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作者: JackCai_WUDI    时间: 2016-8-24 15:12
标题: og13 130题
130. Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.

(A) while in Germany it is just over 33 percent

(B) compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent

(C) whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany

(D) whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany

(E) compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent


正确答案选c,但是C和D的区分在哪里 不解。。。。

作者: Fiona09    时间: 2016-8-24 17:27
C:正确。whereas来连接两句话比较清晰;介词短语充当地点状语前后对称,位置正确。比较了法国和德国各自的来自于核能的能量。
D: the energy 后面无修饰语,所以指代到了the energy produced in France,法国超过75%的能源来自于核能,然而超过33%的能源(法国能源)来自在德国的核能。逻辑意思不合理;原意对nuclear power并没有修饰语,说是谁的核能,这里in Germany错误的修饰了nuclear power, 本来应该是做produced的状语。



作者: vi.len    时间: 2016-8-24 22:50
语法笔记里解释过了。
D.        由于in Germany位置变成了修饰nuclear power,就变成了“在法国,超过33%的能量来自于德国生产的核能”;同时失去了比较的意味, 这个选项里用的whereas是没意义的。
作者: Sara.Z    时间: 2018-8-25 08:01
这里是"the energy produced.."作为比较对象,所以while后面的主语也应该是energy,排除BE, It指代不清排除A, 然后D说的是“Comes from”而不是“produced”改变句意。




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