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作者: ponyo337 时间: 2020-10-11 10:33
标题: GWD-17-Q29 求助

GWD-17-Q29

Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities.

A. and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing

B. and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing

C. as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing

D. and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized

E. but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of

我选的C，觉得as well as也是parallel tag，然后the eloquence...和前面its firsthand accounts...平行，请问哪里不对呢？

另外，D选项的which没有歧义吗？到底是指代passion还是eloquence and passion呢？

求NN帮忙解答，谢谢啦。

作者: 长丝弓 时间: 2020-10-11 23:45
关于此题，GMATLA的大神是这样分析的：选项分析：

A选项：本题的意思是：一个书在两方面是史无前例的，一个是在它是第一份手稿上，一个是在它是一种雄心和激情这方面上。因此，两者应该保证在语法上的对等。应将原因状语从句because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities改为和in its first hand accounts平行的in the eloquence and passion。

B选项：本选项错误同选项A。in that没有问题，表示原因，和because基本意思相同。

C选项：as well as是副词而不是连词，因此其不能连接并列的两个对象，必须改为and。

D选项：Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。

E选项：整个选项的核心词和其它选项均不相同。本选项中的eloquent和passionate均是形容词，此两者是exposure和criticism的定语。在逻辑上，这本书史无前例的地方应该是“雄辩和激情”，不应该仅仅是一种曝光（曝光对女性的歧视这件事肯定早有过，不能说这本书就是因此而史无前例的）。另外，本选项在措辞方面有问题，“是第一份手稿”和“是曝光及批判”这两者之间没有转折的关系，应把but改为and。

作者: ponyo337 时间: 2020-10-12 21:23

长丝弓发表于 2020-10-11 23:45
关于此题，GMATLA的大神是这样分析的：选项分析：

A选项：本题的意思是：一个书在两方面是史无前例的，一 ...

谢谢啦

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