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标题: 【求助大神】OG1588 [打印本页]

作者: Dreamout    时间: 2017-2-12 10:40
标题: 【求助大神】OG1588
(OG1588)Oftenvisible as smog, ozone is formed in the atmosphere from hydrocarbons andnitrogen oxides, two major pollutants emitted by automobiles, react withsunlight.

A ozone is formed in the atmosphere from

B ozone is formed in the atmosphere when

C ozone is formed in the atmosphere, and when

D ozone, formed in the atmosphere when

E ozone, formed in the atmosphere from



Grammaticalconstruction; Idiom

The preposition from is incorrect because ozoneis formed from x and y react is not agrammatical structure. Replacing fromwith the subordinating conjunction when makesthe sentence complete: Ozone is formedwhen x and y react. A main clause is followed by a subordinate clause.

B. The conjunction when introduces a subordinate clause, which completes the sentence correctly and coherently.

E. These changes result in a sentence fragment.

Question:
求问大神选项E,是不是就是句子太零碎化这一个错误而已?还有别的错误么?我个人感觉formed作为过去分词作伴随状语这个是正确的。


作者: 2174576514    时间: 2017-2-12 11:18
回答楼主的问题,formed不是动词,而是形容词...应该理解为come from (ozone comes from two pollute).... VERB-ED是很讨厌的,可以做动词或是形容词,这里是形容词

你说的对,E不是完整的句子,E的主语ozone没有动词....如果按照句子的结构来看,唯一可能成为ozone动词的动词是react...但react因指的是两种污染物(hydrocarbon and nitrogen oxides)
Often visible as smog,
    ozone,
        formed in the atmosphere from hydrocarbons and nitrogen oxides,
            two major pollutants emitted by automobiles,
        react with sunlight.

简化后: ozone, 简介【formed in the atmosphere...】,react with sunlight
作者: Dreamout    时间: 2017-2-12 12:10
2174576514 发表于 2017-2-12 11:18
回答楼主的问题,formed不是动词,而是形容词...应该理解为come from (ozone comes from two pollute)... ...

同意!               
作者: emmahiggins09    时间: 2017-2-13 05:52
E 选项是 SV agreement 的问题。 E 句子主语 Ozone 动词应该用单数 reacts 而不是 react


two major pollutatnts emiddted by automibile 是 hydrocarbons and nitrogen oxides 的同位语,所以是修饰可以直接略去不看,所以句子的主干是

ozone is formed in the atmosphere WHEN hydrocarbons and nitrogen oxides react with sunlight.
作者: Dreamout    时间: 2017-2-13 09:23
emmahiggins09 发表于 2017-2-13 05:52
E 选项是 SV agreement 的问题。 E 句子主语 Ozone 动词应该用单数 reacts 而不是 react

同意!               




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