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作者: howardwang 时间: 2005-8-24 13:10
标题: 大全213 认为答案有误，请讨论！

Clark and Florence , a husband-and wife medical team, worked steadily and efficiently through the night, but sipping their coffee the next morning, she noticed that he seemed disoriented.>>

B sipping their coffee the next morning, he seemed to be disoriented, she noticed>>

C as they sipped their coffee the next morning, she noticed that he seemed disoriented >>

D as they were sipping their coffee the next morning, he seemed, she noticed, disoriented>>

E he seemed disoriented she noticed, sipping their coffee the next morning

如果答案C的as前面没有句号或分号，而只是逗号，我觉得C就不能成为正确答案。理由是：as引导的是从句，如果你将as从句拿走或者放在句尾，就能清楚地看出C的问题，即将两个句子没有任何连词的用逗号连在一起，这在英文语法中，应该是不允许的。

As从句放在句尾，如下：

Clark and Florence , a husband-and wife medical team, worked steadily and efficiently through the night, she noticed that he seemed disoriented ，as they sipped their coffee the next morning。

所以，我觉得，只有A是正确选项，but是连词，后面是分词短语做定语，连词but将两个分句Clark and Florence , a husband-and wife medical team, worked steadily and efficiently through the night和she noticed that he seemed disoriented.

分开。

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作者: smilysnow 时间: 2005-8-24 13:37
A肯定是错的，Sipping的逻辑主语是She，而她不可能喝着他们的咖啡。

作者: howardwang 时间: 2005-8-24 14:04

以下是引用smilysnow在2005-8-24 13:37:00的发言：
A肯定是错的，Sipping的逻辑主语是She，而她不可能喝着他们的咖啡。

不可以说，我喝了你们（大家)的咖啡吗？我觉得可以阿。

就算不可以，怎么解释C的问题呢？

作者: howardwang 时间: 2005-8-24 19:11

还请各位多发表自己的观点吆！

谢谢！

作者: howardwang 时间: 2005-8-24 22:15

给点意见，支持，反对，只要有个说法！

作者: ESeraph 时间: 2005-8-24 23:07

别折腾这道题了，我查了一下，这是道老题，原文but是不在划线部分中的，所以选C

作者: howardwang 时间: 2005-8-24 23:24

非常感谢 ESeraph

这样一来，c就比较完美了。否则，无论如何都难以理解的。

再次感谢！

作者: yalemba2007 时间: 2006-9-11 00:14

我觉得D比C还好. D中AS从句用过去进行时, 主句用过去时,难道不比C中主从句都用过去时好吗?白勇说D改变了强调的重心, 原句中强调的是SHE NOTICED THAT,而D中强调的是HE SEEMED. 的确是改变了强调重心, but so what,原句本来就是有毛病的, 谁也没说原句强调的是she noticed,我就还必须强调she noticed. 或许原句强调的本来就不是最好的呢?

我是不是有点钻牛角尖啊?

----GMAT, 不是GRE, 精解一题, 剩过泛读十题.

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作者: fantasy06 时间: 2006-10-19 05:46

up. D is better.

Discuss...

作者: lbd2006 时间: 2006-10-19 08:11

(D) .... he seemed, she noticed, disoriented

it's awarkwardness , it is not clear like the sentence " she noticed that ... "

作者: zhujinbo 时间: 2009-3-20 16:24

as someone did..,(做了) someone did... 很不符合时态

as someone was doing.,（进行的时候） someone did.. 才对

作者: elric9 时间: 2009-7-22 09:00

作者: ForeverDark 时间: 2009-7-24 18:45
我也认为答案是D。

作者: mars_cheung 时间: 2009-7-26 19:33

我还是觉得C答案对。

as 后面+进行时态当然最好，不过用过去时态也不算错的，大全里面就有这样的例题（大全127）

D 的问题在于后半句，he seemed, she noticed, disoriented. she noticed 作为插入语不常见，而且这种改写改变的原句的意思，原句是“她发现他变了”还是用宾语从句的表达好

关于插入语的用法不太了解，不过

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=23&replyid=160973&id=22268&page=1&skin=0&Star=1

8楼大N braveMBA 的解释很好，我觉得插入语的位置就应该这样才对

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