9: As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) who was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.
A: As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was
B: As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of earned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time, and having been
C: Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), and he was
D: Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time, and was
E: Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was, among the musicians of his time, one of the most gifted and versatile, had been
i would not choose A and C, bcoz "his time" is placed before the subject "Camille Saint-Saens ". it is ridiculous.
B is neglected for "having been".
but for the appositive, the article "A" is reqiured.
不好意思，是我敲错了，我是在A和D之间徘徊，我选的也是D，但是D的同位语是不是应该有个不定冠词"a"。
请允许我修改了我提问。
请NN们继续指点啊！！
我觉得显然是D.
在类似D中的同位语之前，刚好不需要冠词a；没记错的话，用了a将是错误选项。
我觉得是A
D: Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time, and was
D中的and之后是不是应该是个完整的句子? 还请NN指点
同问，D中的逗号“，+and was"是不是多余？
D, and was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.
as many of his contemporaries were,插入语
我觉得是E,D有明显的错误，and is和主句同用一个主语，但是却用逗号隔开，这样的用法在gmat语法中是不对的。E没什么语法错误，除了改变了原句的意思。不过如果没有逗号，那么我认为应该选D,我想很有可能是题目有误。我想请问nn,两句句子公用一个主语and前是不是不能加逗号？
Hummm, where can I download GWD31?
那个NN给解释一下，我选的是A，因为看不出硬伤，但是读起来不是很顺
但是D把从句改成了并列谓语，and was前面的逗号，以及前面的冠词我觉得都是硬伤
肯定是D
A：As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects,among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was 主语在哪里？？？
应该是As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects，人+。。。。。。。
才是正确的
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As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among
The most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921)
Who was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.
1) As a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects.
Among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-
Saens (1835-1921),who was
2) As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of earned subjects,
Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile
Musicians of his time. and having been
Having be错
3) pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among
the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens
(1835-1921), and he was
原句(a选项中)后半句是从句who was而c中变为并列and he was这种改变并列或者从属关系的是改变原意的
4) Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille
Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile
Musicians of his time. and was
主语Camille Saint-Saens was among(系表结构) and was interested(系表结构)只用一个be即可
5) pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille
Saint-Saens (1835-1921) ,who was , among the Musicians of his time. one of the
Most gifted and versatile, had been
Had been改变原句时态,而且用过去完成时态不符合句意,改句表达的是这个人的一种状态,句中没有任何提示说这个人的兴趣在过去某一时点停止.
我支持选a
a看不出明显错误,但却是也别扭
同位语,among....,主语
a
and was后面就是一个完整的句子啊？and was deeply interested in Oriental themes.
觉得这道题应该选D，“，+and was"并不多余，一方面因为“was”与as many of his contemporaries “were”平行, 还有一方面，如果没有，后面deeply...就不完整，也不知道修饰谁了。and前面有逗号，因为主语之后的第一个谓语是was + 介词among结构，第二个谓语不是was + 介词结构了，而是一个was+ 形容词interested 构成的完整的系表结构中间加一个插入语，用逗号 + and was分开清楚明了。忘了好像在那个讨论贴里看见过说如果and前后两个动作的主语没有改变就不用逗号，但我看好多都是主语不变，and之前都有逗号，不过比较明显的特征是后面通常都有个插入语，我也不太说得清道理，只看到这种现象了。
A经过倒装之后，反而使句子的主语C S-S距离介词as+名词这个修饰成分太远了，按照OG中的说法，主语最好应当同时兼顾修饰成分和谓语。不知道说得对不对？
Camille SaintSaens (1835-1921) who was , (as many of his contemporaries were), deeply interested in Oriental themes, was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time as a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects.
好像没有错的阿
D, and链接的两个短句的意思好像不是很对称
肯定是D
A：As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects,among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was 主语在哪里？？？
Camille Saint-Saens 应该就是主语,倒装了一下~
我选D，但对于这个同位语前为什么不加冠词还是很不明白，求解。。。
把这题顶出来，我的问题是d选项中，
“，”and was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply...
还是 ，and was as many of his contemporaries were, deeply
完全晕了，到底and was后面的逗号在不在正确的句子里
我挺你,我也觉得是A,倒装,多精妙啊
21套我也错了6题,搞得我很莫名...很少会错这么多
9. GWD31-Q9
As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921) who was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.
A. As a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was
我认为选项A的问题不是在倒装错了，错误点有2个，第1个是不定冠词”a”，这边很明显C这个人的身份有4种，所以加了”a”是很怪异的，第2点我认为后面的”deeply interested in Oriental themes”资讯并不比之前不重要，所以改成像D一样并列关系，反而是比较符合句意的！
B. As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of earned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile Musicians of his time and having been
C. Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921), and he was
D. Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time and was
E. Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was, among the musicians of his time, one of the most gifted and versatile, had been
对本题D选项有个疑问：D.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time and was 两个主句并列后句的be动词不是必需省略吗
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