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标题: 不懂就问。T-3-Q38，到底谁和谁并列 [打印本页]

作者: Z-Joey 时间: 2017-10-1 17:09
标题: 不懂就问。T-3-Q38，到底谁和谁并列
题目如下：T-3-Q38.

The normative model of strategicdecision-making suggests that executives examine a firm’s external environmentand internal conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria theyderive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

A. conditions, and in usingthe set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide

B. conditions, and they usethe set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding

C. conditions, and, in usingthe set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, deciding

D. conditions and, using theset of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide

E. conditions, and in theiruse the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, decide

我的选择是B，正确答案是D。

首先B选项没有语法错误吧，B选项并列的是 executives examine…… ,and they use……，这个难道是they不对了，指代不明？也不是吧，但是从并列的角度讲，我觉得两个句子没毛病呀，或者是因为句意上，重点搞错啦？

D选项可以理解，examine……和decide……是并列的，但是相比下，B到底差在了哪里？

求助！感谢！

作者: Z-Joey 时间: 2017-10-1 17:10
自己up一下！

作者: Z-Joey 时间: 2017-10-1 17:19
诶，我我我自己好像有点知道了。。。。但还是欢迎大家指正哈，给我点信息。
B错在，可以那样子并列，但是两个句子主语是一样的，并列的话，they要省略掉才好。

作者: zoe爱猕猴桃 时间: 2017-10-2 16:55
首先是A的重心是在can decide上面，没有语法错误，一般不会改变原句重心。

另外B的in deciding 没有办法解释把。方式？to decide更好。而且comma+and 后面要跟完整的句子they不应该省略，如果省略they，comma也要去掉

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