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作者: 写作老师Tim 时间: 2019-1-22 10:46
标题: <写作干货分享>带你上综合写作的岸！干货送给大家！拿去直接背！！

筒子们，最近有很多学生私信我，要求我讲一下综合写作。应大家要求，今天发表一篇关于综合写作的文章，希望对大家有用处哦，有需要可以戳我，报TIM老师的课细细学习哦。

要想写好综合写作，得高分，首先得知道，综合写作的占分。综合写作占分1/3，虽然不多，可也是咱们打高分的利器。在这里，老师就不介绍基本的东西啦，直接带大家进入正题喽！！：写好综合写作需要童鞋们需要注意以下几点，总结好了七点以及模版和词汇总结给大家，快保存起来哦。

Firstly，时态要用对。passage和lecture里面表示作者说一类含义，统统用一般现在时。

Secondly，文章整体结构要完整并符合要求。前面要有总起的introductory sentence，该句的主要是概括reading和lecture有观点冲突。

举个栗子：The reading passage’s author is convinced there were several reasons why the rise of factories occurred in England, yet the professor disagrees that they were the main reason why factories became successful

Thirdly，中间的正文展开要按照lecture的顺序，一点一点逐一与reading对应地展开。to begin with, in addition, as a final point, to conclude

第一，先说reading的观点，再说原因；然后是转折，说lecture的观点，并说原因。第二，最后的结尾可要可不要。第三，开头和结尾段首尾呼应比如disagree ，后面有refutation，第四，段内一方有多个理由或者观点需要展开时，要有逻辑，比如在claim/declare 等词前面加上 first/next/also等。

Fourthly，主要语言的丰富性，同一种意思用多种不同的表达方式，并且，老师提醒大家，千万不要照抄原文哦！

举个栗子：the rise of factories began = the rise of factories occurred

spread throughout the world = became successful

those without any land = landless people

have the ability to do sth. = have the capability to do sth.

= be able to do sth.

Fifthly，表示认为的词哦：the author claims/believes/notes / argues /points out /states/insists/mentions/asserts/maintains/declares/ is convinced that或者the point brought up

Sixthly，表示lecturer反对的用法：

the lecturer counters by insisting that …… = the lecturer counters the points made by the reading, whose author thinks that ……=the lecturer disagrees and claims that= To argue against the reading’s assertion that ……= in contrast to the reading’s argument that ……, the professor says= to respond to the reading’s claim that…， the professor says …，on the contrary = in contrast

Seventhly，一些比较好的用法：

（1）lay the foundation of

（2） the prevalence of sth.

（3） ascribe to 归因于

（4） enable 使得（比make要地道些）

最后一步，模版来啦！！！TIM老师告诉大家，独立写作绝对不能用模版，综合写作绝对不能不用模版！tell you the truth，综合写作无非是写相反的一种关系，儿表达相反的表达的确有限。只要我们把我们所认为的好的表达在一起，结构都是相似的，考试直接用模版当结构，里子自己套哦！以下是老师精心整理的模版，希望对大家有用！！！

While the reading asserts that ______________________,the lecturer provides evidence/reasons contrary to this assertion and believes____________________. First, in response to the accusation that________________ since_____________, the lecturer says that_____________________. She/He believes that _____________________. The reading also points out that_______________, However, lecturer disagrees and first states that_______________. He next declares that_________________. Finally, according to the reading _______________. On the contrary, the lecturer is convinced that ___________________. Also he believes that __________________.

最后，老师给大家总结一下常用的逻辑关系词组，大家快快收藏呀！！！：

明显的否定关系词汇：

no, not, none, nor, neither, never, deny

隐含的否定关系特色词汇：

fail to , lack (of), absent from, refuse, ignore, remove, few, little

明显的因果关系特色词汇：

因为：because, because of, since, for ,as, due to ,owing to, in that,

所以：so, so that, therefore, thereby, hence, thus, as a result, consequently

隐含的因果关系词汇：

导致：cause, lead to, result in, give rise to, produce, render, engender, make, enable, support, stimulate, spark, spur, motivate, push, encourage, prompt, be responsible for,

由…而来：

come from, result from, originate from, initiate from, derive from, stem from, be attributed to, be responsible to

反映，体现：

reflect，represent，demonstrate, suggest, imply, show, epitomize

考虑到，依赖于:

given, considering, in view of, on account of, according to, rely, depend on, resort to, thanks to

表示变化：

increase/decrease/decline/

enlarge/swell/expand/widen/inflate/magnify/broaden

shrink/reduce/deflate/narrow/diminish

create/destroy

develop/improve/meliorate/ameliorate/progress/perfect/better

degrade/debase/impair/worsen/deteriorate

continue/remain

差异：

same/different

超越：

exceed/better/cap/beyond/surpass/transcend/excel/overshadow

否定+比较=最高级：

few islands are more remote than these

程度较深的词：

surprising/amazing/extremely/beautiful[惊艳的]

superior= greater/higher/better

inferior =subordinate/secondary/lower/worse/lesser

作者: 大大龟 时间: 2019-1-25 09:52
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