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标题: ai068,我又来了,帮忙看看阿~觉得没进步啊 [打印本页]

作者: jadylee    时间: 2005-9-8 22:42
标题: ai068,我又来了,帮忙看看阿~觉得没进步啊

这次的ISSUE终于在规定时间内完成了~可是写完才发现挺空洞无物的,外加拼错无数单词,真的好难找到例子阿,我觉得我通篇都没用到,怎么办啊?


68. “Since the physical work environment affects employee productivity and morale, the employees themselves should have the right to decide how their workplace is designed.”


Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.



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Dose physical work environment affects employee productivity and who should assume the responsibility of designing the workplace for a business have became a hot topic recently thus raise substantive debates over it. However, as complicated and controversial this issue is, there is no universal answer to it. As for me, I partly agree with the author’s opinion. The following discussion can substantiate my view.


As far as we know, it is generally acknowledged that human beings are the products of a society and always under the spell of the environment, no matter it is nature environment or human environment. Thus, the presenting of working environment indispensably affects our behavior in work place. For example, yellow enhances appetite, blue has a tranquilizing effect, gray is the favorite color of the companies who want to have obedient employees.


However, a fittest workplace environment doesn't necessarily means it requires to be designed by employees themselves. The primary job of a employee is to work assiduously thus best maximize his productivity not waste time on thinking about how to design a more comfortable office for himself. Spend too much time on considering the decoration or permutation of work place will alleviate his attention thus undermine efficiency.


Additionally, a majority of employees don't know what they truly need is, they may have a vague concept of what kind of workplace should be but without concrete specification. Most common employee don't have the professional knowledge of design a scientific feasible workplace which is a compound constituted by both nature factors such as light, airflow and human factors such communication and privacy. So the fittest person to design the work place is still the professional who has lots of background knowledge and experience in interior decoration. By first analyzing the company’s structure and culture and then adding some aesthetic merits into the design most professional designer can satisfy the employees’ need.


Admittedly, in designing the workplace the employees' opinion must be listened and carefully considered for ultimately this will be the environment they have to face every day and comfortable working environment can considerable boost the moral thus improve the productivities.


To conclude, though this issue is complex as it stands, the above aforementioned discussion has walked the first step out of the dilemma. While the importance of a good working environment is undeniable the design job should be still be shouldered by those professionals, only their professional knowledge plus valuable advises of employees can the work place be designed to satisfy most people.





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作者: 夜语    时间: 2005-9-9 01:26

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=26&ID=115541&replyID=&skin=0


http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=26&ID=75895&replyID=&skin=0


lz怎么没贴题目~这样人家怎么看??


作者: 天之角    时间: 2005-9-9 12:38
字数也是我最头疼的问题,关于举例,其实lz可以举身边的例子,实在不行可以编,只要编的不要太假即可。(个人浅见),另外lz要注意连接词的使用,e-rater很重视这个的。
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