Even though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the fifteen recordings she made were disappointing artistically as well as technically, Olive Fremstad (1871-1951) has never been entirely forgotten by opera aficionados.
A
though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the fifteen recordings she made were
B
though her career was cut short while in her prime, with the fifteen recordings she made
C
as her career had been cut short when she was in her prime, with the fifteen recordings she had made
D
with her career having been cut short when she was in her prime, and the fifteen recordings she made were
E
with her career cut short while in her prime, and that the fifteen recordings she made were
i.e., if the sentence consists of nothing other than two independent clauses connected by "and", then you are almost certain to see a comma between those clauses -- because, in that case, the presence of the comma helps to elucidate the structure of the sentence.
on the other hand, if the structure of the sentence is actually
EVEN THOUGH (clause1 AND clause2), (clause3)
... then the lack of a comma between "clause1" and "clause2" actually renders the overall structure of the sentence much clearer.
so, in short, yes, you're right about this.作者: Chenshihui 时间: 2019-12-27 04:23