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Day5 打卡
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of【正确】
B.doubling that of the increase in【that多余，increase已经包含数字的含义】
C.double as much as the increase of【as much as多余，后面接的是数字相关的名词】
D.twice as many as the increase in【as many as多余，后面接的是数字相关的名词】
E.twice as many as the increase of【as many as多余，后面接的是数字相关的名词】
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced【has错误】
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced【正确】
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing【by using赘余？in convincing作为副词修饰organize，而且没有逻辑主语，对比之下，B的定语从句更好】
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced【by the use of感觉赘余？过去时不好，前面主句是现在完成时，两个动作应该同时发生或者从句中的动作晚于主句】
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing【不是运动使用这些媒介，是协会使用，定语从句修饰错误】
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were【were没有对应的】
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been【have been错误】
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends【正确】
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends【expect that错误】
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends【expect that错误】
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作者: 一只小白 时间: 2022-9-30 10:19
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
A：CDE修饰1990，错误排；increase in & of +year 选A
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
B ：A主谓不一致，排；as well as & and 排D；which修饰错误，时态错误排E；in convincing状语，但与organize无关，排C
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
D错，改C：AB比较不平行，排；expect sb that 错误，排DE
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A 原句为increase不是数字，先排除CDE；B的that没必要
B A主谓不一致CE的in convincing感觉不太对劲Organize a campaign in convicing？ D by the use of也不太好，后面时态也不对
C AB的than后面和前面没啥平行对应的，C就非常对称；DE expect Sb. that不对
作者: justforstar 时间: 2022-9-30 10:54
1.B， increase用as much as；in 1990和in the previous year对应，不用of
2.C， campaign谓语动词用单数；that has convinced定语，句意表达不好；which used 定语，句意表达不好
3.C， than they were的were找不到平行对象；that they will be 与expect automakers连接不上，will表示将来很有可能发生，但句意没有这个意思；conservatively修饰set，这里应该修饰automakers
作者: Ak777 时间: 2022-9-30 11:09
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作者: anduyin 时间: 2022-9-30 11:13
Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year. A
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in（that 的指代会有问题，假如指代number，那就变成了1990的number在之前的增长，语义不对了）
C.double as much as the increase of（double 不对，没有and 连接）
D.twice as many as the increase in （many+可数名词）
E.twice as many as the increase of （同D）
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food. B
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced （have 不对，前面的是单数）
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing（in doing不太好，感觉应该是这个运动说服了谁， ）
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced （by 一般+doing，或者做事的人）
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing（which used 导致时态紊乱了，没做运动之前就先开始使用了啥子。）
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were C
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were（后面应该是did 或者done）
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been（同A）
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends（没有sb that 这种，只有expect sb to do 或者 expect that）
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
作者: Ak777 时间: 2022-9-30 11:33
Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in ....the number of people of the increase...
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of as much as；另外同位语需修饰前面的名词
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been 前面只有一个动词set，were/been没法还原
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends that从句修饰automaker，句意重心变成期待automaker，期待啥不知道
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1. A
many, much无指代，排除CDE；B that 多余
2. B
破折号后用从句更优，排除CE；usig动词更优，also多余，选B
3. C
比较结构一致，排除ABDE
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作者: 曼特宁1213 时间: 2022-9-30 13:27
Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of ✅
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing✅
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends✅
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
作者: Tiffnini 时间: 2022-9-30 13:38
1.A
2.B。排除CE的in convincing，另外排除A的have convinced（单复不一致）。Using的用法更直接，选B
3.C。Expect sb to do something, 选C
作者: EasonZHAO 时间: 2022-9-30 13:43
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作者: 白白有点黑 时间: 2022-9-30 13:52
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
——cde的主语是人的数量，错，b的that指代不清楚
——a
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
——have错，排除a，in convincing错，排除ce，by the use of排除d
——b
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
——expect sb to do，排除de，句子重心排除ab
——c
作者: charming- 时间: 2022-9-30 16:45
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作者: 花花嘛嘛 时间: 2022-9-30 17:21
Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
答案：B
Campaign单数，主谓一致排除A
根据语意逻辑，不是在说服农业部门说服，而是活动说服农业部门，排除in convinced/convincing，即是排除C/E
By the use表达冗杂，排除D
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
答案：C
They were 和they have been比较词前面没有出现be动词，所以排除A/B
To set dividends表目的，语意不对，排除E
D？
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作者: Catherine107 时间: 2022-9-30 18:55
1. 选错
2. B
A a campaign + have 错误
B 正确
C 重点不是在convinceing中组织了compaign，重点是compaign convince了the Department
D by the use of冗余
E which used 时态错误
3.
A were时态错误
B 重点在more conservative而不是set dividends
C 正确
D expect sb. to do sth. ✔，expect sb. that ✖
E expect sb. to do sth. ✔，expect sb. that ✖
作者: charming- 时间: 2022-9-30 19:05
Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year. D错—应为A
坐头等舱的人在1990年迅速增加，增长是前一年增加的两倍。
A. doubling the increase of --double意思是"make twice as great"，使increase/growth 两倍，doing引导伴随状语或者目的状语
B. doubling that of the increase in –that无指代
C. double as much as the increase of --错应该改为doubling，
D. twice as many as the increase in-- Many用法错误the increase不是可数的量
"the increase in X" 意为X本身在增加，套用到原句里面不对
补充：
twice as many as/ X times Y/ double as much as是同位语修饰词(appositive modifier)，要紧接其修饰的内容，在此句子中逗号前不是一个figure，所以不能用 twice as many as这个结构
E. twice as many as the increase of— "the increase of TIME PERIOD"意为某时段的增加量；Many用法错误
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food. B
有机食品行业组织了一个成功的活动，活动用各种方式，活动使农业部确信要改变规章制度。
A. using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced—have错，前修饰主语为campaign，应为单数；also多余
B. using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing-- in convincing修饰动作organized，主语为organic food industry语意不对（By using逻辑含义上不等于using，其表达的是因为通过那三个方式草根运动才是成功的，这个含义不对）
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced-- by the use of不简洁；一般过去时态不对，表示convinced发生在has organized之前
E. which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing-- in convincing修饰动作organized，主语为organic food industry语意不对；一般过去时态不对，表示convinced发生在has organized之前，不合逻辑
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were. B错—应为C
比之前更保守的设置股息
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were-- they were不对conservatively修饰动作set后面也应该为一个动作的比较，实义动词to set(表达预测，将来时)与系动词were不平行，应该是: to set Div. more conservatively than they have done.
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been to set与have been不平行，要在been后面加上setting或改为have set以修正平行
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends—to be表示从现在开始的未来，have been 从过去 到现在，时间轴上没有空缺
D. that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends-- that后they多余Expect sb. that搭配错误，只能用expect that或expect sb. to do；were的时态问题
E. that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends--that后they多余； to set错误，应该改为in setting
作者: PennyWen95 时间: 2022-9-30 20:12
【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day5
第一题：
A.doubling the increase of 正确答案
A. Correct；这里的double是"make twice as great"的意思，也就是使increase/growth
两倍；present participle结构修饰前面整个分句，这正是我们想要的，因为这里没有
确切的名词来表示the increase of the number of people，所以必须使用修饰语来修
饰整个从句。
B. That无指代对象，有人说that是指代the number，如果是指代the number的话，是
累赘的，所以that并不指向任何成分；the increase in previous year是指previous year
的增长(这个逻辑doesn’t make sense)，而不是在previous year增长，应该用the
increase of the previous year。
C. double应该改为doubling，这样划线成分才能修饰前面整个分句，double as much as
是同位语修饰词(appositive modifier)，要紧接其修饰的内容，在此句子中逗号前不
是一个figure，所以不能用double as many as这个结构；即便as much as能成功修
饰number也不对，数量应该用great来修饰，见下面补充5。
D. Many用法错误，因为the increase不是一个countable quantity(这里the increase可
以看做是一个代词，而它所指代的对象就是前面出现过的内容：the number of the
people，而the number of the people是一个表达数量的数字而不是可数名词，所以
the increase也不能够用many来修饰)；twice as many as是同位语修饰词(appositive
modifier)，要紧接其修饰的内容，在此句子中逗号前不是一个figure，所以不能用
twice as many as这个结构，awkward。(见下面知识点补充1)；the increase in
previous year错误,"the increase in X" 意为X本身在增加，套用到原句里面不对！
E. Many用法错误，因为the increase不是一个countable quantity(from Manhattan)；
twice as many as结构使用错误同上。"the increase of TIME PERIOD"意为某时段的
增加量，表达正确！
第二题：B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
A. and also在列举的时候多余，不过在also有时候是作为强调而且不用在列举中不一
定多余（and also还有一种情况下是redundant的：both X and also Y）；have应该
改为has
B. Correct；原句含义为：组织了一个成功的草根运动--其中用到了网站、公共集会、
广发邮件--该草根运动…… 注意选项B保持了现在完成时:“已经组织了一场运动…
说服了。”我们不能在这里使用一般过去时"convince "，因为那个时态和现在完成
时不匹配。
C. By using逻辑含义上不等于using，其表达的是因为通过那三个方式草根运动才是成
功的，这个含义不对；in convincing不做定语而是状语，修饰的是前面分句及前面
整个分句的动作organized，表达organize是convincing中的一个动作，改变原句合
理逻辑含义。
D. By using错误同C；and不可以换为as well as，as well as只是一个修饰语，其使mass
mailings与前两项的并列关系改变为从属结构，而且并没有A, B, as well as C的结构；
the use of 表达wordy ； 用了convinced 一般过去时表示convinced 发生在has
organized之前，逻辑含义不合理。
E. Which used时态错误，“which used”(一般过去时)不应该出现在“has organized”
(现在完成时)之前，这种结构错误地暗示了这场运动在组织之前就“使用了X、Y和
Z”，逻辑含义矛盾；in convincing不做定语而是目的状语，改变原句合理逻辑含义。
第三题：C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
A. 实义动词to set(表达预测，将来时)与系动词were不平行，应该是: to set Div. more
conservatively than they have done.
B. to set与have been不平行，要在been后面加上setting或改为have set以修正平行。
C. Correct；be + adj + in doing something很顺口, e.g. She is very active in posting
questions on CD.；时态也很好：to be表示从现在开始的未来，have been 从过去
到现在，时间轴上没有空缺
D. Expect sb. that搭配错误，只能用expect that或expect sb. to do；were的时态问题
E. 不能用Expect sb. that，同D； to set错误，应该改为in setting
作者: vestofmmw 时间: 2022-9-30 23:04
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作者: vestofmmw 时间: 2022-9-30 23:15
# 揽瓜阁语法day5
Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, _doubling the increase of_ the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
B
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign— *using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced*_ the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
campaign 单数…that has，and also不简洁
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
B
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies’ common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, _to set dividends more conservatively than they were_
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
expect automakers,+ that… 不对，排除DE
A?B?
作者: lastchance2010 时间: 2022-9-30 23:24
感谢分享！
作者: lastchance2010 时间: 2022-9-30 23:51
Day5 DCC (计时做)（BCC 慢思考的时候选的B, 记时做得时候选得D, 花了很多时间，在B 和D 之间纠结，还是知识点不扎实) C (慢思考得时候选E, 还是要注意语义，记时间做的时候太注重语法了， 没考虑语义)C
作者: T7willG700 时间: 2022-10-1 00:19
⚠️：
1. 解释都来自Ron
2. 我只搬运了我不懂的地方，如果你觉得有用but没有解决你不懂的地方，比如为什么that错
指路：https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/the-number-of-people-flying-first-t5600-60.html
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
why twice as many as ❌
1. as many as 和 increase【uncountable】incompatible
if you say "twice as many", then this construction should be paired with a countable noun.
e.g., twice as many dogs --> "dogs" is a countable noun
if you said "twice as much", then this construction should be paired with an uncountable noun.
e.g., twice as much water --> "water" is an uncountable noun
if the noun in question is already an explicitly numerical quantity, then you should use neither "much" nor "many". instead, you should just use "twice" or "double" by itself.
e.g., twice the increase --> "increase" is an explicitly numerical quantity
these rules are followed pretty closely.
so, for instance:
twice as much water --> correct, since "water" is an uncountable noun (but is not an explicitly numerical quantity)
twice the water... --> incorrect, since water is not a numerical quantity
twice as much as the increase... --> incorrect; redundant
twice the increase... --> correct
2. twice as many as should be used as appositive
because that's an appositive modifier.
appositives must modify some noun that comes IMMEDIATELY before the comma【该点存疑，但是appositive必须modify noun是没错的】
if you're going to say COMMA + "twice as many as...", then that's incorrect unless there's actually a quantity in front of the comma.
e.g.
last year i read 40 books, twice as many as i read in the preceding year
--> correct
last year the number of books i read increased dramatically, twice as many as i read in the preceding year
--> incorrect
by contrast, the -ING FOLLOWED BY A COMMA modifies the entire action of the preceding clause. this is exactly what you want to happen, because the actual rising of the # of people flying first class is what "doubled the increase of...". there's no noun in there that pinpoints this concept, so you have to use a modifier that modifies the entire clause.
为什么说存疑？
usage of同位语appositive modifier
1. "COMMA + ABSTRACT NOUN" can be used to refer back to the WHOLE IDEA of the preceding clause
2. "COMMA + CONCRETE NOUN" is normally used to refer to the preceding noun (much like "which").
3. "COMMA + CONCRETE NOUN" 还可以指代前面句子中的embedded concrete noun
⚠️an example of APPOSITIVE using embedded CONCRETE noun
A group of paleontologists recently announced that a site in Utah has yielded fossils of some of the biggest armoured dinosaurs ever found, fossils that are at least 25 million years older than those of any similar dinosaur type found in North America. (appositive)
increase in V.S. increase of
"the increase in X" means that X itself has increased. therefore, "the increase in the previous year" doesn't make sense, because the implication would be that the previous year itself had increased (what would that possibly mean?).
"the increase of TIME PERIOD", by contrast, means exactly what it should mean in this particular instance.
作者: T7willG700 时间: 2022-10-1 00:20
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
1. A, B, and C 排除 AD
2. E which, which modify immediately preceding noun, sounds like campaign itself use website 应该是industry use.. 根据以下Ron的分析，我排除E的原因不对，就是campaign itself use website not industry $%$¥*@@&……'
3. B，C抉择，错选C
why C ❌
the problem with (c) is NOT grammatical; the grammar of (c) is just fine.
the problem with (c) is that it uses two different transitions incorrectly.
1. if you say "subject + clause + BY VERBing",
then "by VERBing" must explain HOW the main clause occurred.
e.g.
i prepared for the test by reviewing takeaways on the MGMAT forums.
note that the boldface clause describes HOW i prepared for the test.
choice (c) means that using websites, etc. was how the industry organized the campaign -- in other words, they used the websites and public meetings to organize the campaign in the first place. that's an incorrect meaning.
(the campaign ITSELF used these things; the correct modifier in (a) and (b) shows that relationship.)
* if you say "subject + clause + IN VERBing", then subject + clause must be an ACTUAL PART of the action of VERBing.
e.g.
i solved all the problems in OG12 in preparing for the GMAT.
--> notice that solving the problems IS ACTUALLY PART OF preparing for the test.
choice (c) fails here, too, since organizing the campaign (the main clause) is not ACTUALLY PART OF convincing the government
有人问出我想问的问题
Q: I think the action of organizing the campaign is part of action of convincing the government. It sounds like, in order to convince the government, the industry organize the campaign.
Ron:
note your (correct) use of "in order to"——a phrase that implies that something was done to enable something else to be done subsequently.
in other words, if "in order to ___" means something, then "in ___ing" will mean something totally different (and vice versa). given a specific intended meaning, they're mutually exclusive.
most commonly, one of the two will be nonsense. if both are sensible, their meanings will be substantially different.
- 例1
I began to telecommute【远程办公】 in order to take care of my aging father.
(makes sense)
*I began to telecommute in taking care of my aging father.
(nonsense——telecommuting is not a part of caring for elders)
- 例2
I learned a great deal about human adrenergic receptors in order to study the chemistry and effects of drug X.
(makes sense, if the intended meaning is "to prepare for my studies of drug x, i learned a bunch of stuff about those receptors")
I learned a great deal about human adrenergic receptors in studying the chemistry and effects of drug X.
(also makes sense, but with a different meaning: "during my studies, i learned lots of new things about adrenergic receptors")
错因：恶心死人的meaning 判断
如果到这里还没懂，good news：你不会考场上遇到同样的meaning split
把以上捋一下，捋清楚的takeaway带走，实在判断不出来到底是industry还是campaign use those fking stuffs，你管他呢，时间留给其他题目不香吗
作者: T7willG700 时间: 2022-10-1 00:26
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
作者: 黑框旻 时间: 2022-10-1 19:03
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作者: 你板凳倒了 时间: 2022-10-2 13:20
同意！
作者: 你板凳倒了 时间: 2022-10-2 13:43
A
C。正确答案是B。C中in convincing不作定语作状语，改变原文含义【额虽然我就是这么想的】
B。正确答案是C。B中than前面没有be动词！！！不要自己脑补一个出来！！
作者: 700啊700 时间: 2022-10-2 14:46
E (A)BC
181
twice as many as是同位语修饰，要紧跟在所修饰对象后面
many 用法错误 因为the increase不是 可数的
作者: G_ellen 时间: 2022-10-2 16:32
同意！
作者: G_ellen 时间: 2022-10-2 16:46
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in (that of the increase?)
C.double as much as the increase of（as much as …和double 这里double做形容词？两倍的？）
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
D
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced（主谓不一）
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
C
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been（没有使用完成时的条件？）
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends（they指代不清 并且expect sb. to do）
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends（they指代不清 并且expect sb. to do）
作者: Jimii 时间: 2022-10-2 20:02
Mark一下！
作者: Jimii 时间: 2022-10-2 20:37
1.D(错选）正确——A
首先，doubling用法是对的，伴随状语修饰前面的rose，表示上涨的同时翻倍了。其次DE的 as many as只能修饰the numbers，与句子意思（增加翻倍）不符。
2.B
do sth in doing sth，前者必须是完成后者的手段
3.C
情态动词搭配、expect 的用法
作者: Shell_liang 时间: 2022-10-3 10:50
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作者: Shell_liang 时间: 2022-10-3 11:43
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作者: slowdiving 时间: 2022-10-3 23:05
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作者: wannatechan 时间: 2022-10-7 16:33
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作者: wannatechan 时间: 2022-10-7 17:52
Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
答案：A
首先理解句意，是1990年的increase和the previous year的increase比较
B：that无指代, the increase in,在...方面的增长
C：double后面不能跟as much as
DE：the number和increase比较不对等
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
答案B
A:主谓一致，has
C:in convincing为状语，不修饰campaign，而修饰organized
D: as well as是修饰，use of Web sites, public meetings之间缺连词
E：错误同C
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
答案：C:
①expect sb to do或者expect that②set和be不平行
作者: 芝麻芋圆 时间: 2022-10-8 22:22
Mark一下！
作者: 芝麻芋圆 时间: 2022-10-8 22:51
A
B has convinces修饰campaign
C that排除DE，AB前后主被动不一致排除
作者: tansy0928 时间: 2022-10-9 15:17
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
答案：E，people是可数名词，所以应该是many ×
正确答案：A 2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
B
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
D ×
正确答案：C
作者: 鸡麦特焖焖 时间: 2022-10-16 23:27
Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
答案：A
B that指代有问题
C 动词没有and连接
DE many+可数名词
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
答案：B
A主谓一致错
CE in doing表示在什么过程中 句意不对
C句意 dash间应该是具体内容 而不是方式
D 同上
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
答案：C
AB 前面只有set没有be动词 were/have been没法省略
DE 没有expect sb that
作者: 小张的诗 时间: 2022-10-23 09:11
ABA（错误）
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were【不应该使用were，应该使用did】
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been【have been错误】
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends【正确】
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends【expect that错误】
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends【expect that错误】
作者: 野生小刘 时间: 2022-11-4 08:41
补卡
作者: 肥宅二号 时间: 2022-11-24 00:44
Day5
1. 错选 D 考点 固定搭配 比较（量词）精翻一下句子：在国内班机中乘坐头等舱的人数在1990年明显上升，是前一年上升人数的两倍 注意这里是说前一年上升人数的两倍
补充关于doubling的用法问题（还是对固定搭配不熟练）：double是"make twice as great"的意思
这里，doubling the increase of the previous year是doing结构引导的伴随状语，表结果！！！可以这么用
B that of指代Number没有任何必要
C 用double as much as the increase of是同位语结构，这里只能修饰1990 因此错误
D twice as many as，在这里many只能修饰可数名词，而increase是不可数名词，修饰错误，同位语使用错误同C; increase in previous year 永远是错的，只能用increase of
E many同D
2. B 考点平行 破折号的用法 修饰
A的also导致三个元素不平行，另外have convinced和主语organic food industry不匹配，排掉
C和E in convincing 改变句子重心 句意变为为了劝导，他们组织了什么活动
D as well as 表次级重点 这里需要三个元素平行 排除
3. 错选B 考点修饰 时态
that引导的从句使用时错误的 补充一下用法，这里是固定搭配：expect sb. that是错误的，只能用expect that或expect sb. to do
A/B/C中，先排除were，这里未划线句子用的是have propelled，这里理应也是接一般完成时态（换句话说，原句就给了hint这句话有两层时间段），另外to do sth.这里本来就表预测，也不应该接引过去式
C这里有固定结构搭配：be+adj+in doing something
B的错误点在于比较结构的不平行，to set和have been是不平行的，应该用to set和have set
作者: CHENOlivia 时间: 2022-11-29 15:01
我的答案：ABC
1.
B that没有必要
C 不对
D E 不可数不能用many
2.
campaign做主语谓语动词是单数，排除A
In convincing不对，排除C E
D 平行and
3.
A B set 动词和be不能比较，排除
D E 不符合expect 的用法
作者: Ranyo 时间: 2022-12-2 03:59
1.
B* 因为觉得as much as和as many as都冗余，然后直觉应该有that。
但是答案是A！A没有任何毛病，B的that of the increase in不对，不知道在说啥。A没有任何问题。double可以做动词。
2.
B*
A的that have convinced不对，应该是that has convinced。
C的by using赘余。
D的as well as不对，by the use of赘余。E的which不对，不是campaign使用了这些，而是industry使用了这些。
Ron说，in convincing也不对。如果要使用subject+clause+in doing这种结构，subject+clause必须是in doing的实际一部分。
E.g.,
i solved all the problems in OG12 in preparing for the GMAT.
--> notice that solving the problems IS ACTUALLY PART OF preparing for the test.
在本题目中，举办这个活动并非说服DA的一部分，而是举办这个活动说服了DA。
（逻辑好绕啊～）
3.
C* expect sb. to do. 预计某人要做某事。
expect that不可以拆分后that放在句首，中间也不可以加入automakers，仅仅应该是“expect that”，中间啥也不加。排除DE。
A的were不对，应该是did。B也应该是have done或者did，而不是have been。
（不确定该是did还是have done，反正be肯定不对就是了）排除AB，选C。
作者: 小米儿Holand 时间: 2022-12-21 06:39
A B C
作者: Fox的Dream 时间: 2023-1-6 21:11
Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in
E.twice as many as the increase of
2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
作者: Turv_vc 时间: 2023-8-8 10:29
1. 选择A
D，E 有些赘余没有必要表达成as as结构
C 动词形式不正确
B That 指代不明
2. 两个破折号中间所代表的插入语不需要结构的改变，AB中选
从句的主语a campaign ，从句中使用三单 选B
3. 和从句的时态保持一致，所以选择现在完成时去进行过去行为的阐述
然后than 后面就句子的形式存在问题选择C
作者: Mrllb 时间: 2023-10-4 09:51
1.D number是可数的，要用many，in和前面的in1980平行
2.B also很多余，另外，that的先行词是单数的campaign。这里是插入语，用doing表示伴随是最好的，简洁且语法没问题
3.B expect to do sth，另外than they were不平行，得是they do
作者: didibaba11 时间: 2023-10-31 17:20
181 A
B 选项that of...冗余; C number 可数；D,E as many as 后面应该接数字？（待会儿看一下别人的解释）
182 B
先把破折号里面的内容忽略看一下主句的句意：organic food industry组织了一场成功的战役（翻译比较生硬，能理解就行），说明他们已经做成了... C,E 选项的 inconvincing不优；主谓一致排除A；时态一致排除D；
183 C
A,B选项都很奇怪，than they have done？expect sb. to do sth.应该，except... that 表达有误，排除D,E（1552532）
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