其次，比较的内容错误，变成grassy fields and old pastures is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices）
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to（that引导的名词性从句描述的是一个事件与the grassy fields and old pastures不对等）
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in （sandpipers’ vanishing事件与the grassy fields and old pastures不对等）
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing（sandpipers’ vanishing事件与the grassy fields and old pastures不对等；fragment;抽象名词residential and industrial development不能和动名词changing farming practices平行）
答案：B
分析：Intended meaning：和the grassy fields and old pastures一样，sandpipers消失是由于residential and industrial development和changes in farming practices
即比较双方是：the grassy fields and old pastures和sandpipers；比较的事情是消失

作者: PennyWen95 时间: 2022-10-13 17:40
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作者: PennyWen95 时间: 2022-10-21 00:11
【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day9

1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.

D.workers needed to produce

time needed by workers 错误，工人”做什么”需要的时间没有写明； "X so that Y" X 是朝着目标Y 所采取的行动,而needing time 并不是为了一个目标而采取的行动, so that +情态动词表示目的，整句的含义是：新器材把工人需要的时间减少了为了工人可以生产一吨煤，逻辑上不合理；they 指代workers 没有问题

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.

C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used

D. In comparison 和whereas 语义重复；因为前面未划线部分用的是cannot，后面用can更加呼应。
E．In comparison 和whereas 语义重复；划线部分与前面未划线部分不对称，ineffective。

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.

B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeaster United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in 正确选项

sandpipers’ vanishing 事件与the grassy fields and old pastures 不对等。由于
like/unlike的比较相对严格，所以比较对象应尽可能接近，所以把in the northeastern
United States放在中间很awkward

作者: AliceJQC 时间: 2022-10-21 04:46
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作者: 鸡麦特焖焖 时间: 2022-10-24 10:23

Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of
主干：New equipment and other improvements reduced…，needed by…
答案A
B限定了时间，句意错
CDE都是独立主格，
CE用了谓语，错误，应该用非谓语
D主被动错
2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used
答案C
A没有主句
B them无指代
DE in comparison和whereas意思重复

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing

主干：Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs …，

答案B
剩下的都没主句

作者: 野生小刘 时间: 2022-11-4 08:44
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作者: CHENOlivia 时间: 2022-11-30 09:57
我的答案：DCB
1.
A 不简洁
B when不对
C need in doing 搭配不对
E need for 不对； their doing不对
2.
Whereas 两个部分的主语要对等，排除AB
In comparison重复，排除DE
3.
like比较的对象要对等，排除ACDE

作者: Ranyo 时间: 2022-12-3 05:06
Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of

C*
A的逻辑有错误吧，有了时间以至于他们可以生产，很奇怪。
这道题应该选择D，应该从时态角度考虑。CE的一般现在时不对，都是发生在过去的事了。

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used

C*
DE的in comparison和前面的whereas在一起会redundant。
是stinger之间在比较，所以选择C。B的比较对象有误。
A错误很多：because和therefore一起出现；because以及后面的句子和前面的whereas一起出现；比较对象有误。

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing

B*
这道题做过，有印象。
注意比较对象，是grassy fields和old pastures，与the bird itself在比较，很合理。A说高地鹬的消失，比较对象有误。C的比较对象也是消失这件事，而非这个鸟本身。D同理，比较对象有误。E不对，句子缺少主句。

作者: Fox的Dream 时间: 2023-1-9 11:26
Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing

作者: GMAT996 时间: 2023-6-30 19:31
1. 时态错了 2. 主谓不一致 3. 主语成分缺失

作者: GMAT996 时间: 2023-6-30 19:35
1. 时态问题

2. 比较对象

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