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标题: 请问一下这段话有没有语法问题 [打印本页]

作者: 我要考600 时间: 2019-1-4 19:31
标题: 请问一下这段话有没有语法问题
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请问各位g友大佬，这段话是否有语法错误呢？如果有，请帮忙指出

Finally, from a realistic point of view, more and more currencies are constantly emerging, many of which are not concerned by us. They have neither value nor any trading volume. There are more and more air currencies. Frequent accidents occur on exchanges. Many people in the currency circle are panic-stricken

作者: Sarakael 时间: 2019-1-4 21:12
从作文角度来说可能需要重新组织语言吧。句式太简单，翻译味比较重。一眼扫上去没有明显语法问题，但是并不是好文章。

作者: 老白在费城 时间: 2019-1-4 22:13
没有语法错误，但是有很多不必要的redundancy，比如more and more。

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