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标题: OG16 SC138 关于sc新题的讨论好少呀，求大牛讲解一下 [打印本页]

作者: 1811nh 时间: 2016-6-12 16:15
标题: OG16 SC138 关于sc新题的讨论好少呀，求大牛讲解一下
138. Although she was considered among her contemporaries to be the better poet than
her husband, later Elizabeth Barrett Browning was overshadowed by his success.
(A) Although she was considered among her contemporaries to be the better
poet than her husband, later Elizabeth Barrett Browning was overshadowed
by his success.
(B) Although Elizabeth Barrett Browning was considered among her
contemporaries as a better poet than her husband, she was later
overshadowed by his success.
(C) Later overshadowed by the success of her husband, Elizabeth Barrett
Browning’s poetry had been considered among her contemporaries to be
better than that of her husband.
(D) Although Elizabeth Barrett Browning’s success was later overshadowed
by that of her husband, among her contemporaries she was considered the
better poet.
(E) Elizabeth Barrett Browning’s poetry was considered among her
contemporaries as better than her husband, but her success was later
overshadowed by his.

原句说尽管EBB是个比她丈夫还要好的诗人，她也被他的成功所影响
我认为D选项把原句的句意颠倒了，与AB说的相反，为什么正确选项选择D呢？
求教！

贴下og的解释：
The sentence misuses the locution the better poet. It is acceptable to say a better
poet than but not the better poet than. If you have already mentioned two poets X
and Y, and you want to say that X is better than Y, you can either say X is a better
poet than Y, or simply, X is the better poet.
A This version of the sentence misuses the idiom the better poet, most likely
confusing it with the idiom a better poet than.
B [W]as considered among her contemporaries as is awkward and
unnecessarily creates a potential misreading (she was considered to be
among her contemporaries).
C The subject here is Elizabeth Barrett Browning’s poetry, not Elizabeth
Barrett Browning, so the antecedent of her in her husband could comically
be taken to be Elizabeth Barrett Browning’s poetry. Furthermore, the tense
of had been considered pairs oddly with Later overshadowed. Each seems to
be in reaction to some particular time T—later than T and earlier than T, but
when T was or its significance is never indicated.
D Correct. This version avoids the problems of the other versions.
E This sentence comically compares Elizabeth Barrett Browning’s poetry to
her husband.

作者: turbo563 时间: 2016-6-12 17:42
同学，意思没有相反，但是重点有转移了，但是本着5个里面选最不贱的那个，你就从了吧

作者: jlikel 时间: 2016-6-12 21:47
我也同意楼主观点，按照GMAT一贯习惯，把A选项当成想表达的意思，那么句子重点就应该在，丈夫比她成功上，而D正好反过来了。
among her contemporaries 应该是作为插入成分，虽然插入位置略显奇怪但不至于错误那么严重吧？ OG答案解释说有歧义我不是很懂，求大神解释如何在BD间选择。

作者: 1811nh 时间: 2016-6-13 08:39

turbo563 发表于 2016-6-12 17:42
同学，意思没有相反，但是重点有转移了，但是本着5个里面选最不贱的那个，你就从了吧 ...

可能我表达的不太对，确实是转移了重点，但一般这种情况都会被视为不优的呀，可以解释一下B吗

作者: xenia_q 时间: 2016-6-13 11:07
AB的让步状语意思是不对的：尽管EBB被认为是比她丈夫好的诗人，她的成就还是被他丈夫超越了。D的意思是对的：尽管EBB的成就被她丈夫超越了，但是EBB还是好的诗人。亲，体会一下～

作者: 1811nh 时间: 2016-6-13 13:57

xenia_q 发表于 2016-6-13 11:07
AB的让步状语意思是不对的：尽管EBB被认为是比她丈夫好的诗人，她的成就还是被他丈夫超越了。D的意思是对的 ...

请问为什么AB意思是不对的呢？我感觉只是把重点放在了被超越上

作者: kavinlee 时间: 2016-8-6 11:07
顶楼主！

作者: DebugXY222 时间: 2016-8-6 13:25
顶楼主！

作者: DebugXY222 时间: 2016-8-6 13:25
顶！我也在纠结这道题目

作者: 跆拳九段31 时间: 2016-8-7 22:52
在BD中进行选择的关键在于B中的比较不对等， she was later overshadowed by his success中，she和his success不能比较，应该是her success.可以看D中说的就很正确。

至于重心问题，从句意上看没有改变，不要简简单单根据A的结构来判断，而要根据内在的含义。比如说有的题目中题中A中的主干会变成正确答案的从句部分，这就是内在含义符合逻辑，并且未改变即可，而不是单单的结构问题。

此题排除点在于比较对象是否对等，无需纠结其他点浪费时间。

作者: 拐喵1 时间: 2016-8-7 23:54
前面是平行了，但RON不是说过possessive是adj么？后面的her指代的哪个？不能指代Elizabeth Barrett Browning’s吧？？？不懂

作者: sunny_june 时间: 2016-8-8 04:48

拐喵1 发表于 2016-8-7 23:54
前面是平行了，但RON不是说过possessive是adj么？后面的her指代的哪个？不能指代Elizabeth Barrett Brownin ...

我也是因为这个把后面几个选项排除了。。。坑爹啊，我还没有OG16的书呢。。。
难道GMAT改规则了？？！！

作者: sunny_june 时间: 2016-8-8 05:01
A. consider A B. consider..to be.. 不对
B. consider A B， consider..as.. 不对
C. later overshadowed by... modifies EBB's poetry, 应该是她本人被她老公的成就盖过，不是她的诗
consider .. to be.. 也不对
D. 根据RON的理论--- EBB‘s,所有格， her是没有指代的。。你有去manhattan提问么？
E. 拿poetry 和husband 对比，不对

作者: sunny_june 时间: 2016-8-8 10:44
考古了一下：

“Through this official OG question, by allowing the possessive pronoun to stand good for a subject pronoun namely ‘she’, GMAC has made it clear that the possessive poison is no more a poison; this is perhaps the key takeaway.”
只能说其他选项的错误比这个大，大家代词的问题最后排除吧。。。

http://gmatclub.com/forum/sc-although-she-was-considered-among-her-contemporaries-to-be-the-be-201838.html

作者: Ruichell 时间: 2016-8-16 10:10
有没有大神能够解释一下OG答案中关于B的解释？为什么说这个表达是misleading的呢？解释说会被误解成是she was cosidered to be among her contemporaries. 可是我觉得难道这不是作者想要表达的意思吗？

作者: vi.len 时间: 2016-8-16 10:21

Ruichell 发表于 2016-8-16 10:10
有没有大神能够解释一下OG答案中关于B的解释？为什么说这个表达是misleading的呢？解释说会被误解成是she w ...

she was consider among her comtemporaries.可以翻译成被同时代的人认为是最好的诗人，也可以被翻译成被（从前或者现在的人认为）是那个时代最好的诗人

作者: Ciiiiiiiiii 时间: 2016-8-16 14:36
这个很简单啊，要用正常人的逻辑去理解，不能钻牛角。

AB错在含义上：文章这样写“尽管E超级厉害，但她的成功还是被丈夫的成功掩盖了”不奇怪么？
应该是“尽管她的成功被丈夫的成功掩盖了，但她其实是同辈中成就最高的”比较正常吧

C错在不是poetry被overshadow而是人被overshadow

E错在比较不平行很明显的了

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