Some people agree that the best way to become successful in life is to get the university education, others disagree with it and reckon that nowadays it is no longer be true.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
难度:★★★☆☆
话题:教育类
分话题:大学教育和成功之间的关系
题型范围:高频话题
这次话题是我们大陆地区的新题,但是在其他地区已经出现过,是2019.1.19亚太地区原题:
Some people argue that the best way to have a successful life is to attend college, but other people do not think so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
并且和去年2021.2.25的中国大陆考题很相似:
Some people believe that educational qualifications will always bring success in life. Other people say that educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
所以,从整体难度上来看并不是特别复杂,唯一需要注意的是题目中有绝对词the best way,再写作的时候要注意让步。接下来把这道题目的思路给大家稍微写一下,有需要练习的同学可以尝试通过我的解析和展开进行训练。
文章分段:折中四段式写法(Introduction - Some people - Other people - Conclusion)
接下来给大家进行练习,一部分用英文形式,一部分用中文。这样不同能力的同学都可以尝试自己练习。
开头段
(1) 背景引入: A way to embrace success in life differs when people start making choices. (2) 改写观点:While some claim that to receive education in university has been regarded as the most important parameter for a successful life, others believe that _______________________________________________________. (3)进一步展开(可选择不写):很多种方式都可以带来成功,这要取决于人们对于成功的定义。
中间1段
(1)给出一方的理由1:On the one hand, the primary reason why successful people lie in university education the most is what they have learned contributes greatly to improving their competitiveness in the future job markets.(2)解释展开理由1:That is because university education, as a standard parameter, will play an indispensable role to assess the extent of knowledge and skills of a candidate in a more precise way.(3)递进解释1:换句话说,现在很多的job-renders/ employers把大学毕业作为他们筛选员工的最低门槛和要求(require graduation as its minimum qualification);学历上的优势也是证明他们是否能够胜任自己所从事的工作的最好方式.(4)给出一方的理由2:此外,大学教育也可以帮助学生自我实现(self-achievement and fulfillment).(5)解释展开理由2:大学给学生提供很多机会和平台去接受最新的教育资源和专业知识技能,让他们在学习过程中可以有很好的试错机会(many chances to face both success and failure).(6)递进解释2:大学会用相对正确的方式引导学生尝试各种项目,给他们提供学术上的帮助和支持.(7)对比论证:然而,那些没有上过大学的人可能要通过靠自己不同的尝试才可能获得成就。
(1)反驳转折到另外一边:However, on the other hand, the vast majority of people disagree with the importance of university education which people wanting to be successful have to receive. (2)转折解是:现在,有很多大学毕业生的生活并不尽人意(less than satisfactory),他们中的一些人仍然在这个竞争的社会生活的很痛苦(feel struggled under this fierce society).(3)给出另外一方理由1:首先,大学所教授的内容没有,切不实用(useless and unpractical).(4)解释展开理由1:大学的很多知识都太学术(too academic and theoretical), 学生没有很多的机会可以在工作之前去应用这些能力.(5)给出另外一方理由2:Besides, a range of factors can contribute to success rather than receiving education from university. (6)解释展开理由2:很多成功的人并没有上过大学,他们依靠hard work, perseverance, inborn talents, intelligence, external support, motivation and luck(这个部分同学们可以自己选择写哪些).(7)举例论证:比尔盖茨、扎克伯格、富二代们等都可以作为例子。
结尾段
(1)最后总结:我觉得,任何方法其实都不能保证让一个人成功.(2)解释展开:大学不一定就是最好的方法,人们应该要根据自己的情况和背景来去思考如何能让自己变得更突出和优秀(outstanding and prominent).(3)进一步解释:当然,对于很多普通人来说,上大学的确是改变自身的方式之一,这点是毋庸置疑的。