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作者: autist11    时间: 2005-9-1 10:34
标题: gwd28-24
28-24: Until the passage of the Piracy and Counterfeiting Amendments Act in 1982, a first-time charge of copyright infringement was merely a misdemeanor charge, federal prosecutors being unlikely in pursuing criminal copyright infringers, while offenders were subject to relatively small penalties.


A: charge, federal prosecutors being unlikely in pursuing criminal copyright infringers, while offenders were


B: charge, with federal prosecutors who were unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers, offenders being


C: charge, federal prosecutors unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers, while offenders were


D: charge; therefore, federal prosecutors were unlikely in pursuing criminal copyright infringers and offenders being


E: charge; therefore, federal prosecutors were unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers, and offenders were



我选了E,但总觉得C也对,大家都选了什么?


作者: howardwang    时间: 2005-9-1 10:59

only E.



作者: autist11    时间: 2005-9-1 11:16

what's wrong with C?  missing "were"?


作者: howardwang    时间: 2005-9-1 12:16

c的问题:


(1)在整个句子中,federal prosecutors unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers是什么成份?


(2)while在此作何解释?表对比转折还是什么呢?逻辑意思和词的位置都有问题。


作者: Youknowme    时间: 2005-10-15 21:19
同意E
作者: GMAT阿驴    时间: 2006-3-13 16:09
support E
作者: hwhhs    时间: 2006-7-6 11:08
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作者: mockingbird    时间: 2006-9-23 01:12

应该是C。从语法角度讲CE都是正确的。从逻辑意思上看C合理的多:在法案实施以前,违反版权法的罚款也是不过是轻描淡写,

C:原告不究而被告轻判。说明怎样的轻描淡写。

E:因此,原告不究而被告轻判。逻辑上并没有因果关系。


作者: wcfang    时间: 2006-11-26 15:31

原句:...charge, and federal prosecutors are unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers, while offenders were subject to relatively small penalties.

獨立主格: ...charge, federal prosecutors being unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers, while offenders were subject to relatively small penalties.

being省略: ...charge, federal prosecutors unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers, while offenders were subject to relatively small penalties.

在句意中,表示對比的連接詞應該用while or whereas (or but), 不用and...

因此,C比E好...


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作者: heshaohua666    时间: 2006-12-6 16:40
独立主格修饰句子表原因或伴随,这里行不通。
作者: heshaohua666    时间: 2006-12-13 00:22

Until the passage of the Piracy and Counterfeiting Amendments Act in 1982, a first-time charge of copyright infringement was merely a misdemeanor charge, federal prosecutors being unlikely in pursuing criminal copyright infringers, while offenders were subject to relatively small penalties.

 

  1. charge, federal prosecutors being unlikely in pursuing criminal copyright infringers, while offenders were

  2. charge, with federal prosecutors who were unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers, offenders being

  3. charge, federal prosecutors unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers, while offenders were[h1] 

  4. charge; therefore, federal prosecutors were unlikely in pursuing criminal copyright infringers and offenders being

  5. charge; therefore, federal prosecutors were unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers, and offenders were[h2] 


 [h1]独立主格做状语,修饰主句,行不通。

 [h2]Ok.

第一次指控以轻罪告终,导致后面一直都是原告不究,被告轻判。逻辑与普通法有关,判例法。


作者: xiangqinzh    时间: 2007-1-3 11:17
therefore 是副词,不能做连词用,在之前需要一个分号把2个句子分开.
作者: colorful_na    时间: 2007-7-14 18:39
UP
作者: wsdoll    时间: 2007-9-17 11:43
up
作者: michaelshl    时间: 2008-4-28 01:33
ai...楼上蜘蛛侠nn。。。就是读不懂啊
作者: lichabrend    时间: 2008-6-12 00:34
up
作者: aegean040    时间: 2008-6-23 15:15

怎么就不能理解为伴随结构呢?做主句的解释啊,我认为C的逻辑没有错。是不是做伴随结构中不能用从句?while...错了?


作者: AlienX    时间: 2008-6-23 15:27
如果是隨伴, 該用..., verb-ing...

作者: duducrystal    时间: 2009-5-17 12:11

还是米搞懂也。。哪位NN来个明确的说法。。


作者: 忽闪闪院长    时间: 2009-5-17 16:21

我本来选的是C。但是后来想了想,如果把federal prosecutors unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers理解成独立主格结构的话,那么while与它平行也必须是个独立主格结构,可是while后面明显是连接了一个句子……所以排除C……不知这样的解释对否?


作者: AlienX    时间: 2009-5-18 09:03
umm...我對C的看法有點不一樣
獨立主格是supplement的東東, 拿走不影響原意.
所以C的主要structure 是: a first-time charge of copyright infringement was merely a misdemeanor charge while offenders were subject to relatively small penalties.
邏輯不對.

作者: Norgar    时间: 2009-7-30 02:08
en
作者: sprins    时间: 2009-8-31 17:52
以下是引用mockingbird在2006/9/23 1:12:00的发言:

应该是C。从语法角度讲CE都是正确的。从逻辑意思上看C合理的多:在法案实施以前,违反版权法的罚款也是不过是轻描淡写,

C:原告不究而被告轻判。说明怎样的轻描淡写。

E:因此,原告不究而被告轻判。逻辑上并没有因果关系。

支持E

原句说知道1982才通过PCAA  句中其他的描述内容全都是发生在1982之前的状况 从未划线was和划线的were可以看出

这样的话  用therefore还是有一定道理的

“盗版是轻错 所以检察官不会别人违反判版权罪 而被告也只会要求教一小部分罚款”

如果是C的话 由于federal prosewcutors................这个结构中没有v.导致while无从修饰

正如AlienX版主所说while会去修饰未划线的部分


作者: zanyingsan    时间: 2009-12-9 21:56
a first-time charge of copyright infringement was merely a misdemeanor charge while offenders were subject to relatively small penalties.

关于这个,我不知道哪里逻辑不对了,while在这里不可以表示同时的意思么?
作者: a9141067s    时间: 2009-12-15 15:53
關於這一句的句意還是不大明白,可否請那位NN幫忙翻譯一下
作者: nancyyen    时间: 2009-12-15 16:37
到底选啥,大牛们快来~我自己觉得选E,主要觉得C中间的成分不清楚。。
作者: kingstorm666    时间: 2010-7-31 11:43
DING
作者: gmgmwll    时间: 2010-9-1 00:35
up!!
作者: 花子落落    时间: 2010-9-1 01:24
in C, the pattern " main clause, noun +adjective phrase or which clause" is used when noun refers to entire main clause. This is not logic. for example,

she is beautiful, a fact which I know----this is correct
作者: 花子落落    时间: 2010-9-1 01:28
in the case of parallelism:
if the sentence contains PARALLEL CONCEPTS -- i.e., concepts that describe the same sort of thing, in the same sort of way, at the same priority -- then those concepts should appear in parallel structures.
conversely, for concepts that are NOT parallel, you can't use parallelism as a process of elimination.

in this problem:
there are three historical statements:
1) a first-time charge of copyright infringement was merely a misdemeanor
2) federal prosecutors were unlikely to pursue infringers
3) offenders were subject to small penalties

note that, of these three statements, only #2 and #3 are PARALLEL CONCEPTS.
specifically, the first is an independent historical statement, while #2 and #3 are both CONSEQUENCES of that statement (consequences that are presented with equal priority).

therefore, the sentence should be written in a way such that #2 and #3 are parallel.

C明显不parallel
作者: laipipi    时间: 2010-11-27 15:37
Ding
作者: 赵小婕    时间: 2010-12-17 15:27
10楼正解
作者: pizzahutgg    时间: 2011-4-1 16:09
按平行和意思来判断的确是这样的


但是E里面多了个therefore,新加进了一个强烈的因果关系,不太敢选了。。。
作者: whenusmile    时间: 2011-11-10 19:36
C哪对了???明明就是run on sentence啊,两个句子之间没有连词。。
作者: 羊驼月月在奋斗    时间: 2014-10-14 11:47
赞同C存在两点错误:
1:unlikely to purse criminal copyright infringers 和 offenders were subject to relatively small penalties 在逻辑上是顺次的,没有转折关系,所以while用在这里不对。
2:如果把federal prosecutors unlikely to pursue criminal copyright infringers理解成为独立主格结构伴随主句,那么while后面的内容也应该一起做独立主格伴随主句,而从语法上来看,while从句似乎构成了和主句之间的转折并列,不符合语义。
最开始没有选E是因为不理解therefore在这里的作用,后来在语义上想了下,其实是可以说得通的,是因为a first-time charge of copyright infringement was merely a misdemeanor charge这样一种状况,才会有一下的行为 federal prosecutors being unlikely in pursuing criminal copyright infringers, while offenders were subject to relatively small penalties,构成了一种逻辑上的因果。
还请NN指正呢~




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