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作者: 林limbo 时间: 2022-10-3 00:25
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作者: 林limbo 时间: 2022-10-3 00:34
AE（错/应选B/E中such a group前并没有提及过group）E
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作者: Tiffnini 时间: 2022-10-3 08:59
1.A
2.B，a group独立主格
3. E
今天的3道题居然说不出知识点来
作者: anduyin 时间: 2022-10-3 09:03
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1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters （which无所指）
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters （注意未划线的代词，代词指代不一；不平行）
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter （being-wordy；all-its 指代不一）
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter （with不合适，这里用some, others来说明13 colonies，不应该是伴随，错误）（with-与殖民地相关的东西）
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market（同位语）.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time, （that不对？错误）(known修饰loan不对）
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having （thesis of sb. doing sth.的核心在于sb.而不是sb.做某事）
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
作者: charming- 时间: 2022-10-3 09:41
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作者: Ak777 时间: 2022-10-3 10:18
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作者: anduyin 时间: 2022-10-3 10:27
Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists. AE
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters （being 出现的很奇怪）
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters（s就不了行了）
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter （同B）
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter （因为后面有个its，前面必须是单数，这里的with存疑，while必须要和从句或者ing短语连用，这里的是名词+介词短语）
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market. B
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,（their doing 是个坏的用法）
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group （with 不需要）
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time, （后面的插入语不知道修饰谁了）
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group（这里不是举例，而是known as）
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy. E
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having（这里的thesis会变成客户的能力）
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having（同A）
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having（where 修饰具体地点）
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have （that 的修饰不如E的简洁）
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
作者: charming- 时间: 2022-10-3 10:33
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists. A
A. some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
some formed as…others as…作同位语；each强调
B. some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters---being多余；all与后面its单复不统一
C. some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters---that定从some主动formed错误；all与后面its单复不统一
D. with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter ---being多余；all与后面its单复不统一；with使得some并不是指代colonies而是colonies相关的东西
E. with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter—补充：while多余，后面others as religious havens没有谓语动词
While不能用于任何不包含动作形式的结构，与从句/Ving短语连用
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market. E B
A. of their not paying back their loans on time, ---第一个their多余，未划线known修饰loan不符语意
B. of not paying back their loans on time, a group-- a group为borrowers的同位语，正确
C. of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group---with独立主格逻辑主语为company错误；such错误
D. that they do not pay back their loans on time, ---定从表达不简洁；未划线known修饰loan不符语意
E. that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group---定从表达不简洁；such a group错误，前面没group
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy. A E
议会开始印刷Shopping for a Better World（书），书的理论很简单：消费者有能力通过仅仅拒绝购买去改变公司。expedient adj. 权宜的；方便的；有利的
A. with the simple thesis of consumers having---独立主格修饰错误，此处解释书中理论，用同位语从句或冒号
B. which had the simple thesis of consumers having---which修饰Better World语意错
补充：thesis应该用同位语从句修饰，thesis of sb. doing sth.结构中thesis的核心只是sb.， 而并不是”sb做某事”
C. where the thesis was simple: consumers having---where修饰具体地点
D. with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have--独立主格修饰错误；that定从多余
E. whose thesis was simple: consumers have
作者: 在水里睡觉 时间: 2022-10-3 10:35
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作者: 秋桂红 时间: 2022-10-3 10:42
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作者: 言言不吃盐 时间: 2022-10-3 10:45
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作者: 动感糕人 时间: 2022-10-3 10:47
dd
作者: 言言不吃盐 时间: 2022-10-3 10:51
1. A
2. E
3. E
冒号后面是独立句子更优，排除BC；with结构不优，排除AD；
作者: 秋桂红 时间: 2022-10-3 10:53
A
B
D 错在没掌握with的用法
作者: 盐盐小羊 时间: 2022-10-3 11:02
1.A
主谓一致，划线后its排除BCD
E的while奇怪
2.E【B✔️】
选错*
划线句子后修饰对象应该是一个具体名词，排除AD
such要在前面有相关提及才可以用，排除CE
3.E
thesis—>consumers做的一件事，而非consumers本身，排除ABC
D冗余
作者: hs999 时间: 2022-10-3 11:03
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作者: hs999 时间: 2022-10-3 11:20
Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter【正确】
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters【being多余；没有谓语动词】
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters【all had written charters与后面的its不搭】【some that formed结构中some在定语从句中做主语，主动行使form动作错误】
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter【some应该是起同位语作用，但是加入with就变成了状语，错误；所有13各殖民地用一个宪章，也是有点奇怪】
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter【with引导状语，错误；some，others应该是并列的，while引导的从句不完整，错误】
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,【后面的known as the subprime lending market没有合适的修饰名词；前面的their多余】
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group【正确】
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group【with引导状语，修饰动作pay back，lend都不合适】
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time, 【后面的known as the subprime lending market没有合适的修饰名词】
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group【such应该指代前文已出现的，所以多余】
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having【with引导状语修饰publish错误，应该是描述书的性质】
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having【主题的核心是消费者，错误】
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having【主题的核心是消费者；where使用错误，不是引导地点】
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have【with引导状语修饰publish错误，应该是描述书的性质】
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have【正确】
作者: 一只小白 时间: 2022-10-3 11:22
顶顶
作者: girigiri_I 时间: 2022-10-3 11:49
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作者: justforstar 时间: 2022-10-3 12:01
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作者: girigiri_I 时间: 2022-10-3 12:13
1. A 1'13''
a. correct
b. 句子成分缺失
c. 不平行
form主动错误
d. 'all'和'a charter'数量不一致
with的存在使得some并不是指代colonies，而是与colonies相关的东西
e. while"必须与从句或__ing短语连用。它不能用于不包含任何动词形式的结构
2. B 1'41''
a. their not paying多余
b. correct
c. a group应该是borrowers的同位语，逻辑不对
With引导独立主格，其逻辑主语为it（指代company），逻辑不合理；such无所指，
错误且多余。
d. 没有指代词的情况下后半句修饰语离proven records最近
定语从句在这里表达不简洁地道
e. “such a group”是错误的，因为句子的开
头没有“group”这个词
3. E 1'19''
a. with会使人误解thesis和前面的刊物独立
b. thesis of sb. doing sth.结构中thesis的核心只是sb.，而并不是”sb做某事
c. 先行词where不恰当
d. 同a
e. correct
作者: 黑框旻 时间: 2022-10-3 13:11
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作者: 黑框旻 时间: 2022-10-3 13:23
1.A
A：
B：being多余；划线后的its表明是单数，all错误
C：some that formed用了限制性修饰some，感觉不必要，累赘；all 同B
D：being，all 同B
E：with和while并列不当
2.E ❌ B
A：of 后的核心语义在not paying，不如从句
B：同A
C：同A
D：collectively known就近形容loan，语义不成立
E：
3.E
A：of后的核心语义只有consumers，不如从句
B：同A
C：where只能用来修饰具体地点
D：is a simple one累赘
E：
作者: justforstar 时间: 2022-10-3 14:11
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.C
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter（each是二者）
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters（ some being和as不对应）
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter（ some being和as不对应；with不好）
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter（ each是二者；with不好）
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.B
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group(“such a group” 是错误的， 因为句子的开头没有“group” 这个词)
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy. E
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
作者: Rickyri 时间: 2022-10-3 16:17
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作者: Rickyri 时间: 2022-10-3 16:28
1.A
2.B
3.E AB的，thesis of sb. doing sth.结构中thesis的核心只是sb.，而并不是”sb做某事”，结构不好，应该用that引导后面做从句
作者: 一只小白 时间: 2022-10-3 16:52
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter
A：排BE缺谓语；all& each，后面是its，排CD
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
B: of & that，排DE；their多余排A；such无指代，排C
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
E：with做伴随错排AD；where错排C；重心错排B
作者: olegg678 时间: 2022-10-3 16:59
谢谢
作者: olegg678 时间: 2022-10-3 17:07
a 同位语
e 同位语从句
e 定语从句
作者: 在水里睡觉 时间: 2022-10-3 17:56
1. A
2. B
3. E
作者: T7willG700 时间: 2022-10-3 19:41
1. A
split each/all：未划线部分its，排除BCD
剩下AE
E中while后面无动词 ❌ while后边either跟句子or verbing，不可以不跟verb
Ron用了with排的E，不李姐，很玄学的概念
选A
2. B
3. E
错选ABC的仔细看这篇帖子
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/as-the-honeybeea-s-stinger-is-heavily-barbed-t7194.html
作者: T7willG700 时间: 2022-10-3 19:42
The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.Of their not paying back their loans on time, modifier error
B.Of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.Of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.That they do not pay back their loans on time, modifier error
E.That they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
OA 中的a group：
"a group..." is a MODIFIER that gives a DEFINITION of "the subprime lending market”
Ron之前说的：
如果同位语是一个具体的东西，那么它必须要修饰在他之前的名词，就像前两句。
如果同位语是一个抽象的东西，那么它可以修饰前面整个句子，就像后两句。
Q：noun modifier不该modify immediately preceding noun? As group is a concrete noun
Ron：
It's best to drop the concrete noun/abstract noun difference, and just realize that this kind of modifier can describe both kinds of things"”a noun, or a larger construction behind the comma.
In fact, this modifier can often have both functions even with the same noun heading it.
E.g.,
Many professional statisticians use least squares, a method commonly taught in high-school statistics courses.
Here, "least squares" is a statistical method.
Biologists often estimate wildlife populations by tagging animals, releasing them, and then tracking the fraction of subsequently observed animals that are tagged"”a method that has not been substantively changed by advances in technology.
Here, "a method" describes the entire lengthy description of biologists' methodology that precedes it. (The dash serves the same purpose as the comma in the first example; it's only here for added clarity, since the sentence already contains so many commas that another one could be confusing.)
I first wrote that whole bit about concrete and abstract nouns as a response to someone's question about this kind of modifier. It was a completely spontaneous analysis; I'd never thought explicitly about how this modifier works before that (though I was familiar with it).
Like other on-the-spot explanations, that one was unnecessarily limiting.
Choice E — such a group
as long as you mention some specific "X" earlier in the sentence, then "such an X" is fine, yes.
another example:
i have no problem with using a standard geometry textbook; indeed, such a book is helpful in providing ready-made sets of practice problems.
--> "such a book" is legitimate because the sentence has mentioned a particular book (namely, a standard geometry textbook).
———
"such an X" only makes sense when the concept of "X" could theoretically encompass many possibilities, of which "such an X" is only one.
i.e., if you have already given the exact, unique definition of X, then "such an X" makes no sense.
e.g.
i have no problem with using a standard geometry textbook; indeed, such a book is helpful in providing ready-made sets of practice problems.
CORRECT
--> this makes sense, because there isn't just one standard geometry textbook. so, there are many items fitting that description; "such a book" stands for any one such item.
but...
fewer churches than ever before are using readings from the King James Bible, because the archaic language in such a book is difficult for many parishioners to understand.
INCORRECT
--> The King James Bible is a unique book; it does not represent a broader class of possibilities from which we might choose one to use as an example. so, this doesn't make sense.
in contexts like this one, you could use something like "this/that book" -- or you could use an appropriate modifier, as in the correct answer to the problem in this thread.
——
"such a group" is incorrect there anyway.
"such a/an X" means that you've given just one example of some more general group or category.
in other words, "such a/an X" is used only when "X" is one of many possible examples of something.
e.g., let's say you're reading an MBA admissions blog.
Meet Michelle. She has xxxxx work experience, yyyy GMAT scores, and zzzzz other things on her application. Today we'll talk about the schools to which such a person should reasonably apply.
the point here ^^ is that the discussion doesn't just apply to michelle; it also applies to anyone else who's like her in the ways described. she is just one example, of many.
that is decidedly NOT what's happening in this sentence. this isn't just one group out of many groups satisfying a certain description; this is one group that has a certain name. so, "such a group" is WRONG here.
there's no sense in even trying to define what it modifies, because ... it's wrong.
Choice A, D modifier error — usage of verbED modifier
The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
D. that they do not pay back their loans on time,
egmat: Verb-ed modifiers can only modify preceding noun.
【Verb-ed Modifiers cannot jump over verbs】https://e-gmat.com/blogs/verb-ed-modifiers-cannot-jump-over-verbs/amp/
verb-ed modifier by Ron:
1. Verb-ed modifier 一般都可以被verb-ing modifier所替换
exception：
, "comma + __ed", following a sentence, can also refer ONLY to the noun that precedes it (in much the same manner as "___, which...").
see #35 in OG 13th/2015 edition ("jacqueline cochran").
this usage, unlike the usages discussed above, IS NOT allowed if "__ed" is replaced by "__ing".
2.
I gather that Comma+Verb-ed modifier modifies the immediate preceding noun/noun phrase?
this is the way i've normally seen it used.
Summary:
· verb-ed modifier + comma
在前
when a verb-ed modifier begins a sentence, it ALWAYS modifies the Subject of the clause.
例：OG12#25:
Based on accounts of various ancient writers, scholars have painted a sketchy picture of the activities of an all-female cult that, perhaps as early as the sixth century B.C., worshipped a goddess known in Latin as Bona Dea, “the good goddess.”
Using accounts of various ancient writers
OE is incorrect here because “Based”, the opening verb-ed modifier must refer to the Subject of the following main clause. The Subject of the main clause is “scholars”. It is evident that “based” does not logically modifies the Subject.
在后
A verb-ed modifier always refers to the preceding noun entity. This noun entity can be a single noun word or a noun phrase.
· verb-ed modifier + without comma
A verb-ed modifier always refers to the preceding noun entity. This noun entity can be a single noun word or a noun phrase.
In GMAT, a comma + verb-ed modifier placed after a clause cannot refer to the subject of the preceding clause.
作者: slowdiving 时间: 2022-10-3 21:14
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作者: slowdiving 时间: 2022-10-3 21:32
Day8
1.选A （考点：some…others的平行；独立分句要有完整的主谓；with引导的独立主格；all和each搭配名词的单复数）
2.选B (考点：同位语；record of/that，前者更简洁；intended meaning和表达的简洁有效；代词多余冗杂）
3. 选E (考点：intended meaning和表达的简洁有效，怎么表达它的主题是消费者有权利…；名词为中心vs完整的句子表意为中心；
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作者: ElodieZHU 时间: 2022-10-3 22:10
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
选A
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters 导致后面its无指代；be formed被动使用错误
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters 导致后面its无指代
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter 导致后面its无指代；be formed被动使用错误
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter with后面不能直接加句子
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
选B，错选D
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
选E
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having 主题应该是消费者有能力xx，而不是消费者
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having 主题应该是消费者有能力xx，而不是消费者
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having 这里冒号做解释主题，内容应该是消费者有能力xx，而不是消费者
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have that is- wordy
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
作者: 小雪要上学 时间: 2022-10-3 22:11
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作者: 小雪要上学 时间: 2022-10-3 22:19
ABE
作者: 动感糕人 时间: 2022-10-3 22:25
1.A
that后是its，应该用单数，排除BCD；while后应该接完整句子，排除E
2.C
a group是同位语，没有对应对象，排除BE；known as没有对应主语，排除AD
3.E
of的核心词是名词consumers，排除AB；冒号后应该是完整句子，排除C；D选项wordy
作者: lastchance2010 时间: 2022-10-4 03:48
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作者: lastchance2010 时间: 2022-10-4 03:59
Day8 ABE
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter (all had a )
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter (Two modifiers, and a subordinate before main clause?)
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
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作者: 野生小刘 时间: 2022-10-4 16:21
D8
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作者: G_ellen 时间: 2022-10-5 17:43
.（190）The thirteen original British colo nies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures（企业 商业）, others as religious havens（宗教圣地？）, each had a written charter that set forth（阐述了） its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
C
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter（后面的set是谓语复数 前面也应该是个复数）
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters 没有主句
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter （some as a 不对） （后面的set是谓语复数 前面也应该是个复数）
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter（后面的set是谓语复数 前面也应该是个复数）
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
E
A.of their not paying back their loans on time, 感觉用of没有that从句表达的好 但是也说不出哪错
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group（ with没有加的
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time, （后面known as的形容不知道形容谁）
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
E
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having（consumer的理论 不对）（with独立主格也不好）
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having（consumer的理论 不对）
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having（不能用where 冒号后应该是句子）
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have （that没指代）
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
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A B E
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CEE
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作者: vestofmmw 时间: 2022-10-7 23:34
Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, _some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter_ that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B？
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records _of their not paying back their loans on time,_ collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
a group是borrowers同位语？
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
B
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, _with the simple thesis of consumers having_ the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having
Having错
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
that is a simple one 累赘
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
A?B?
作者: 700啊700 时间: 2022-10-8 21:22
ABE
作者: cmbjddxm 时间: 2022-10-8 23:40
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作者: olegg678 时间: 2022-10-9 14:58
1.A
2.B 同位语
3.E 定语从句
作者: 花花嘛嘛 时间: 2022-10-10 10:48
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作者: 花花嘛嘛 时间: 2022-10-10 13:35
Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
作者: wannatechan 时间: 2022-10-10 19:18
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作者: wannatechan 时间: 2022-10-10 21:44
Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters（its不能指代all;fragment）
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters（its不能指代all;fragment;formed和had done时态不一致）
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter （its不能指代all）
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter（while这里的省略不正确，while必须要和从句或者ing短语连用）
答案：A
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,（known前面要有group）
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group(前半句没有提到group,such无指代)
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time, （known前面要有group）
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group(前半句没有提到group,such无指代)
答案：B
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
答案：E
①thesis要表达的是完整的一件事情②要清晰说明thesis和Shopping for a Better World的关系
作者: PennyWen95 时间: 2022-10-13 17:39
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【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter 正确选项
some that formed结构中some在定语从句中做主语，主动行使form动作错误；all与后面的its 单复形式不统一
with是指与colonies相关的东西，而“some”指的是殖民地本身，所以这句话字面
上说的是“有殖民地的殖民地”；while多余，因为后面的others as religious havens
中没有谓语动词，while必须省(如果有谓语动词则不能省，如Some cleaned the
windows, while others mopped the floor)
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
Records of sth. 固定搭配，比records that简洁地道。
A．of their not paying back their loans表达不简洁，第一个their累赘；未划线部分的
known修饰loans不合理
B．correct；本题关键在于识别出逗号后面成分的修饰对象-- borrowers的同位语必须
是a group才合理，。
C．With引导独立主格，其逻辑主语为it（指代company），逻辑不合理；such无所指，
错误且多余。
D． 定语从句在这里表达不简洁地道；未划线部分的known修饰loans不合理
E．定语从句在这里表达不简洁地道；E中的“such a group”是错误的，因为句子的开
头没有“group”这个词。
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
thesis应该用同位语从句修饰，thesis of sb. doing sth.结构中thesis的核心只是sb.，而并不是”sb做某事
作者: 鸡麦特焖焖 时间: 2022-10-24 10:35
Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter
答案A
其他没有主句
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
E
ABC 无法很好地说明动作
Esuch a group 同位前面的概念（？不确定
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
E
A of…无法很好的说明thesis
B同上
C thesis不可能是consumers
D 没必要强调是simple的，with有很多意思不佳
作者: 野生小刘 时间: 2022-11-4 08:43
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作者: CHENOlivia 时间: 2022-11-30 09:54
我的答案：ABE
1.
B 没有主句
C charters和为划线部分的its不一致
Dall 和a charter不一致
Ewith while不对
2.
A 两个their重复
C with such 不对
D that不简洁，没有同位语的名词
E that 不简洁，such 没必要
3.
A of sb doing不对
B of sb doing 不对
C where不对，同时冒号后面用完整句子
D that is a simple one 不简洁
作者: Ranyo 时间: 2022-12-3 04:41
Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter
A*
B的as a commercial venture不对，应该是复数。
C的that不知道哪来的，不对。
DE的with在这里无法解释其意思。E的while使用也不对。while后面必须有动词，无论是while+句子还是while+verbing都可以，但是不可以一个动词成分都没有。选A。
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
C*?
答案是B。DE的that they不对，they指代了records还是borrowers？指代不明。
这道题在BC之间纠结了一下，选了C，但答案是B。错在没读懂句子意思。
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
E*
AB的thesis of consumers having the power不对
C的consumers having不对，缺少动词。
D太wordy了。
E的whose修饰shopping for a better world，whose可以修饰非人类。
作者: Fox的Dream 时间: 2023-1-8 16:15
Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter定语从句
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter
后面是its, 排除BCD；while后面应该有从句或动词ing
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple: consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
that is a simple one- wordy
E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have
whose可以修饰非人类
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