标题: 求助帖~曼哈顿语法chapter5-02 [打印本页] 作者: cici_gmat 时间: 2017-10-6 01:10 标题: 求助帖~曼哈顿语法chapter5-02 两道关于paralleism的改错题:
1, Although we were sitting in the bleachers, the baseball game was as exciting to us as the people sitting behind home plate.
答案为:
Although we were sitting in the bleachers, the baseball game was as exciting to us as TO the people sitting behind home plate.
2, Tobacco companies, shaken by a string of legal setbacks in the United States, but which retain strong growth prospects in the developing world, face an uncertain future.
答案为:
Tobacco companies, which have been shaken by a string of legal setbacks in the United States, but which retain strong growth prospects in the developing world, face an uncertain future.
QUESTION:
我是否可以改为:obacco companies, shaken by a string of legal setbacks in the United States, but is retaining strong growth prospects in the developing world, face an uncertain future. 还有就是是否but前面的逗号要删除? 作者: cici_gmat 时间: 2017-10-12 03:59