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作者: GMAT400    时间: 2016-10-20 18:47
标题: SC高分题求教
Nearly unrivaled in their biological diversity, coral reefs provide a host of benefits that includes the supply of protein for people, protecting shorelines, and they contain biochemical sources for new life-saving medicines.

A.        coral reefs provide a host of benefits that includes the supply of protein for people, protecting shorelines,
B.        coral reefs provide a host of benefits: they supply people with protein, they protect the shorelines,
C.        coral reefs provide a host of benefits that include supplying protein for people, as well as shoreline protection,
D.        a coral reef provides a host of benefits; they supply protein for people, the protecting of shorelines,
E.        a coral reef provides a host of benefits, including protein for people, protecting shorelines,


这题的B选项 benefits后面的三个独立句,前两个只用逗号连接,不是属于典型的comma splice或者说run on sentence吗 可是OA是B  求大神指教

作者: Bradz    时间: 2016-10-20 20:55
B没有明显的瑕疵啊,只是这么写比较怪。相比之下,其他几个选项里面,后三句的排列惨不忍睹。。。没有一个稍微工整一点的。。。
作者: Bradz    时间: 2016-10-20 21:01
举个例子

Tom has three balls of different colors; one is black, one is blue, and one is red.

这种句式不用特别的连接吧,所以不能算是run on sentence什么的。
作者: zhouyusu    时间: 2016-12-24 16:38





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